A KARANIKA SS:'Had It Been So!'-ch.5-pg.27

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Hey everyone.. So, i was going through some recent posts and thread about... who else..*drum rolls*...karan nad kritika ..and that is when i decided to pen down a story that conveys how exactly we all - the fans- have been percieving and still continue to do so, this entire situation...and ofcourse, how exactly would the fans have liked the scenario to turn out to be in real.. So, i've written an initial part to this fiction...would love to know what you all think about it..So, do pitch in your suggestions and comments and opinions ..that shall really help me in forming the further chapters.. And, i intend to keep this as a short story..maybe 3-4 chapters as of now..
madhusmita..shibz...lots and lots of heartfelt thanx for those appreciating words..shibz and sanju..pls feel free to take all the credit for your "words" that i have used in this chapter..:))

So, here's the 1st chapter... Do pour in your comments..:))
-hetika



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Index :

Ch. 1 - pg.1
Ch. 2 - Pg. 7
Ch. 3 - Pg. 14
Ch. 4 - Pg. 18
My thoughts - Pg. 24
Ch. 5 - Pg. 27


Chapter 1. - MAYBE ...!!!


"I READ people..I Read..!!!"'.

He posted this on his twitter handle..and immediately he got hundreds of Retweets and favourites..yes his fans were overjoyed to know that the person they adored and admired so much, actually went through the thread they had made wherein they posted lots of questions that they intended to ask him if ever they met him..

HIM !! ' Yes..the very famous..the suave, charming, good-looking rockstar actor of Indian TV ' KARAN KUNDRA.. And to a lot of people across the globe; still Arjun Punj and Arjun Singhania.. And why not ?? After all, it was this name that paved the pathway to success that he was walking on today!

Where on one side his fans left no stone unturned to show their love for him ' from posts on his FB and Twitter accounts to videos and picture creations to fiction stories written keeping him in mind ' at the same time,even he never missed a chance to thank his fans for all this overwhelming affection they showered upon him ! He was one such person who always believed in staying grounded to one's roots, to never forget the people who made him stand on the pedestal where he is now and maybe that is why he is called KING K ' as humble as one, at that..

But of late, he saw a change in a lot of posts that were made about him.. He could sense that his fans were feeling that the old karan kundra is lost somewhere.. There were some particular posts that actually got to his attention ' "if this is what growing up means, then I prefer the immature Karan-kittu over this".. "I miss the old Karanika..with lots of masti always..somehow that smiles have vanished somewhere".. "Aajkal toh he doesn't reply also..i hope we get to see karan in his old self back soon.." !!

Vaise toh, he was used to a lot of negative comments also from a lot of people but he always took them in the positive sense as long as he knew that he also had millions of people who had loved him with the same sincerity and loyalty since the time "Kitani Mohabbat hai-1" aired its 1stepisode in 2009..

Then why were these comments bothering him?? Was it because they were filled with nostalgia and emotions that made him reminisce about the past ?? Or was it because he loved his fans too much that he could not see them being disappointed 'especially if it was because of him that they were sad?? He had been pondering too much on this since quite a few days now; his heart knew the answer but his mind was not ready to let him speak it out and accept it- all this was making him even more angry and frustrated.. "gussa-jo mujhe aata hai..khud par..tujh par..sab par.." These words never stopped ringing in his mind ever since he had sent that voice mail to HER !! There 'finally there came the reason.. It was not just his mentions in all these threads and posts that bothered him; but it was because another name was mentioned right besides his name in all those words ..KITTU'

"pyaar toh aaj bhi hai..aaj bhi uska naam sunta hu toh kuchh hota hai..jab bhi usse tv pe dekhta hu toh ek badi si smile aa jati hai mere face pe" ..he still remembered saying these words to Chhota karan ' billu ' who was extremely dejected and sad by the fact that his family ' karan bhaiya and kittu mummy (as he still fondly calls them)' can no longer be together..

It had been months since "they" were no longer together- and yet not a single day passed without him remembering the titles that he and kritika were adorned with during the time when they were in a relationship ' TV's cutest couple, the hottest off-screen pair, Best Jodi, the most romantic couple and the list was endless !! and ho bhi kyu naa, after all their chemistry was just like fire and ice ' they were so much in sync with each other that a slightest change in one and the other would know about it within a moment.. They met for the look test of their 1stshow together ' KMH and little did they know that this show would change their lives forever.. even during the time when they were not dating, he was always in constant awe of kittu ' a name that he started calling her by and she is still referred to by that till date- he always thought that she was the best co-actor one could ever work with; still remembered the valentines' special interview they gave on a leading news-channel where he did not hesitate even a moment to publicly accept how he was always attracted by her caring nature and her attitude towards life. Each moment that they had spent together is still as clearly etched in his memory as ever. What confused him was that despite the fact that the decision to not be together was a mutual one, why was he still not able to let go off those memories, why did places and situations around him still made him remember the times he had spent with her ?!?! And deep down in his heart, even he knew that even SHE was not able to let go off the memories from her heart- the memories that their fans very aptly term as "KARANIKA moments"..


