Intzar,part 5 updated in page-10 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

It was awesome update Ami.. I just loved it.. Soo finally dev realised his feelings for sona.. Wow.. Will sona get to know about his realisation.. That was cool his realisation.. The scene was perfect.. I can't understand Hindi.. But I absorbed the impact of the scenes.. You created it beautifully...

With love...

Kam..

kamila my friend 🤗
Writing dev's realisation.it was tough job for me.i changed the dialogues twice.creating such a sequence and i was worried for replies.because the realisation is little earlier.but for my story it was needed.
Iam really sorry for using hindi dialogues.for me to write that dialogues in English it was difficult for me.
But i will try to write the whole story in English.
Thanks a lot for your reply and support.
With lots of love
Shamina

Originally posted by: andy1245

superb

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi...

Very interesting update it was. The dialogues were bang on. Dev's possessiveness for Sonakshi and then his hiring detective for that says it all. It was nice by the way.

Sona fainted well you scared me there. But that was bound to happen given the negligence she is showing towards her food and taking stress because of Mr. Dixit.

But hey that finally made him realize place of her in his life. Mr Dixit please see in her eyes you will get all your answer and please confess soon..

So I liked it alot dear. Nice update. Thanks for pm Shamina😛

Hi mukta... 🤗
It is a beautiful review.
Some times we love some one but we will didn't recognize it.but when they go away from us or they are in danger we will recognize their place in our life.
Confession part will happen soon
Thanks for your reply
With lots of love
Shamina

Originally posted by: mena_k

Loved every bit of every part.

Thank you, it was so very real 😊

Thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: priyanvs

awesome episode dear loved it

Priya..thanks a lot for your reply

Waiting for your replies...

Nice update dear
Loved it
Finally he realised his feelings towards sona. He was worried for her. He left when her family came. Waiting for their confession. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Loved it
Finally he realised his feelings towards sona. He was worried for her. He left when her family came. Waiting for their confession. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot friend.
The confession will happen soon

Read all the parts in one go

Originally posted by: gowripriya

Read all the parts in one go

It's nice to c dev's insecure and concern when it comes to sona u wrote it so well and the title intezaar I am waiting for de's confession good work dear and haan do cont soon😳

Gowri...
Title intzar is saying their love story.because it is not easy for them .they take time for it.
Par ek din in dono ki pyar ko milega apna manzil...
Thanks a lot for your reply
Lots of love
Shamina