SS : Jab dil ke faisle dimaag se hote hai ! Part 12 pg 45..Upd.02.10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys !!!
Im shaina :)
This my first try at a short story...
It goes on the same lines as our show ...
Even the initial promos said " kya khote hai kya paate hai jab dil ke faisle dimag se hote hai " ...
So here is a short story as to how will our Devakshi figure it out their future , by following their heart or their brain..
Or will they ever figure it out or no...


SS : Jab dil ke faisle dimaag se hote hai ...
Nikki : Maa chalu aap mere saath aapko kuch dikhana hai !
Ishwari : arey haaa haan aa rahi hoon , par aisa kya dikhana hai tumhe mujhe
Nikki : maa aap sawal mat kar karo bus chalo...
Jo itane din se iss ghar mein ho raha...
Before she could complete she heard dev and sona fighting...
She tought may be her plan worked and she took ishwari in their direction...

Dev : Tum aise kaise haa kar sakti hoon sona ( he was furious and hurt and the same time )
Sona : kyu nhi kar sakti dev..saare faisle lene ka haq sir tumhe hi hai mujhe nhi...
Dev : tumne engagement ke liye haa kar di damn it !
Yeh koi choti baat nhi hai yeh jante huye ki mai tumse...
Sona : tumhari bhi to engagement hai na next week...
Maine tumhare decision ko support nhi kiya ????
Dev : Tum jaanti ho mere reasons sona...baat ko samjho
Sona : haaan haaan har baar mai hi samjhu ...
Tum faisle lete aaye ho hamesha n mai maanti aayi hoon...
Tumhe tumhari maa ke khushiyon ki chinta hai unki khushi sabse pehele hoti hai tumhare liye fir chahe tumhe uske liye kuch bhi na kurbaan karna pade..
Mere bhi mom dad hai ... mai bhi unki khushi chahti hoon aur iss baar tum agar apne bete hone ka farz nibha rahe ho toh mai bhi beti hone ka farz nibhaungi...tum iss baar mujhe nhi rok sakte...





This is just a small part as to how the story is gonna shape up...
Pllzzz let me know guys if should continue...
Hope u guys like the idea 😳




INDEX

Part 1 : Page 3
Part 2 : Page 6
Part 3 : Page 9
Part 4 : Page 12
Part 5 : Page 14
Part 6 : Page 18
Part 7 : Page 22
Part 8 : Page 29
Part 9 : Page 33
Part 10 : Page 38
Part 11 : Page 40
Part 12: Page 45
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adi35 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A good start
plz continue
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear
pls continue soon
Sassii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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seems intresting
update soon dear .

sririt thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start, so Ishwari is gonna know I guess. Nice. Please PM me after next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Really looking forward to this story
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautiful yaar

In featured happening just like this

By the way

Hi Shaina, I am Pilu

and Heartiest welcome to the forum yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it very much
continue pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg u shud totally continue with this... Can't wait to read more... Plz pm me when you update😳
BTW... I too was and am an arshi and devakshi fan...😳

Luv Sri😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it seems interesting😊waiting for next part

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