Dev-Sona OS: I don't know Ms Bose - Page 2

Originally posted by: saumiee

Just one word to sum it all - Wow⭐️👏

The emotions, love, hesistance - everything has been put so well in place. Absolutely amazing. For once didn't I think that this Dev and Sonakshi were not what they are in the show. You kept their essence alive😳

Really beautiful😳 Please do write more on Devakshi. . Will be waiting😳

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome and beautiful
Loved it
Written so well..:)

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

That was BRILLIANT. And you just wrote it while coming back home? Wow!

Beautiful OS. Seems like you've understood Dev in and out! His confusion was so tangible. And this OS seems perfectly in sync with the story and characterizations of the leads. And when he realized it is LOVE that he had for Sonakshi, I got goosebumps. And the last two lines blew me off! Seriously! Perfct to the T.

Your vocabulary and flow is really good!

P.S. It is breath. It came out as breadth. Or can breadth be used? I really don't know. I am beginner. Correct me if I am wrong! Sorry in advance. 😊

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

Beautifully penned !

Originally posted by: Divya1503

Beautiful!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Beautiful OS... 😳

Originally posted by: c85rie

Beautifully written. You have captured Sona's heartache and hope so well. And Dev, finally he acts on his feelings he has for Sona(while being still clueless). I loved this part

"I don't know"

And the last line had gr8 promise.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

For a clueless guy, Dev is able to emote well in your story line...Good job.

Originally posted by: krystle123

its just awesome and beautiful👏

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice OS dear

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome :)

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo

AmaIzng

Originally posted by: dmgomg

I loved this! Please do write more :)