Beshram Dilbar&his Blushing Bride-ch.4pg.25UPDTD - Page 8

Originally posted by: Deepika06

Mahi jaan hats off to ur efforts dear 👏 👏 👏 tumara mehnat ka toh kaam aagai it was breathtaking dear so beautifully written 👍🏼 blushing blushing blushing 😳 I loved ter comfort for each other its too pure and too soft 😊 starting may purvi-arohi scene ws so funny 😆 rashi ne bahut sathaya arjun ko bichara kitna desperate tha 😆 thank god rudra and kumuth ws ter to save arjun frm those 3 idiots(rashi,salil,mickael) 😆 dadi and arjun convo ws too hilarious 🤣 kmh2 ka scene yaadh aagaiya 😆 arjuhi kisses wer so so passionate and ter love making was just ossom hotness personified 😳 😳 😳 nw waiting for the morning to come soon hope is raath ka subha jalde ho 😉 love u jaan for tis wonderful update u made my day muaah ❤️ 🤗

thank u so much for ur lovely coment dear

realy happy u lyk my input

meri mehntt vasool

😳 😳 😳

thanks fr reading

love,u

Originally posted by: Jerryberry

reservd

jaldi kro jii waiting 😉

Originally posted by: moonkmh

m blushing 😳m blushing 😳n m blushing 😳

</div>It was haaawwwttt...very well written 👏hats off to U jaaneman😉<div>now it will b exciting to see how their relationship go further. I know there will b problem but right now m enjoying d hot romance n seriously I lovehow they comfort each other.

Sweetheart U R a star⭐️love you ❤️

kyya baat hai..bewafa kanjoos finally gt time 😉

aww... nw,m blushing too 😉

thank,u..glad u enjoy

hope it cm to ur expectation

no no..no drama only reality

muahhh

res, thanks for the update mahi

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

hey mahi ve,

what was that yaaar - oh my God, mahi what just happened - did i really read what i read -what a SR mahi - amazing one - u have become an experienced SR writer i guess - every SR of your stories becomes more and more passionate - great one mahi - u have left me blushing though out

but what was that last line - wont they have a splendid morning tooo mahi? pls dont do anything bad to this couple yaaar - anyway i have faith in you - u will rock as always - will wait for ur next update

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

luv u too mahi ve

Woah I must say the suhaag rat was hot!!

That was hell haaawt and beautifuul :)) extremly well written mahi do :)

wahi hoga jo tumne aaj tak chup chup kr padha hai LMAO... l9 of d era ;)
whenever i think dat isse zada romantic kuch ni ho sakta mahi ka ek naya funda aa jata hai
if SRK is romance king to mere liye mallika-e-romance tm hi ho...n i mean it ;)
actualy ye chup chup kr padhne wali l9 to jese mere hi liye thi hehehehe njoyed a lot se b zada wala fatafat xplain mrng scene m dying to read

super awesome...