A KARANIKA SS:'Had It Been So!'-ch.5-pg.27

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

9090

@9090

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: cherry227
hey you managed it!

sorry i read your pm just now actually i was busy in office all day and so didnot get time to check my inbox!

great going hetika... will read it soon and comment!

thank you so much..:) and looking 4wd to reading ur comments soon..i hope u do like dis..:)))

Quote

9090

@9090

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -sanju-

Shibzy.. Hum famous ho gaye Humare "words" use ho rahe hai..😎
Kidding.. Hetika.. Amazing! Really well written.. ⭐️👏
Its sensitive an issue.. And our perception of their story.. Is well, a jumbled mess.. To string it together and make it fall in place is quite a task.. And I can see you're already managing so well.. Will be waiting to read further..
And I guess the attempts are futile now.. As much as we try distancing from them, running away from their lives.. It somehow just pulls is back.. There is something always happening and makes us fall back into the same spot.. And the heart continues to crave a certain 'Karanika'.. Sigh!
Their smiles, the very mention of it makes me feel a heavy loss..
And in your words, I can see all that we feel coming together perfectly! Kudos! Continue soonish! 😃

hehe..ha tum dono famous ho gaye..actually famous hi the hamesha se..:D :D And thanx 4 these motivating words sanju..:) and all the gush of feelings dat surge up wen talking abt dis topic is actually a very mixed type of feeling..i just tried to encase all these memories from all these years in a small way..:(( :))

The attempts are definitely futile..kitna bhi try karo to not think abt these 2 ppl, it just gets back to us..as if it has become an inseperable part of our lives...bas yeh term "karanika" hi toh hai dat doesn't agree to leave 4m our minds.. but,whats sad is dat this term might never turn out to be real again..though we always have our hopes high, right?? 😊

And next update..really soonish..:))))

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

9090

@9090

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: M00NA
kya kahon main yaar...
phir se dard hua,
phir se wo sab yaad aaya...
hum juda kab the un se..
jise aj tum ne yaad dilaya...😒

awesomely written 👍🏼
n plzz continue 😊

thank you so much for..:) i love the words you have quoted here..so true..:))

and shall definitely continue wid d story..next update is going to be up soon..:))

Quote

9090

@9090

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome start👏[/QUOTE

thank you so much..hope the story shall prove to be of ur liking further ahead too..:):)

Quote

shreya

@ShrePreet18

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: 9090
m sure😊

Quote

Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow that was a great post

u have penned down whatever i had in my mind - it was just like reading my mind out loudly - thank u dear

great start

pls pm me when ur next post is up

thx

priya

Quote

cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Superb , fantastic writing n amazing
A gr8 pov of our king k
Plz in next part we want to know Kittu pov too
Superb
Keep writing like this

Quote

Rimpi_kmh

@Rimpi_kmh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It was amazing!
Its was like kundra ka dil ki unkahi betaa.
Wow. U r a awesome writer!
Conti soon..

Quote

-Nili-

@-Nili-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

d 1st update itself made me so senti ,dunno hw wl i manage to read further *sigh*
these two wl nvr leave me alone i guess , dey keep haunting me everywhere i go 😛😒

P.s good work dear! 👍🏼