SS : Jab dil ke faisle dimaag se hote hai ! Part 12 pg 45..Upd.02.10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: sririt
So beautiful

Thanks a lot !! :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: krystle123
what a sweet and emotional confession. awesome update. 👏 continue soon please😛

Thank you so muchhh !!!!😊

Im so glad u guys liked it :)

Yes i will try to update soon !!

Thank you :)

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arshiayanzaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: shdiksha
Amazing part
Emotional and sweet confession part
Thanks for pm

Hey !!!!

Thanks a lot :)

N you are most wecome 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl
" Sona all this is very new for me...I dont even know all this that i am doing is the right way to do it or no...All i know is i can't stay without you...
Pllzz don't go " again a wave of fear and helplessness spread across his face...
" Sona the decisin is yours...
Whether you wanna go or stay here...I want you to stay...Call me selfish or whatever but I WANT YOU WITH ME... i wont force you but i had to make sure before you leave we have this talk..
I dont know where you fit in my life right now...
All i know is that everything else will fall apart if you leave...
Bohot jaruri tha tumhe yeh batana ki aisa ho gaya..."
He said with a pride on his face..he was happy and proud to embrace his feelings for her...
" I know mai bohot buddhu hoon yeh sabme, confused bhi and i have no idea how this works and maybe i will take months to understand it but...he paused searching for words to phrase it..
"Don't go , please"have a little faith in me
and a little patience. Please." He looked so vulnerable..

Simply waow👏
I cud visualise dev saying these...
Brilliant writing...

Thanks for the pm sunaina

Luv
Sri

Thank you so so so much 😊

I really wanted to get Dev's confused feelings right without going out of his character😆

And im so so so glad u liked it...😊

Thanks a lot 😊

N ur most welcome :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Its superb..

Thanks a lot dear :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Pilu05
Yaar what a confession ...totally love it

Yaar hope cvs read .

Ok airport na sahi any other place but dialogue ditto aisa ho

Kuchh naa sahi but yeh zaroor ho that ...

" Zindagi mein ab tak jitani baar kitchen mein nhi gaya
hounga usse 10 times jyada ghus chuka hoon in 3
mahino mein...Tumse milane , tumhe dekhane ke liye "

I extremely attracted on this line...so true it is. Lol

Awww thats so sweet of you to say that :)

Thanks a ton dear :)

Really means a lot :)

And yaah abt that line 😆 i really wanted to put it but wasnt sure about the comedy timing in this situation and then i just did...

Im glad u liked it :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: mayu1982
Hahah so cute and intense confession

Thanks a lot dear :) 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: aditi07
Superb update.. Dev's dialogues.. the pace of story..very well written and apt.. awesome flow!
It was like as if it had to happen in show also.. the dialogues would have flown like this!
pls update soon and add me to ur PM list😃

Thank you so so so much dear :)

It means a lot 😊

Im so glad u liked it..!!!

And yes i will defo PM u abt my next update...

Thanks a ton dear 😊