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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow maahi , it is very good. update soon. I like love and adore Besharam Arjun 😆
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Chapter#2
Waqt se kehdoo...k is waqt naa karwat badle
hussan aagosh-e-mohabbat men chlla aaya hai



The wedding took place in a great manner.Finally the time arrived in her life when she had to left her home,left her loving parents,left her darlings siblings like every other girl.And now she has to make a new life,create a new world wid a man whom she even didnt knew properly.How those sath pharas around agni had tied her wid him for da whole life,for da coming janams?Her thoughts broke feeling Purvi sequeeze on her hand.She came to her senses..She was on bed as bride as Mrs.Arohi Arjun Singhania in her new home.


Purvi lovingly to her friend:kyun preshan ho?
Getting silent sighed from her she laughed.Holding her hand she assured him:jitna mene Saleel se suna hai aur jitna tum ne ab tk btaya hai aur jitna mene use dekha hai,wo ek buht acha insaan hai.uski family bhi uski trhan buht loving hai.jis trhan se wo tumhe dekhta hai,koi bhi keh skta hai wo tumhe buht pyar krta hai.



"pyar? Ok. .Their story had not started wid a slap.No there was a revenge reason behind their meeting.Both not have a vamp lover beside them or strict parents.But still they have a love story & she love her love story.A blissful love story where dy recognized their real mate on right time & ofcourse destiny helped them to gt their destination...Destination?,is it realy a end?Or a new unexpected start?




Wid little tease she added:par haan ye gurantee nhi wo tumhara khyal rkhe.
Arohi looked worriedly hearing her statement.Purvi teasingly:kyunke jitna desperate wo lag rha hai mujhe nhi lagta tum aaj so pao gi.

Arohi gave her a look mix of warning & embarrasment.Laughing she was about to left da room when Arohi called her from behind:ruku..men ..mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa rha.
She let out da words abruptly:mtlb kya hoga?
Purvi brust into laugh saying these words to her:whi jo tum uske sath kro gi aur wo tumhare sath krega.
Getting killing look from her angelic friend Purvi finally controlled her laughter:hoga to whi jo tum ne aaj tk chup chup k parha hoga par haan advice yehi hai jo dil kahe bs whi krna aur jesa ho rha hai wo hone denaa.



Giving her a wink she left while Arohi rested her back wid head of bed breathing deeply..First night of Arrange marriage where two people who hardly knew eachother to be locked in a room & expected to make love?Thousands of couple cope successfully & joyfully wid dis situation every night.She didnt knew how dy went through it,what dy expect,what dy planned but she was confuse on her own self...Is dis exctiement or nervousness?But unknowingly she was not scared,she had trust on him.


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Rashi(Arjun younger sister):jii aap ne bilkul sahi suna,jb tk mujhe paise nhi mile ge,men darvaza nhi chodungi.
Michael(Arjun younger brother) teasingly:bhai kuch do aur is chudail se jaan chudvao vrna ye yahen subha kr degi.

Rashi:oo kuch mt mtlb kyaa?jb tk meri demand puri nhi hogi men darwaza nhi chodungi.

Kumud:Rashi bs kro aur kitna stao gi apne bhai ko.

Rashi pout:ab hmari family ki pehli shadi hai,mere bde bhai ki,meri pehli baby aai hai.to mera itna haq bhi nhi.chlo jaldi barr(darwaza)rukai do.

Arjun smiled lovingly at her darling sister,tk out gift pack from his pocket:bilkul tumhara haq bhi hai aur mera farz bhi.apni shadi par men apni pyari behn ko naraz kese kr skta hun?

Rashi excitedly took it from him:special gift mere lye,i love u bro.

Rudr pleaded to her ladli daughter:chlo ab to use andar jane do. .sb buht thak gaey hen.

Michael winked at Rashi:par Rashi what about next rasam?Arjun instantly annoyed:plx bs krdo,ye konsi shadi hai jo rasme khtm hi nhi ho rhi?


