Dancing To Her Tunes [DevAkshi OS]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Since you guys have been such sweethearts, one more story for the week.

My contribution for the celebration of 50 successful episodes of this show on Monday.

Its from a party at Dev's place, reason is undecided.

Maybe he won Business Man of The Year Award 20xx

Hope you like it. Dont forget to comment and let your opinions show, I am open to constructive feedback!!

-Tannu 👍🏼

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Sona:

I was shocked by the number of people inside Mr. Dixit's place. I caught a glimpse of Neha and walked towards her, gently pushing people out of my way to reach the girl.

"Did you ever imagine him throwing a successful party?" I said as soon I stood beside her. She shook her head no. There's was no sign of Dev though. It'd be a miracle if I was able to find him in this crowd. "He's over there talking to a girl. A real one." Neha chuckled, pointing at Dev. He then continued talking.

Dev:

I didn't pay any attention to this conversation, I found myself staring at the pretty lass who was in the middle of the dance floor (the living room). She was dancing like there's no tomorrow. She caught everybody's attention, including mine. I couldn't help but notice how a few people were staring at her. Somehow, someway, that didn't please me. I had the urge to walk up to them and tell them to back off. But they did nothing wrong. My illusions sometimes get the best of me.

Delusional.

"Dude, just dance with her." Someone suddenly blurted out.

"What?"

"You're staring at her." He said.

"I am." I muttered.

"Go and dance with her."

"No."

"Why?"

"I don't know how to dance." I hissed. He laughed at me.

"Okay then." He shrugged. "Let's stay here and wait till some other guy sweeps her off her feet, that's cool with me."

He smiled. I glared at him then sighed. I eventually walked over to her.

"I hope you don't mind me dancing with you." I said as soon as I reached her.

"Why? You feeling lonely now?" She did her sweet smile as she swayed her hips to the beat, me trying to catch up with her.

"I was." I smiled. The warmth between us kept growing as we danced to a fast beat, I'm already starting to feel the sweat on my forehead. We moved in sync (I was trying my best though) and I can't deny how I'm enjoying it. I let her take the lead. She speeds up her moves as the beat speeds up. She slows down when the beat softens. My heartbeats were strong and fast, just like our moves. Each step I took matched hers. And every time I look at the girl in front of me, I can't help but smile.

I am suddenly alert by the people's cheers, I noticed that everyone was watching us. I continued to follow up with Dr. Bose, wishing that this song would never end, we would just stay like this.

We got the point where she was so close to me that our hands were touching as we danced. Her hair was covering her face but I could easily see her sparkling eyes and a blush you can only see when you squint. She looked up at me.

"You're too tall for the others. I might have to be your dance partner for the whole night." She whined. I laughed, continuing to dance, I never thought that this would be so easy but I didn't know how she felt. I'm feeling insecure about what I'm doing right now, probably nervous. Maybe they were cheering for 'her' because she's amazing. Damn it, I'm really trying to please her. I looked at her.

"I am such a terrible dancer." I admitted.

"You're okay." She said. "I do appreciate the effort though."

"Thanks."

"No problem." She smiled. And the beat stopped.

And so did my heartbeat.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Should've been a little longerrr!
I wanted to read more of this 😆😳

Loved it very much! We should seriously have another dance sequence, as the first one was hit!

Anyway, loved it, amazing work 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .GirlNextDoor.

Should've been a little longerrr!

I wanted to read more of this 😆😳

Loved it very much! We should seriously have another dance sequence, as the first one was hit!

Anyway, loved it, amazing work 👏


An immense thank you to you for always been so supportive on me since I've entered this forum 🤗

As for the length of the story, sorry yaar!

I was trying to write two stories side by side so they are short but I feel good enough to give a context 😆

Yeppp! Shaheer and Erica were brilliant in that scene. Surely would love another spectacular performance from them ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I genuinely imagine shaheer nd Erica 's first dance sequence when I was reading this...it was superb 👏 👏 ... Thank u dear for giving us another dance sequence
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

I genuinely imagine shaheer nd Erica 's first dance sequence when I was reading this...it was superb 👏 👏 ... Thank u dear for giving us another dance sequence


Awww..thanks for such a sweet reply 🤗
You are welcome. Hope to keep writing and entertaining you guys like this 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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FANTTASTIC! You're writing style never ceases to amaze me!
Short and sweet.

Should have been longer! Would loved to read more from you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWWW how could you write so beautifully its adorable yaar😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTme0w


An immense thank you to you for always been so supportive on me since I've entered this forum 🤗

As for the length of the story, sorry yaar!

I was trying to write two stories side by side so they are short but I feel good enough to give a context 😆

Yeppp! Shaheer and Erica were brilliant in that scene. Surely would love another spectacular performance from them ❤️


My pleasure! 🤗

It's fine... I don't mind another story 😆
Dev/Shaheer was just...
And Erica looked stunning 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tannuu ❤️
Love love love love it 😳
Amazing OS
Can totally imagine Dev and Sonakshi.

Cant wait to read more Os's from u on DevAkshi <3
Keep writing and showing ur talent everywhere 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

FANTTASTIC! You're writing style never ceases to amaze me!
Short and sweet.

Should have been longer! Would loved to read more from you!


Thanks a lot. Coming from a talented author herself, this means a lot!!

I agree it should have been longer but it had more impact if I left it till here ❤️

Hope we get another DevAkshi dance soon 😳

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