Devakshi SS Pyar Ke Rang PART5+ IMP NOTE PG18 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice teaser..update soon


Thanks for reading
I'll update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART1

HOSPITAL

Dev left office quickly and was on his way home when he got a call from Neha.
Neha: bhai mei maa ko hospital le ja rahi hu.
Dev: Kiya hua maa the toh hai,
Neha : bhai please hospital ao directly , Mujhe dar lag raha hai.
Dev:mei bas Nikal chuka hu.
Neha: OK bhai jald ana.

Meanwhile Neha reached the hospital with her mom n Ishwari got admitted.
After sometime Dev reached the hospital.
He found Neha waiting in the corridor.
As soon as she saw Dev she went and hugged him and starts crying.
Neha: bhai maa ,
Dev : Kay hua maa ko,
Neha : Andar hai doctors operate kar rahe hai

Jus then Dr Sinha came out .
Dev went to him
Dr : she is fine now, but I need to talk to you.
Dev: sure.
Dev turns to Neha,
Dev: ja kar maa ke pas ruk , mei doctor she baat kar ke ate hu.
Neha nods and goes .

Dr: Mr Dixit, apke maa ki tabiyat bhot kamzor hai, she is weak, and needs proper rest and nutrition.
Dev: so what do you suggest doctor.
Dr: you should let her stay in the hospital for a few days till her Heath improves.
Dev: no doctor who Yahya nai rahegi,
App ek kam kijiye, unhe ek doctor appoint kro, jo regularly un ka checkup kre, n al. I jus don't want her to stay in the hospital.
Dr: in that case if u want , ek doctor regular checkup n medication ke liye hoga.
Dev: okay, I hope that will be fine.
Dr: sure.


HOME
In th evening Ishwari got discharged and was taken home by Dev and Neha.
Dev : maa please Apna Khayal Rakho nai toh apko hospital mei admit Homa hoga.
Maa: nahi , Mujhe woh hospital bilkul acha nahi Lagta.
Neha: toh maa apko Apna Khayal Rakhna Hoya .
Niki n Riya come to iswaris room.
Niki : maa Kay hua tha apko , ao hospital kyun gayi thi.
Riya: ha maa hum jab college we ghar aye apn Nai the.
Niki : hum bhi Dar Gaye na ma.
Dev : ma please hamare liye Apna Khayal Rakho.
Finally after having an emotional moment, they retire to their rooms to let iswari rest.



NEXT DAY
DEV'S OFFICE
Dev was busy working on some file , when Tina entered and gave him details about the meetings in line.
After a few hectic meetings. Dev ordered a cup of coffee.
This was the 3rd coffee in a day.

A peon came to the canteen.
Peon: ek coffee Dev sir ke liye, I ke style mei Banao ek dim strong .
Person at the store: an sir ke much Jyada hi coffee hui hai .
Peon : ha subha we 3rd cup.
Sonakshi who was jus nearby heard this conversation.
Sona: wat 3rd cup, wait a min, app fresh lime juice Banao.
Person: but ma'am , sir ka order hai.
Sona: Kisi b sir ka Ho, mei company ki nutritioist hu, aise Kisi ko bhi itni coffee nai Pine de skit.
Peon: nai nai , Dev sir gussa hoge.
Sona: coffee not allowed.
She however managed to send the person with a fresh lime juice.
Dev was so engrossed in his work forgot about the coffee.
When he was served juice.
He wondered how did the juice come.
He asked tina , on which he got the details.
Dev: who ever it is, send them to my cabin.


HOME
A doctor was now visiting iswari regularly.
Dr: Neha , we performed a few test for ma'am yesterday,
So reports aagayi hai.
Neha: toh Kay hai reports mei.
Dr: unke diet ka special Khayal Rakhna hoga, you should to consult a nutritioist.
Neha: ap suggest kro koi nutritioist.
Dr: Meri ek intern hai , I mu say she is the best.
Neha: okay Mujhe unke contact details dijiye.
Dr:sure, gave her all the details.


OFFICE

Neha calls Dev
Neha: bhai apse Imp baat kar I hai
Dev: kya hua maa thi hai
Neha: us bare mei hi bhai, doctor ka kehna hai, humien maa ke liye ek full gym Nutritioist ki Jarurat hai.
Dev: oh (thinking)
Neha: bhai me ek doctor suggest ki hai
Dev: okay toh tum baat kar lo unse, koi problem Ho toh Mujhe Batao.
Neha: ok bhai.

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Neha calls the doctor.
Neha: Am I taking to Dr Bose.
Dr: ya
Neha: actually I wanted an appointment for my mom.
Dr: I'm sorry, but I don't consult patients individually, I'm into a contract .
Neha:please Dr.
Dr: I'm really sorry.
Neha:koi aur arrangement nai Ho skta please.
Dr: umm , I shall call you in the evening,I'm at work now.
Neha: Thanks doctor.
Dr: your welcome miss
Neha: Neha Dixit.
Dr: Great , il make sure I call u in the evening.

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Sonakshi got a msg that she has been called by Sir.

She went to Dev's cabin
Knock

Sona: may I come in.
Dev : yes
Without looking up from his file.
Sona on the other hand could not believe her eyes, she was jus shocked seeing Dev.
Dev without looking up
Dev: so miss nutritioist , who gave you the right to decide my diet.
Sona was still in her shock yet happy she was in front of Dev.
Sona:Dev !!!
Dev on the other hand found this voice familiar.
He jolted up to see Sona in front of him.
Dev: Sonakshi, tum Yaha!


SO I HOPE YOU PEOPLE LIKED THE FIRST PART, STAY TUNED FOR MORE 😉


Edited by dik19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Excellent
So both know each other
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Great part!!
That means they know each other...!!
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Nice start...Do continue soooner...wondering how they know each other...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awesome start :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
PM me :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
wow... its very interesting. continue soon.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly dear how do know am Dev_sona Fan *_* And thanks for pm dear and this is amazing dear a thanks a lot and waiting for next ')
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Thanks for reading

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