All laughed while Saleel teased:bs krdo bche ki jaan lo ge kya?

Rashi:haan haan ja rhe hen,pr suno bhai meri bhabi buht nazuk hai us se jhagra mt krna.samjhe?

Kumud:meri baho bilkul phoolon jesi hai uska pholoon hi trhan khyal rkhnaa smjhe?

Rudr cleared to him:ab meri do betyan hen..Ok?

Michael coughed:aur men to usi law par belive krta hun..jiski bhabhi khush hoti hai usiki khubsurat dulhan aati hai..to pehle devar baad men bhai.

Arohi lips stretched in smile hearing their voices inside da room'kese ek pal men rishte jud jate hen'

Arjun sighed:hogya?. .can i go now.
All laughing left expect Michael & Saleel.Michael teased:1st time hai,bhabi ko dra mt dena.
Arjun in his elderly tone:shutup.

Michael laughing left Saleel was about to leave bt Arjun stopped him,clearing his throat:tera mujhse pehle shadi krne ka mujhe kya fayda hua?
Saleel nodded:friends ka experience helpful hota hai par is matter men nhi..hr koi apna alg hi example bnata hai. Best of luck.

Sayng dis he left.


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He allowed himself the sense of satisfaction that came from being away from"THEM!"At last he was alone with his wife ---"HIS WIFE"--- and she was alone with him.He really didn't know what to do next or how to proceed now that they were married and '"it"was permitted.

His smiling eyes glittered wid excitement when he turned da knob.He entered inside the room locking da door behind him.She was sitting still in traditional bride way but her heart was pounding unbelivebly..The most beautiful woman on earth,for him.The air was filled wid fragrance of roses & room was lit wid golden candles. The bed and its sides were decorated with flowers all.

Ignoring da beauty of atmosphere around his eyes were only fixed on her.Her beauty had created its magic on him since their 1st meet.But today in dis red bridal lehnga choli,in dis kundan jewelerey.. in 'singhaar' of his name he found himself lost of words. And now his gaze could travel wid freedom on her..widout any hesitation he could enjoy sight of her beautiful face,widout restriction he could admire perfection of her goddess body.The beautiful angel in his bed was all his now,completely his forever.



He sat on bed near her & moved her shy face up by lifting her chin.Mere feeling of her skin on his finger send strange kind of sensation inside him.While she kept her eyes glued down..Heat of his gaze already disturbed rhythm of her breath.

"meri tarf dekho bhi nhi?..koi narazgi?"

She lifted up her eyelashes & found her handsome groom face full of worry.He lovingly took her hand in his.Her soft & cold hinna filled hand ran many forbidden thoughts in his mind.He softly"gussa krna,jhagra krna par plx mujh se kbhi naraaz mat hona"

His hold so protective,so assuring.Just a new born relation of hours seemed more closer then her own reflection.

He took sigh of relief as her face glowed wid hint of smile.Looking deeply into her kohl eyes he whispered:jb bhi mujhe lagta hai tum is se zyada khubsurat nhi lg skti tum mujhe hmesha galat sabit kr deti ho.

His husky tone & his naughty grin made her blushed & her big eyes faced da bed in utmost shyness.She slightly tried to pull out her hand from his hold.But to her surprise he made his hold even more tighter.Warmth of his gaze,his touch was sending chills in her each fibre.As his thumb creased softness of her palm in a lazy circular manner,blushing she argued in a weak whisper:chodo..mera hath.

Arjun"chodne k lye nhi pakrra"

She looked up in his shining eyes.His eyes filled wid a tender promise wid equal determination..plotting da most sensational torture.He got surprised noticing his name in her mehndi.Getting his pleasent response she shyly forward her other hand too to show his name.

He lovingly hold her both hands admiring their beauty.Her stomach filled wid countless butterflies as he planted soft kisses on her palm.Taste of her skin,her sweet sigh..it was becoming hard for him to control any more.

A loud bang on door broke their magical spell.In less a moment she pulled out her hands & left da bed in embarrasment.Cursing da figure behind da door he got up & went to open da door.

Before he could open his mouth to drop bombs he jumped back in shock seeing dadi.Dadi handed him glass of milk:men naa hun to is ghar men kuch hota hi nhi..

Scolding him,she added:tu menu yaad nhi dila skta tha? chl aaj tujhe chod rhi hun..ab jaa.

He took sigh of relief as her non stop dadi thankfully did mercy on him.But before he could lock da door he got another knock.Dadi lovingly:agr kisi cheez ko zrurat ho naa to mujhe awaz de dena.

Forcing a loving smile on his face:thank u dadi,love u. .Gud Night.

He instantly shut da door bt again he opened it on dadi knock.He made face:ab kya hai dadi?

Dadi warned him:ab men teri dadi hi nhi Arohi ki bhi dadi hun,usko preshan mt krna.agr mujhe shikayat milli to teri khyr nhi?

He made puppy face:ok dadi..plx gud night.

Giving him blessings she finally left.

He locked the door submitting prayers to God'plz no more interruption'

He turned his back & found their bed empty.His searching eyes found her standing near dresser,struggling wid her nosal ring.Jingling of her bangles around creating an arousing atmosphere.He walked to her,luking a chance to start where he had stop:dadi bhi naa..pta nhi ye doudh ka kya logic hai?

She took her nosal link widout luking:ye bhi rasam hai.

Arjun luking at da glass:yahan ki rasmo ne mujhe pagal krdya hai..

Then his devil mind worked in his way:wese yahan shadi ki raat groom ko ye dudh kyun pilate hen?

Oh that red colour on her rosy cheeks.Arohi hesitately.thinkning he ix realy un aware of dese traditional rituals:wo.. sb peete hen.

Arjun innocently:faltu k jhanjhat...ise to men phenk hi deta hun..

She instantly hold hand to stop him,abruptlyb:ise phenkte thodi hen..peete hen. umm acha hota health k lye matlb thkkan uttar jati hen,fresh ho jate hen.


He hardly control his laughter on her cute,hesitate expressions & stammering eyes."to phir tum bhi peeo men akele jaag kr kya krun ga?" Saying dis he pressed glass on her lips.Then he finshed da rest half:mujhe nhi pta tha ye itna tasty ho skta hai.



Blushed on his double meaning comment she gave him an irritating look.She turned to dresser to pin out heavy wedding dupatta from her head.He watched her dreamily,her each action,her each move so graceful,so feminine.From behind he helped her to kept it down on chair.She gasped as he slipped his arms around her exposed waist.Her back pressed in his rock hard chest while he rested his chin in crokof her neck.

She luked in his eyes through reflection of mirror.How his gaze had power to control her senses.

Arjun:"mene kbhi nhi socha tha,meri 'zindagi' inti khubsurat hogi"

She whispered:mene bhi.

His one hand played wid her bangles,lifted up creasing her silky arms.While his little shaved hairs tickled her skin.Her feeling was so different on getting so intimate wid a man for da very 1st time in her life.Taking out her earing he insisted:phir bhi kuch to socha hoga?

Her mind were already getting heavy in effect of his strong masculine scent.Arohi:kis barre men?

After her earings,he let her hairs fall:apni wedding night k bare men..kuch to plan hoga?sb krte hen.

His desires became more desparate getting a shy node from him he asked impatiently:kya?

Her tone was excited:buht sari baatien!


His mind who was already feeling drunk in effect of her alcoholic beauty came on a result"mean she gt aroused from phone sex?..dirty,exciting talk?

But his good luck he confirmed before taking next steps:kesi baatien?

She innocently:hmari family k bare men baatien.



