La Douleur Exquise: Devakshi Drabbles Update Page 14 - 27.08.2016 - Page 7

it's BEAUTIFUL 👏

FANTASTIC! And such a simple word wouldn't do even the slightest justice to what you've written. And you've figured out Dev pretty well too. How he knows nothing but to don the role of a protector, how he didn't know he wanted something for himself. BEAUTIFUL! One of the best I've ever read. Please, please do continue. It is so easy to get lost into your writing. And this part was amazing. If I thought the first part was fabulous, this is even more. Please continue this series of drabbles!

i am speechless...this is one of the best stories i have ever read...
u hv described dev's feelings n emotins so well...
amazing writter u are... pls write more... 😊

Amazing... Wow... So so .. Good
Keep writing...

This was A-maazing... Could grasp the emotional side of Sonakshi & imagine the entire situation. You have jotted down every little detail about what she felt for him so nicely & expressively. Great job, thoroughly enjoyed...

beautiful 😳

Oh my God!!!!! You have to continue this, I'm telling you. I love this entire drabble. It's so detailed and the descriptions are ossom. You're an ossom writer. Keep up the good work and continue soon

Awesome update dear
Loved it
Liked the way u wrote Dev feelings
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome :)