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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Absoluv
OMG Najma,,,,super writing...AWESOME...👏👏👏
Luved it...especially the last part...😳😉

I hope such a scene is show in the show too...ufff...

Luving this show and luv Dev -Sona...❤️

Thank you so much dear. I hope they show something better. 😉😆😆

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: lasyap3
Naj ! I just loved the whole thing ...
I badly needed to read stuff of this kind and you gave me one ...

❤️

Thank you Lasya. Somehow there was no Bengali in this one. 😆😆 Sorry about that. 😳

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Lasya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: najma123
Thank you Lasya. Somehow there was no Bengali in this one. 😆😆 Sorry about that. 😳

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: yyy
Too good...I am a big fan of your writing ...and this one is my favorite. ...please continue. ...waiting for the next chapter.
Regarding the hint on your future OS...its diffcult to guess but let me try..the future OS would be on sona and Kushal or on how his sisters will help Dev to realise his feelings for Sona...

Thank you so much, it feels nice to be liked. 😃 Ahm, it is a One Shot, so may not have another Chapter. The Sequel is not decide yet. I have other ideas to work on. 😛

Nope, that isn't the idea of future stories. I am not writing anything on that Kushal.🤢 Us gadhe ke baare mein, main kya likhoon? 😆

Nope. And, not realising feelings and all. Feelings is a big term, and right now, I dont even want them to realise non-existent feelings, even in the show, forget my stories.😆😆 Let their story develop first.

So, nope. THose arent the ideas. 😊

Thanks anyways! You were like the only one, who tried guessing. Loads of love!

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AngelicHeer
Aww one more wonderful os by you. Its awesome as always. Love yours stories Najma .

Thanks a lot dear. 😃😃

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Onie...
Your writing just gets better!!
Loved the teasing part. I can so imagine Shaheer doing the awkward part. 😆
Will be waiting for your next OS. Take care...

It does? That's what I wanted to hear. In fact, I can feel my fingers typing much better than Coffee Date. 😆😆

I hope the next one comes soon. I have written it, half done though. Thanks again dear!

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Oh god that was so intense
Its good to see you here
And with these awesome stuff
Loved this one
So romantic and cute

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sidsk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Absolutely enjoyed reading your OS! The idea behind it was so simple and yet the way it is written makes it very intriguing.

I loved how the tone of this OS changed so smoothly from simple to playful teasing to intense.

Very well written! You should definitely continue this...if not a full story then at least one or two OSs. Would love to know what's going on in Sona's and Dev's mind after this.