His hold automatically losen getting her horror reply.She turned to face him,softly:mere papa professor hen..rules k thode strict hen par wo hum sb se buht pyar krte hen. meri mom ne hmesha khud se pehle hme,apne ghar ko dekha. Antra ka 1st year hai college men par ab bhi buht bchpna hai.naa mere bger khati hai naa mere bger soti hai.Aur Raj wo to us se bhi 4 saal chota hai.mere bger ek pal nhi rehta.mujhe pta hai aaj usne khana bhi nhi khaya hoga.

He cudnt stop himself to utter"what?"

Arohi:aap kis se zyada attach ho?mom se ya dad se?zyada jhagra kis se hota hai Rashi se ya Michael se.



He could saw her innocent love in her beautiful..Her excitment to make him part of her little world..

"par pyar krne ka sb ka apna style hota hai aur sb ko right bhi hota hai,isnt it?"

He kept fingers on her inviting lips to make her silent.He whispered in his husky tone:par mene aaj raat tumhare in khubsurat honto se baaten sune k bare men bilkul nhi socha..pr tumhari kuch aesi aahen jo mujhe pagal krden

She was too lost in his desire filled eyes dt ddnt realized when his lips replaced da finger.Suddenly She felt his lips near her and the next second it was pressed tightly onto her. Her lips involuntarily parted themselves as he probed his tongue inside. He was kissing her feverishly .She felt his tongue play inside her mouth as his slowly moved her tongue. she slowly touched his tongue with her and soon they were playing ferociously. She put her hands on his chest, vaguely thinking that she would push him away as soon as his tongue, his soft, warm, wet tongue, would stop dancing with her; as soon as he would take those soft lips away from her long enough for her to say something, but then one of his hand roamed sinfully on her sensitive body.The kiss ended and their eyes met again. Hunger raged through their gaze.. he looked into his wife's adoring eyes. It was too much!i love you arohi..i love you", She looked in his eyes, the meaning of the look in his eyes suddenly becoming clear -- it was desire, uncloaked and unrestrained. A split second later,he again grabbed her lips in demanding kiss.Her arms automatically encircled him.
While driving her crazy wid his mouth he casually and delicately began to undo the lacing that served to hold her cholli closed. Some men found the multitude of little crisscross sections of the lacing troublesome but bcox of his desire for him it was no problem at all. Within a few minutes, he had the entire backside of her dress wide open, his hands gently roaming over her silky smooth skin.The moment she felt his hands on the bare skin of her back, she tensed slightly. Had she even realized he had been working to unfasten her cholli as he kissed her? With steadfast determination, he allowed his fingers to begin working that fabric forward pushing it first off, her shoulders and then casually edging it down her arms.His lips left a trail of fire on her skin, and as he sucked a particularly sensitive area on her neck,. Still kissing her neck, he traced his fingers down her arms, and then, grazing them over her lace-clad breasts.Her head was thrown back as he started kissing her neck, gently moving from her ear down along the side..

