OS: A Sangeet Ceremony - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jasleen.saggi

I am speechless after reading this OS. The dialogues and the emotions are so well written. You nailed it.. The romance between Sonakshi and Dev was just outstandingly written. Such a fabulous writer on this forum. Really looking forward to more of your stories.. Really great job :)

Thanks a lot dear! It means so much to read reviews, and I can't thank you enough. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96

This was so so beautiful


And omggg
You're a fan of Paradise?
Its like my most favourite book ever and Matthew Farrel is just WOWW
Im so happy i found a fellow fan 😆

Awesome OS 👏
Loved it ❤️

Fan? Fan nahi fanatic! I have read that book, on my phone around 200 times and I am not even kidding. 😆😆 Thanks a lot man!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: saumiee

Naj! How do you manage to write so well👏

The flow of words in your writing is beautiful, all the readers get totally involved with the story😊 I can literally imagine every story happening right infront of me😳
Also, I love the way you have hints hidden in ur OSes
This one was intense☺️ Lovely😳

Thank you so much dear! Even I love giving hints. 😆 Kamaal hai, everyone is talking about hints, and this one had no hints. Wait, was there a hint. 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

Stunning !

You made me speechless bro :)

Lassi is speechless! 😲 Waah. Thanks dear! 😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: cutie15

Oh god this one was insanely hot and so awesome
I loved this soo much..!
The dance and the moves
Dev was quite bold nd he finally said it
Then their kiss giving us all the goosebumps
Superb job

Bold toh woh hai hi. 😆😆 Thanks dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

It's beautiful. Write more intense stuff! You are very good at it. And you've rocked with this one. 😊

Not sure, how much I will write. But, I will try. Thanks a lot! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Akhu

This is really breath taking...amazing dear...and I looove sona's outfit...ha haa

Thank you so much dear! 😃 Outfit is all Gargi. She chose it, and made the whole banner. 😳👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: serendipity.

NAJ does it againnn! 😃 ❤️

this was another beautiful beautiful piece, Naj! absolutely loved it! idk which one i love more... i guess this one 😛 you know damn it but i had a pretty similar plot in mind... like towards the ending, when Dev is kind of showing his authority over her and being possessive over her... hating other eyes being on her... im glad you didnt go there in detail 😛 i can try... but hamara dimaag almost same direction mein hi chalta hai! 😉

REALLY loved you should have seen that grin on my face when in the beginning Dev playfully asks her if shes jealous... all in all FANTABULOUS! glad that the Sona in your stories is OUR sona.. the one WE were always fond of and not the one the CVs forced upon our heads recently! :)

AHAAN! SER IS HERE! 😆 Thanks man. Thanks a lot. We do? Great minds think alike Ser. 😎😉😆
I couldnt write Dev being jealous! I just couldnt. 😆 Of Neel I mean. I found it impossible to write it, I told you na, I wrote and deleted that part. 😆
You should try man!
I know, I cannot write about Sonakshi being all dreamy, and mushy. 🥱😆😆 I like the headstrong Sonakshi a lot, and the cute and naughty and the khadoos Dev. Dev ke toh har rang pasand hai humein, santra bhi.😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
This is so intense and passionate 😳
I don't have words to praise you najma m just spellbound
Luv luv luv luv luv it❤️
Do pm me for the next😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
It is such a beautiful OS 😳 I was imagining Devakshi all the time

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