OS: A Cute Pickup In The Rain

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mayu1982
@naj dear loved your style of writing
But I have one complaint why don't u write fast- fast ?
I am reading so many stories of yours
Want to know what happened next ?

Thanks. I wrote two yesterday, how faster can I get? And, writing depends on my mood. 😆

My imagination stopped there. You can imagine whatever you want to imagine.

They kissed, they went home, they danced. Anything you want. 😉

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: -Haju-
Awww such an adorable os
I loved the cheerful and mischievous Dev
And Ending was my favorite
Can't wait to read more

I have written lots of OSes on DevAkshi. Check those out in my Index. I'll write as often as I can. 😉 Thanks!

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur
Too good. Different but beautiful...👏 Would love to see DevAkshi doing something like this in the show.😳

I wish too. Thanks. 😆

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Lasya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

CVs ! Watch out ! Another piece for you! Seekho kuch 😡

On a serious note ...

It is another brilliant piece of work from you Naj , and trust me ... Future mein if I ever have a bf ... I look forward to something like this happening... ☺️

Actually ,rains are not my cup of tea! Being a resident of coastal area, it has been terrible...Rains are unbearable,esp cyclones which are abundant in Bay of Bengal (cause destruction - leaving apart the monsoons )

But after reading your story ... things may not remain same ... Opinions badalne mein zyaada waqt nahi lagta... 😳

Thanks a lot 🤗

Edited by lasyap3 - 9 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

You write the most perfect n beautiful sequences for DevAkshi..Loved this one!

Hope cvs rlly give us something like this😊

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: aishu_divan
You write the most perfect n beautiful sequences for DevAkshi..Loved this one!
Hope cvs rlly give us something like this😊

Thanks. I hope they give better ones. 😆

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: lasyap3
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CVs ! Watch out ! Another piece for you! Seekho kuch 😡

On a serious note ...

It is another brilliant piece of work from you Naj , and trust me ... Future mein if I ever have a bf ... I look forward to something like this happening... ☺️

Actually ,rains are not my cup of tea! Being a resident of coastal area, it has been terrible...Rains are unbearable,esp cyclones which are abundant in Bay of Bengal (cause destruction - leaving apart the monsoons )

But after reading your story ... things may not remain same ... Opinions badalne mein zyaada waqt nahi lagta... 😳

Thanks a lot 🤗

Thanks a lot Lasya! 😳😳

With your boyfriend? 😆

Kahani hai bhai. Real life aur kahani mein farak hota hai. 😆😆

I understand. Especially in that region, rains may not be a pleasant occurrence.

But, we aren't really used to SO MUCH heat, in summer, and this year was bad. So rains are a welcome change.

Thanks, agar meri story ne tum par asar kiya toh.

Love

Naj