He could tell that she was burning wid shyness..For him she had no reason to be shy. She was a beautiful, attractive, vibrant young woman..his woman whom he deeply loved.She still felt terribly shy. She was quiet and unsure, and very nervous. And in the back of her mind, she was afraid of doing something that would disappoint him. She wanted to run away but she too wanted to stay.she was afraid of revealing her 'secrets' but she wanted to became one wid him. .Her shyness which always charmed him.but so far, she did nothing to stop him.
When he finally slid the fabric over her hands, he kissed her once again. He held her head gently, his fingers wound in her hair as he allowed him deeper and deeper entry to her mouth.As she purred with pleasure he sucked her lower lip, grazing it with his tongue before he thrust it back between her lips, searching for her tongue again.
The kiss did little to help calm her this time however, especially not when he slid his hands to her curve of her hips.With careful movements, he crawled up onto the bed and gently settled her down somewhere near the center,Even trembling as she was he found her completely and breathtakingly beautiful in a silky bra & heavy lehnga on her petite figure.
How did he manage to come into possession of a woman as marvelous as this? It was if she had been plucked right out of some fantasy and laid out before him, ripe for the taking. And he had every intention of taking her.
Her eyes were shut tightly while her chest were heaving up & down causing burning fire inside him.Resting his hand on His lips slowly move to her forehead, and then her ears. He nibbles on her ears before he is able to move his lips to her neck and begins to softly kiss her there. He moves his head down to her chest and softly nibbles at da exposed flash.. Passionate moans come deep from inside her as he slowly makes her happier with each nibble and kiss. He soon moves his head back even with hers and kisses her lips as his hands slowly move and caress her whole body.He wasted little time sliding the smooth material away, exposing her * to the cool air.Realizing da reality she abruptly sat up.She made a cross over her mounds with her hands hiding them from his eyes. His desire was on killing him but for her comfort he decided dt he would drew her out & proceed gradually ,widout hurrying her in any way.He didnt knew dt da magic thread he himself tied around her neck hours ago had its own effect.
He sat behind her and held her shoulders. Bending over he kissed her neck and ear. Brushing his beard across his hairline down her neck. She shivered, and goose bumps appeared all over her arms and legs" men tumhari marzi k bgr kuch nhi krunga ..mere pyar,meri chaht,meri dewangii se pehle tumhari ijazaat hai.
She luked him wid all her love & found his eyes filled wid endless love too.Sliding her arms slowly dwn..she hugged him passionatly,pressing her tender figure in his rock bare chest."I love u Arjun..i love you"
Delicious felling of her skin against him & now her confession..it became impossible for him to resist.The flowers strewn over the bed got crumpled along with their weight.
Slowly, he moves so that he was on top of her, A little breathlessly, he brushed a strand of hair away from her face, saying, " I am so lucky to have you as my wife.". He continued kissing and stoking her, teasing the tender flesh with his lips, gently biting the soft brown tips until they were as hard as pebbles. The sensations coursing through her body were delightful! .

Before she realized it, her heavy embroidered lehga had fallen to the plush ivory carpet.His lips moved down, over her belly, softly kissing the indentation of her belly button, his hands continuing to stroke and knead her mounds. His kisses continued down, brushing against her abdomen.He could not get enough of it, and it allowed him to take his time in kissing a trail over her body. His lips tasting her skin over and over again before he began moving even lower.Loving, worshipful kisses trailing down and down, across her shoulders, over her chest. He made a quick stop to suckle each nipple, licking and tasting them hungrily, before he went even further. He kissed down the curve of her left breast and continued south, over her ribs, across her stomach and finally to her waist.
The taste of her was so sinfully delicious that he simply could not stop himself She was breathing heavily by the time he crossed the curves of breasts, and nestled his face into the crook of her neck and shoulder. He was almost becoming drunk on the taste of her sweet skin, the feel of her body as it squirmed beneath his.

He was taking his time, listening to the sound of the girl's breathing, feeling the slight tremors of apprehension that began rolling through her body. Then between one heartbeat and the next
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Their bodies heighten with anticipation. Waves of love and passion flow between one another as they passionately kiss each other on the lips. Screams soft at first but then louder, are let out of their mouths. Their backs begin to arch back and away from one another as each of their bodies fill with tension and anticipation of desire dt are about to hit them.
There breathing is still very heavy as if they have been through a marathon. The shaking that has encompassed their bodies begins to slow and soon they are both relaxed.
Slowly, but with tender loving care, . He kisses her face slowly in a circle. In between each circle, thanking her. Thanking her for that night, for being her,for becmng his, Both say I love you's to each other numerous times, over and over again, as if it cannot be said enough.
"God, I love you soo much," he whispers into her ear.
"I love you too," she replies, as she breathes heavily, trying to catch her breath that she lost while making love to her.She slowly brings her lips to his and kisses him some more.

