Dev-Sona OS: I don't know Ms Bose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: priyanvs
nice os dear

Thank You Priyanvs ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: raksbasu
Beautifully penned down! The emotions were so well demonstrated...I just loved it..
Dev's clueless, confused state was something so like Dev😳
Very nice...
Keep the good work up😳

p.s. I've seen u before also, i think🤔 Maybe in Sadda haq forum🤔 Sorry, i maybe wrong🤔
But i think i've😳

NAAAW RAKSBASU! YOU MADE MY DAY ❤️
You would be correct! I did write quite a bit on the Sadda Haq forum (and the KY2 forum 😆) a very long time ago, but yes I did! Am kind of blushing that you remember me 😆

Thank You again 😳

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mg1997

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Devakshi to keep you company on the train! Nice ...

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dmgomg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I loved this! Please do write more :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

I typed all the responses to the comments (well most of the comments😆), but then the connection to IF dropped out :(. Trusty ole IF

Originally posted by: saumiee
Just one word to sum it all - Wow⭐️👏
The emotions, love, hesistance - everything has been put so well in place. Absolutely amazing. For once didn't I think that this Dev and Sonakshi were not what they are in the show. You kept their essence alive😳
Really beautiful😳 Please do write more on Devakshi. . Will be waiting😳

THANK YOU! IT MAKES ME REALLY HAPPY WHEN PEOPLE TELL ME I WRITE ACCORDING TO THE CHARACTER SKETCH!! So thank you thank you [L ]❤️

Originally posted by: cutie15
Awesome and beautiful
Loved it
Written so well..:)

Thank You cutie, glad you think its well written ❤️

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp
That was BRILLIANT. And you just wrote it while coming back home? Wow!

Beautiful OS. Seems like you've understood Dev in and out! His confusion was so tangible. And this OS seems perfectly in sync with the story and characterizations of the leads. And when he realized it is LOVE that he had for Sonakshi, I got goosebumps. And the last two lines blew me off! Seriously! Perfct to the T.

Your vocabulary and flow is really good!

P.S. It is breath. It came out as breadth. Or can breadth be used? I really don't know. I am beginner. Correct me if I am wrong! Sorry in advance. 😊

ZAYA.HP! YOU NEED TO BE MY BETA! In all seriousness, would like to do so? 😆 You are completely right, i was thinking about my breadth track subjects at uni and not breath. Clearly am a bubblehead 😆

I actually ran out of data so i decided to write this instead 😆

I always look forward to your reviews Zaya.hp

INFINITE AMOUNT OF LOVE ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...
Beautifully penned !

Thank You Lasya! ❤️

I PROMISE TO GET TO ALL THE OTHER REPLIES EVENTUALLY! I SHAPATH 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ratika89
This. Is. Brilliant.
Like am screaming...THIS IS BRILLIANT!

Naaaw! THANK YOU RATIKA! (Yes i am screaming as well😆)

Originally posted by: Divya1503
Beautiful!! ❤️

THANK YOU DIVYA ❤️

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69
Beautiful OS... 😳

Thank You babes ❤️

Originally posted by: c85rie
Beautifully written. You have captured Sona's heartache and hope so well. And Dev, finally he acts on his feelings he has for Sona(while being still clueless). I loved this part
"I don't know"

And the last line had gr8 promise.

Thank You so much babes! I am glad you think I understand Dev, but I dont really know... I kind of just put myself in his shoes and see how I could react? Ahaha Thank You again ❤️

Originally posted by: JazzyM
For a clueless guy, Dev is able to emote well in your story line...Good job.

Ahahahah, what can I say. I did give him a brain I susppose 😆

ThankYou ❤️

Originally posted by: krystle123
its just awesome and beautiful👏

Thank You love, much appreciated ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mg1997
Devakshi to keep you company on the train! Nice ...

I blew all my data on watching the episodes on the train😆

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Nice OS dear

Thank You love ❤️

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Awesome :)

Thank You ❤️

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo
AmaIzng

Much Thanks ❤️

Originally posted by: dmgomg
I loved this! Please do write more :)

Thank You so much ❤️

After exams I surely will!

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Astha agarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

i like the confusing dev... he looks damm cute when he is confused..

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Srijanee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Confused Dev😆 So cute

Thanks for the pm

Luv Sri😳

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Sonia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

And I thought orange and a new chapter were brilliant! Oh my goodness! This one is an absolute beauty. Honestly, I mean this is so apt! I can totally imagine the entire scene playing out! Honestly, you should write a second part to this one, for closure. It's such a stunning piece.

Love,
Sonia

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