Dev-Sona OS: I don't know Ms Bose

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EJF_FAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow! I totally see DevAkshi written all over it!! Beautiful!

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@raksbasu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautifully penned down! The emotions were so well demonstrated...I just loved it..
Dev's clueless, confused state was something so like Dev😳
Very nice...
Keep the good work up😳

p.s. I've seen u before also, i think🤔 Maybe in Sadda haq forum🤔 Sorry, i maybe wrong🤔
But i think i've😳

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Just one word to sum it all - Wow⭐️👏

The emotions, love, hesistance - everything has been put so well in place. Absolutely amazing. For once didn't I think that this Dev and Sonakshi were not what they are in the show. You kept their essence alive😳

Really beautiful😳 Please do write more on Devakshi. . Will be waiting😳

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome and beautiful
Loved it
Written so well..:)

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Zaya.hp

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Posted: 9 years ago

That was BRILLIANT. And you just wrote it while coming back home? Wow!

Beautiful OS. Seems like you've understood Dev in and out! His confusion was so tangible. And this OS seems perfectly in sync with the story and characterizations of the leads. And when he realized it is LOVE that he had for Sonakshi, I got goosebumps. And the last two lines blew me off! Seriously! Perfct to the T.

Your vocabulary and flow is really good!

P.S. It is breath. It came out as breadth. Or can breadth be used? I really don't know. I am beginner. Correct me if I am wrong! Sorry in advance. 😊

Edited by Zaya.hp - 9 years ago

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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

This. Is. Brilliant.

Like am screaming...THIS IS BRILLIANT!

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c85rie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautifully written. You have captured Sona's heartache and hope so well. And Dev, finally he acts on his feelings he has for Sona(while being still clueless). I loved this part

"I don't know"

And the last line had gr8 promise.