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hey i m writing my first ever os tat 2 on devakshi hope u all WL like it n plz pardon fr d mistakes as i m writing in my cell so hre u guys go n yaa my os is inspired from a os sumbdy has written a ni8 out at sonakshi's house or sry if i m mistakn fr d name n yaa u al r wonderful writers so i Stp my bakbak hre PHONECALLS nikki neha n ria all were comming bck aftr shopping fr neha's engagement and there car broke down near dr bose's house they decided to take hr help and all d three sisters wnt to sona's house and rung d door bell. as it was 9 pm in ni8 n yaa quite late to go to sm1's house they were quite nervous aftr sometime elena opened d door n was surprised to see thm see whole heartedly welcumd thm n shouted - aare sona mausi dada sab kaha ho dekho kaun aaya h n in no time d whole bose family were gathered n d living room n was welcoming them n sona introduced them to hr parents n dadi as they hv nt mt aftr sum time nikki told abt y they came n wanted sum hlp listening this asha n bijoy told tat they stay at there place ovrni8 n n d mrng aftr their car gets fixed they cn go nikki n ria instantly agreed as they thought it would be fun neha hesitated bt she was also happy frm inside so agreed n called ishwari to infrm. ishwari also agreed as its nt safe to fr them to travel at ni8 so she said them tat she WL infrm dev once he comes home n also told nikki nt to trouble d bose's n stay like a gud girl bt ishwari frgot to infrm dev. nw aftr d dinner elena n nikki decided tat they wl do smthng adventrous n nt to waste this ni8 so they decided to play truth n dare game. nw hre at ishwari mansion dev came hme late n proceeded to his room thinking all might be slpng. he was already tensed so thought to cl sona as only she is his vry good frnd or mre thinkng this he blushed n called sona hre sona saw hre phn ringing n nikki TLD tat who's calling sona at this late may be hr boy friend hearing tat elena started laughing n sona picked d phn n wnt outside to talk. inside all three sisters wre confused wd elena's behaviour n elena now told thm - iss miss boring ka boyfriend aare isse iski mr aubhodro boss ka hi phn aa sakta h n thn realised wat she told n nikki started hr enquiry aubhodro kaun dev bhaiya n nw she was curious to knw more so she asked plzzz elena hume apna dost samajh ke batao ki kya baat h akhir hume v to bhabi cahiye. now elena took up the clue n said aare aur kya bataye raat ke do baje in dono ki unromantic convo se sone ni milta h till thn neha the ever so serious chap also got involved wd them n asked kya dev bhaiya raat ke do baye dr bose se baat krte h bt nw sona came back n they had to stop their convo n ria asked kiska phn tha n sona casually replyd mr dixit ka n nw elena nw asked to tumhare mr dixit kyu phn kiye the raat ke 12 bje sona again said tat kch ni bas puch re the neha ka engagement ke liye kaise dressup karna cahiye hearing this all the 3 sisters' mouth were wide open due to d sudden shock tat sona gave them n watching them like that wat she said tried to cvr up by saying elena tu na kch v bolti h mai bas unki employ hu iss liye called listening this elena said ohh plz tu jitna mjhe pta h tu doctor h, dressup krne ka course kab se kr liya nw again her phn rang n this time before she could say something nikki picked up the called n put it on loudspeaker n signaled sona to speak sona nervously said h...hel...lo m...r d..ix...t on d other dev said aare ap aise kyu baat kr ri h anyways leave it maine apko ye kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ki apne jaisa kaha waisa koi dress ni h mre paas so agar aap mre sath kal shoping karne chalti as u knw ki i dnt knw anthing so if u can hearing this nikki was going to shout bt neha n ria held her in time n asked sona to say yes by nodding their head. sona on the other hand was totally red blushing n jst could managed to say o...h...k dev said thn done kl aap mre ghr ayiye phr decide krte h kab niklna h ok waise aap aj kch bol kyu ni ri h mai hi bole jaa ra hu aap jante h naa aap se baat kiye bina mjhe nind ni aati n aap bt nw sona cut him n d middle n said as she dnt want to get embarrassed in front of his sisters n also didnt want to hear elena's taunts so she said its ohk mr dixit kal baat krte h bye n cut the call n put the phn n slp mood so tat dev dnt call her again now told tat she is going to slp n covered her face wd the blanket n again could here the gasps of all four n elena knowingly said dekha kya boss employ ko shopping krane le jate h kash mre v koi aisa boss hota n laughed. so how is it guys let me know as its my first try n if u say i WL write a 2nd part to it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice and lovely os.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
pl do continue. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Too cute... I hope we can see this in the show. Would be too adorable and hilarious.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krystle123

nice and lovely os.😛

aww Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super and cute os
Plz continue and update fast ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice os... I hope CVs will use this scene and hope to get a scene like this..beautifully written...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: uthraa.m

Super and cute os

Plz continue and update fast ...


thanks n yeap WL surely continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavyaanu

Too cute... I hope we can see this in the show. Would be too adorable and hilarious.


hehe thanks dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: uthraa.m

Super and cute os

Plz continue and update fast ...


Thank you n WL surely try to update soon

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