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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Saki dialogues was superb 👏
Awesome update 👏
Loved it

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sonisweety
Dialogues superbbb...
Story awesome...
No words to describe...

🤗 soni...
Iam really happy after reading your reply.it was tension full chapter for me.the realisation of dev..
Thanks a lot for your support

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Saki dialogues was superb 👏
Awesome update 👏
Loved it

Sujay.
The dialogue writing was a tough task for me.i changed the dialogues twice.
But after reading your reply iam really happy.
Thanks for your support

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EJF_FAN

@EJF_FAN

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Nice work dear.. keep it up! 👍🏼

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

It was awesome update Ami.. I just loved it.. Soo finally dev realised his feelings for sona.. Wow.. Will sona get to know about his realisation.. That was cool his realisation.. The scene was perfect.. I can't understand Hindi.. But I absorbed the impact of the scenes.. You created it beautifully...

With love...

Kam..

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Thanks a lot for your support friends.
I will give you individual reply soon.

With lots of love
Shamina

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Hi...

Very interesting update it was. The dialogues were bang on. Dev's possessiveness for Sonakshi and then his hiring detective for that says it all. It was nice by the way.

Sona fainted well you scared me there. But that was bound to happen given the negligence she is showing towards her food and taking stress because of Mr. Dixit.

But hey that finally made him realize place of her in his life. Mr Dixit please see in her eyes you will get all your answer and please confess soon..

So I liked it alot dear. Nice update. Thanks for pm Shamina😛

Edited by muktai - 9 years ago