And with that, the newlywed couple snuggled and cuddled up under the blankets of their wedding night suite bed. With love and passion still lingering in the room, the lovers fell asleep in each other's arms. .
For some lovers dis phase is a destination but for some its a start..a journey of love from skin to heart..to body to soul
Lets wait will dis beautiful night have a beautiful morning too?

plshh do comments..i put so much effort in it

Edited by AAKMH2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mahi jaan hats off to ur efforts dear 👏 👏 👏 tumara mehnat ka toh kaam aagai it was breathtaking dear so beautifully written 👍🏼 blushing blushing blushing 😳 I loved ter comfort for each other its too pure and too soft 😊 starting may purvi-arohi scene ws so funny 😆 rashi ne bahut sathaya arjun ko bichara kitna desperate tha 😆 thank god rudra and kumuth ws ter to save arjun frm those 3 idiots(rashi,salil,mickael) 😆 dadi and arjun convo ws too hilarious 🤣 kmh2 ka scene yaadh aagaiya 😆 arjuhi kisses wer so so passionate and ter love making was just ossom hotness personified 😳 😳 😳 nw waiting for the morning to come soon hope is raath ka subha jalde ho 😉 love u jaan for tis wonderful update u made my day muaah ❤️ 🤗
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m blushing 😳 m blushing 😳 n m blushing 😳It was haaawwwttt...very well written 👏 hats off to U jaaneman😉
now it will b exciting to see how their relationship go further. I know there will b problem but right now m enjoying d hot romance n seriously I love how they comfort each other.
Sweetheart U R a star⭐️ love you ❤️
Edited by moonkmh - 12 years ago
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hey mahi ve,
what was that yaaar - oh my God, mahi what just happened - did i really read what i read -what a SR mahi - amazing one - u have become an experienced SR writer i guess - every SR of your stories becomes more and more passionate - great one mahi - u have left me blushing though out
but what was that last line - wont they have a splendid morning tooo mahi? pls dont do anything bad to this couple yaaar - anyway i have faith in you - u will rock as always - will wait for ur next update
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☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I am Speechless ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Such a beautiful & Blush worthy update ...mahi U are awesome. i am actually at loss of words & not able to describe the Beauty of the write up. ☺️ this is actually the Best SR i have read till date 👏 👏 i am still lost in their world loved the way you are moving this ...Brillant. Loved the whole singhania family 👏 👏 Super cute they are loved how cutely they all warned Arjun to keep Arohi Happy & not to trouble her much. 😉 😉 purvi assuring Arohi to relax & teasing her being an experianced one was actually a fun to read 👏 loved the way you have written all the relations & their bonding in few sentences, 😃 it created a huge place in readers heart i am sure 😃 U arr Brilliant Girl ⭐️

Goshhh !!!! you are killing girl 👏 this was truly the Best, The most sensuous & extremely loveable SR written by you till date. 👏 you poured magic with your words. the new feeling of being together with Someone.😊 sharing emotions & creating nw bond with an unknown strenger 😳 you know the most difficult aspect in arrange marraige is always a physical part but you have written it so so sooo Beautifully ki kya batau 👏👏 loved the way u described the moment of their love & togetherness. Your describtion & the way panned down their emotions & atmosphere it was actually gave me the Classic feel. ⭐️ you are superb dear 👏 you describe passionate moments with So much decency i just loved it. 😃 it was truly a blush blush update ☺️ loved this arjun & the way he treated his princess 😊 truly magical. he didnt only loved her but respected her & thats the most important thing in my Point of veiw, 😃

Gosshhh while writing comments also i am getting diverted towards update ...☺️ off to read again 😉

Love you Jaan ,,,,for making this Soo sooo Sooo Beautiful. 🤗

but your last line is scary ...yeh tumhare twists bhi naa jaan nikal dete hain

Update soon ...waiting impatienty 😳

Love you
Pranjal.
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hawww... why no pm????

im sad now...

res :(((
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Mahi meri soni moni...

I am speechless...truly...
All my OS's about arrange marriage just seem so dull in here yaar...
Truly Really beautiful update...

