OS: A Sangeet Ceremony

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Res :P (BTW.. u made my night..err...kuch bhi mat samaj.. LOL :P)

Unress****

Wowww!!! Naj...I loved it..❤️ 👏Thank you for fulfilling the popular demand! 😛😆

This wasn't mush actually. It was pretty intense and passion driven. This is just what me wants err..aka everyone wants..🤣 Some humor + love/passion/romance. Keep writing like this na.? Gargi... Loved the banner.❤️

Edited by ---Anu--- - 9 years ago

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EJF_FAN

@EJF_FAN

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

You know what i like about your writing is the pace with which you write... Slow and steady... then very smoothly increasing the intensity with just the right word and expression!

Its B-E-A-Utiful!! 👏

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Antora

@andy1245

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

awesome plz pm me fr ur future updates

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

First - Good job By anna 👏

And this was intense 😉

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jskjsk

@jskjsk

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

I am speechless after reading this OS. The dialogues and the emotions are so well written. You nailed it.. The romance between Sonakshi and Dev was just outstandingly written. Such a fabulous writer on this forum. Really looking forward to more of your stories.. Really great job :)

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This was so so beautiful

And omggg

You're a fan of Paradise?
Its like my most favourite book ever and Matthew Farrel is just WOWW

Im so happy i found a fellow fan 😆

Awesome OS 👏

Loved it ❤️

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Naj! How do you manage to write so well👏

The flow of words in your writing is beautiful, all the readers get totally involved with the story😊 I can literally imagine every story happening right infront of me😳

Also, I love the way you have hints hidden in ur OSes

This one was intense☺️ Lovely😳

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Lasya

@Dexterity

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Stunning !

You made me speechless bro :)

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Oh god this one was insanely hot and so awesome
I loved this soo much..!
The dance and the moves
Dev was quite bold nd he finally said it
Then their kiss giving us all the goosebumps
Superb job