~#~Mohabbat Musical~#~ Part 2 pg 3

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Arziya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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So no one wants me to continue 😆

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Imran

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I DO, I Just Read it ..
So Continue ..
It takes a while to grab readers attention ..

I am sure lot of View it and When they are Extremely Please they comment for you to continue ..

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plz do continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏 👏 👏

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Mallu_gal

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Ohh pleasee do continuee.......i just read it all noww.......its really good......

Do updatee soonn......😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

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nice job erum....do continue plz...

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Posted: 16 years ago

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omg!!!! erum.. jaan dis is soo gud!!! wow!! i mean u actually have ALL situations beautifully arranged with songs!! awesum! enjoyed readingg it.... though, dint listen 2 all the songs..... bt i know dem by heart aftrall!! :-)))
cont soon!!!!!!

u took more than the tym i took 2 updt my FF!!

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@IrikaLovesKMH

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Please do continue
loved it its like KYPH

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Arziya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Thankyou

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Thankyou guys for comments and liking the first part hope you guys like the second part too

Edited by ...erum... - 16 years ago

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Arziya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Mohabbat Musical
#2

Arjun's Place:

In the morning,
Arjun is working out in the gym 😳..and thinking about a way to get rid of the concert which his dad had already annouced and it seemed kind of difficult as valentine's day was in a couple of days..

Arjun: Pata nahin yeh dad bhi na, samjte hain ki mujhse kuch bhi karne ko kahenge aur mein karloonga, bilkul nahi....

just then a car stops in front of the Punj house,
Shanaya Mittal gets down from the car with her cat..named Shanu 😆..she gives the cat to the servant and asks them to feed her properly and she only drinks purified water..so better give her that not the regular water..the servant nods..

As Shanaya is walking her way in to the house..this song is playing in the background..

Aayi mein to aayi nazaron ke anjane jahan se
lai mein to lai baharon ke afsane bhi wahan se
na na mujhe chuna na door hi rehna Pari Hoon Main

Entire Song: Pari Hoon Main

She goes and greets DK Punj, who is very pleased to see her..

Dk: Good Morining Shanaya beta how are you? and i see you are alone today you dont have your pet today with you?

Shanaya: Uncle, what is this..how can u call my darling a pet, you u she is Shanu my sweet shanu..

DK coughs: Ofcoruse Ofcourse, sweet shanu..where is she now?

Shanaya: Uncle you see she was hungry so i told the servants to feed her.. uncle yeh toh thik hain but what about Arjun..kya woh mere saath ...

DK: Oh yeah akhir humne concert ki announcement ki hai toh woh kyun nahi karega..aur waise bhi woh zaida der tak mere fesle ko mana nahi kar sakta..bhale hi woh gussa ho magar woh mujhe zaida der tak naraaz nahi reh sakta..

Shanaya: Concert right..i completely forgot about the concert that we are going to do..

DK: yeah the valentine's eve one, i bet its gonna rock the music world for sure..

Shanaya: Valentine's eve and I will be with Arjun, there wont be any other perfect time than that to tell him how exactly i feel about him..

Arjun enters:

Arjun: Hey Shanaya..kaise ho?

he keeps on walking towards his room and Shanaya follows him

Shanya: Mein toh thik yeh batao, tum uncle se ab tak naraaz ho..kyunki unho ne tumhara concert annoucnce kar diya isliye..

Arjun: Dont remind me Shanaya..you just wait and see this is gonna be my last concert that dad makes me do..

Shanaya: Yeah yeah..i have listening this since a long time..neways salil bhaiya is coming m sure you already know right

Arjun: Yup he called me, and m going to pick him up next month,

Shanaya: Arjun..isnt bro coming at the same time whn we will be searching for the new talent to be your new partner..hmm m kinda jealous..

Arjun: Jealous..look whos talking..how many times do i have to tell you shanaya that I am not interested in girls..you know they irritate me..

Shanaya: Yeah i know but one day will come Arjun when you will truly and completely fall in love..and then you will realize the feeling of love what is being in love..

Arjun: Oh really you are saying as if you already are in love with somebody..are you?

Shanaya: Forget that..m getting late..will see you at the practice in the studio..and be there..after all this will be the last concert we will be doing together right?

She leaves..

Arjun: Girls..God no one can ever understand them...

Arohi's place:

Arohi wakes up..yet another dream of dancing with Arjun Punj..

Poorvi: Arohi what happened again the same dream
Arohi: yeah poorvi di just wait and watch i will be on TV one day..dancing with Arjun Punj..on the most romantic number..😳..God when will that day come.. will that day come poorvi di

Poorvi: I duno abt that day but mom sure will come up if you get late for the breakfast..

Arohi: Oye..i compeletly forgot..how late I am already..

At the break fast:

Arohi's dad: Good morning arohi, good morning poorvi beta

Arohi: Good morning dad, everything okie right why are you sounding so tensed

Arohi's dad: everything is fine but you were saying yesterday about the audition right where did you say it was taking place

Arohi: Well dad it was in Mumbai..but why all of a sudden

Arohi's dad: Well beta the thing is that you had to go next month as i remember..

Arohi nods

Arohi's dad: There is some change in plans..you wont be going there next month instead you will be going there tomorrow.

Arohi: WHAT!..

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