Loved the starting Purvi Arohi scene...aww...haha
what an advise *WINK*

and then comes Rashi with her duarrokk ceremony...haha...poor despo arjun's halat was well described..
and above that, Saleel and Micheal adding mirchi on his zakhams...haha

OMG Arjun!!!! Saleel ne pehle shadi is liye ki thi ta k tumhain brief karay...HAHA🤣 That was a cracking scene

But saleel, just like his wife...gving a good advise...😉

Aweee...Arohi all shy and red sitting on bed and arjun eyes fixed on her...must be a sight for sore eyes...

Becharay nay abhi uska thanda thanda haath hi pakra tha k dadi aa gayein...n bechara adab ka mara arjun kuch bol bhi nahin paya

and i already told you...I loved that Doodh comment...haha...i so so love the simple aru's on mohc and this one...they made me love there arjun more...haha

and then arjun flirting step by step with his wife...pehle dhoodh pilaya usay...n asked her what she wish...how should they proceed

and this simple arohi...AWEEE...family k baray main baatain...Superb one...

and arjun stopping her and silencing her with his lips...☺️

Ok agay ka part bohut HAWT tha...yaar parhte howay blush blush kia...likhte howay bhi ho rahi hoon...😳

But i love the earlier hesitation of arohi's...perfect description of two strangers coming together...a perfect arranged marriage night that was...

Arjun making her comfortable with his words and soothing kisses till she lost herself in him...

There love was so sweet n pure...I AM ALREADY LOVING THIS FIC JUST LIKE MOHC...

thanku for this superb treat mahi...

and ye kia...morning should be as sweet as there night...there should be no other way ok janab...

its a valentine special story so it must have lots n lots of romance...

Cont soon janab...

waiting eagerly...

between my fav dialogues from this updte are

1:hoga to whi jo tum ne aaj tk chup chup k parha hoga par haan advice yehi hai jo dil kahe bs whi krna aur jesa ho rha hai wo hone denaa.

2:friends ka experience helpful hota hai par is matter men nhi..hr koi apna alg hi example bnata hai. Best of luck.

3:
"meri tarf dekho bhi nhi?..koi narazgi?"

4:"chodne k lye nhi pakrra"

5:She instantly hold hand to stop him,abruptlyb:ise phenkte thodi hen..peete hen. umm acha hota health k lye matlb thkkan uttar jati hen,fresh ho jate hen.

6:"mene kbhi nhi socha tha,meri 'zindagi' inti khubsurat hogi"

7:His mind who was already feeling drunk in effect of her alcoholic beauty came on a result"mean she gt aroused from phone sex?..dirty,exciting talk?😲😉

But his good luck he confirmed before taking next steps:kesi baatien?😛

She innocently:hmari family k bare men baatien.🤣🤣

8:"par pyar krne ka sb ka apna style hota hai aur sb ko right bhi hota hai,isnt it?"😳

9:" men tumhari marzi k bgr kuch nhi krunga ..mere pyar,meri chaht,meri dewangii se pehle tumhari ijazaat hai.

10: The whole hotty part☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful update!!!

Aap toh Hot updates dene mein maahir hain...Toh isme koi shak nahi hona chahiye ki yeh bhi tareef-e-kabil tha!!!!

Arohi-Purvi were cute...

Rashi-Mikhail(is he that good?) and Saleel all were good!!!

Superb Mahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤗mahi,i can;t believed that what i' read few mins back!!!

☺️☺️ i'm still blushing...omg i hav no words

u r a rock star yer ⭐️ just mind blowing...👏 Mahi

its a best ever SR i hav read till now 😳
its too cute,,full family tease arjun 😆

''men tumhari marzi k bgr kuch nhi krunga ..mere pyar,meri chaht,meri dewangii se pehle tumhari ijazaat ha''- aweee sach a loving n caring husband ❤️

the way u described arjuhi hot kiss n their love making just awesome👍🏼

waiting for the morning romance n looking forward too read their feature life,their understanding,..n lots of hot romance 😉

u r simply great writer mahi ⭐️muaah!!!!!! 🤗

Edited by Rimpi_kmh - 12 years ago

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