Hope you like the write-up...drop in your ideas..:))



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hetu..i read it again n again my heart felt a pain😭...ur writing is awesome...its really natural👏 It was like going down the memory land with karan...actually I can imagin the whole things U wrote...
M really looking forward to read next part..keep rocking ⭐️😊
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Amazing!! You r a gifted writer bud! keep writing... n the words r actually feelings of one n all on this forum😆 including yours i believe.. or it wouldn't have come out so brilliant like u actually read our mind...we sure haven't revealed everything we feel n have felt but what u wrote is Just EXACTLY what we feel😳

waiting for the next chap(read complete SS😛)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayeee...hetikaaa u planning on killing us kya?? Awesummm start..brilliant...totally loved how u started the story..n how u are connecting the dots...n the way u are handling this super-touchy topic in the first part was truely commendable...

Wud definatelyy love to read more...pls do pm me!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey you managed it!

sorry i read your pm just now actually i was busy in office all day and so didnot get time to check my inbox!

great going hetika... will read it soon and comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shibzy.. Hum famous ho gaye Humare "words" use ho rahe hai..😎
Kidding.. Hetika.. Amazing! Really well written.. ⭐️👏
Its sensitive an issue.. And our perception of their story.. Is well, a jumbled mess.. To string it together and make it fall in place is quite a task.. And I can see you're already managing so well.. Will be waiting to read further..
And I guess the attempts are futile now.. As much as we try distancing from them, running away from their lives.. It somehow just pulls is back.. There is something always happening and makes us fall back into the same spot.. And the heart continues to crave a certain 'Karanika'.. Sigh!
Their smiles, the very mention of it makes me feel a heavy loss..
And in your words, I can see all that we feel coming together perfectly! Kudos! Continue soonish! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya kahon main yaar...
phir se dard hua,
phir se wo sab yaad aaya...
hum juda kab the un se..
jise aj tum ne yaad dilaya...😒

awesomely written 👍🏼
n plzz continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonkmh

Hetu..i read it again n again my heart felt a pain😭...ur writing is awesome...its really natural👏 It was like going down the memory land with karan...actually I can imagin the whole things U wrote...

M really looking forward to read next part..keep rocking ⭐️😊


thanx madhu..so happy to knw dat i was able to connect to ur feelings to some extent..and i completely agree..anything written abt karan cud make anyone nostalgic abt the good 'ol times...
@bold ..dis actually comes as a great cmplmnt sweets..feels so gud to knw dat d words touched a string of memories somewhere deep in ur mind..:))
next update soon..pakka..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shibz

Amazing!! You r a gifted writer bud! keep writing... n the words r actually feelings of one n all on this forum😆 including yours i believe.. or it wouldn't have come out so brilliant like u actually read our mind...we sure haven't revealed everything we feel n have felt but what u wrote is Just EXACTLY what we feel😳

waiting for the next chap(read complete SS😛)


Thanx again shibz for such appreciating words.. and yes, d words are actually meant to convey in some small way the karanika deewangi that we all share..and i guess when it comes to these 2 people, v all have the same rush of emotions flowing in our hearts and mind..bas intensity level different hota hai..:D ..so, m superrr glad 2 knw dat u feel i m able to capture what we all have in common through words..
and next update..really soon...:))))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_15

Hayeee...hetikaaa u planning on killing us kya?? Awesummm start..brilliant...totally loved how u started the story..n how u are connecting the dots...n the way u are handling this super-touchy topic in the first part was truely commendable...

Wud definatelyy love to read more...pls do pm me!!!


haha..naiii..i dont plan to kill you all..varna phir who would read my story???😉 thankyou so much for liking d way i started off with the write-up..i was actually a bit apprehensive wen i began writing it..unsure of whether it would depict the true feelings that everyone feel about karanika or not..but,feels so nice to knw u like the way the plot is turning up..:))) Ohh..i so agree,..a super-touchy topic this is..so, i m going to try to just go with the flow and m hoping dis turns out to be exactly wat it is meant to be in d end - a portrayal of what could have been the situation in real..:)
and next update is slated to be super soon..wud pm u 4 sure..:))

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