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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cooljaya11


Grrr
Don't you see here arohi is main lead n strong character than Arjun
Just read dear again
Here arohi is the person who facing the whole problem n fighter
She is the girl who potryate girl can do anything if she want not boys
Arohi is simply best here
And ha next time arohi ko fairy princess banayi pakaa promise
I was waiting for your comment n look what I get 😭
I Thot you like strong character like arohi





😭 😭 isiliye mai jyada comment nahi karti.

baat ko kaha se kaha le gai

next ff/ss mai arjun ko BHIKHARI ka role dena @:

i liked strong Arohi man but mujhe rona aa jata hai asi garebee dekh kar..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Hey Jaya

AWESOME >...Awesome ...Awesome!!!

Extremely Sorry for my absence dear😳... Just read last 3 parts in one go & to tell you frankly you are outstanding👏...you made me cry while reading it yaar👏...It was extremely touchy😃</font>


<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Splendid Jaya👏Loved each and every bit of it😃</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Absolutely Heart touching & overwhelming updates!!!😊Thanks a lot for the beautiful part.😊Their Love, togetherness is explained So beautifully ki kya batau😃Loved this tale absolutely…..This made me Cry…..it wasn't much sad…...still it tugged at my heart!! Loved the way you have created Arohi's characters. her maturity, struggle, carraige, Hope, she is the strongest & you have written that Brilliantly👏loved the Name of Angle😃Super cute & Differnt too😃whats the meaning of it yaar?Shefali is really a superb Friend she stood by her Side in each & every step👏Really respect there Friendship.😃</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Hated World for behaving in sach a way with Arohi😭what is her mistake if she is orphanbut thankfully Shefali & Romit was there with her on each & every stage ...herAj came in her life with new opes & took her with him in a new world of happiness. their Meeting outside Church written Beautifully👏he forgot his wallet & Arohi help him to buy a candel . he came continuously for 7 days just to thak her & finally get to talk to her after a week ..Loved their meethe called her Rose & she called him AJ😃Extremely beautiful dear. their story started from there. I loved the incidances written by you👏this was truly cute😃</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">I love the lovely moments of togetherness written by you, it was actually a treat. first hugTheir getting lost in each others arms.😊The kiss…… you described it so beautifully dearI can completely imagine them, see even I got lost in them. Frankly can feel their each & every emotions through your writing. Specially Arohi's I was so happy for her ki bata nahi sakti yaar.😊Finally she was getting the feeling of belongingness, someone was waiting for him daily. him holding her in his arms. the feelings oif security for which she craved whole life😃frankly there is so much i am feeling right now but anable to express through words. iu am just blabbring yaar ...Kindly adjust😳</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">their relation & Bond had positivity...hope…..Sharing...romance...compassion... understanding😃...loads of warmth...friendship and above all ...a great relationship that defines Arjuhi😃...A pre magical & surreal bond of togetherness. Being with each other sharing everything. Just amazing.👏👏the time spend by them both was so surreal I hated worden yaar she punished Arohi for coming late that evening & she wasnt allowed to go out for next week ...I can so imagien waht Aj must have felt😭he waited for her for 5 days. while reading that i remeber when they were parting after Xmas😭 he didntwanted to loose her at any cost.😭She became the reason of his happiness & joyin last 44 days. He can't let her go.😊I loved the way u described this, his expression said the whole story that why he gets worried.😊His fear is written on his face. i was feeling so bad both were thinking abt each other but destiny didnt let her meet him. plus her guilt of not telling him abt her life & she is orphan😭Gowd girl you are awesome ...how can you write such stuff yaar ...Brilliant👏</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Arohi had to leave orphange as she got the biggest news of her life but couldnt share with the most important person but she lived & charised the news of her motherhood & welcomed her angle with all smiles.😃Loved Shefali's family & Romit a Lot😃they love angle like their own baby. plus Romit is least bothered what others think or say abt Arohi he is there beside her in every step ...he is a gem👏Shefali talking abt Natasha & Arjun😲you made me really scared there</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Finally Angle ki wagah se Arohi got to know about Arjun😊Arohi's happiness & later after realisation her tears😭you really made us cry😭Arjun too loved her truly & waited for her till date in fect his family kows abt Rose. & now after this sab ko yeh bhi pata chalega that Arohi s rose. their meet after 2 years & 8 mths ...wow what a moment dear ...as a reader my eyes were stuck to screen👏Brilliant write up😊 I am just thinking ab kya hoga ...Arohi finally got some hope to earn money to give her angle beautiful life unlike her & other side arjun didnt know he is a father of her childlife kya kya khel khelti hain yaar</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">What will happen when he will get to know abt everything & how his Rose spend 2 years & 8 mths of her life without him😭even he had a bad time without her & now they met finally. i am thinking so much yaar ab kya kya ho sakta hain😊miyara is super cute yaar</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">cant wait to read what happens next? Romit & arjun talk will change many things now. Arjun felt change in his Rose. she isnt like before now.poor guy will be so upset after listening to everything😊i just hope sab theek ho jaye Aru hi life mein & Arjun;s family accept her yaar. hope she gets all the happiness.</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Waiting Dear for next ...you are a Awesome Writer.

Sorry for my long & ajeeb comment ...i was too excited to write so have written stupid stuff kindly adjust😛</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Love</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#990066">Pranjal.</font>

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nice update dear:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update Di!!!

Go Aj, go get your Rose...

Us Natasha ki toh main...

Arjun has a nice family but he doesn't know still that Arohi is an orphan and most importantly about his kid...

Ab Ariana ko jaldi milwao na Di Arjun se.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dddiii i loved it.. Aww my ajju waited fr his rose??? Poor aru dat orphanage ppl s d reason.. N wait ! Aj told he gave hs details to dat flowershop person ryt??? So omg did he cheat dem?? I guess so.. Shhooo if dat idiot gv d details f aj, araina wd have both her parents with her..
Anyways am glad dat aj wil bring his rose back into hs life.. N he wd be more dan happy to knw abt hs baby who have her fathers features... Blue eyes n dimples awww
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Posted: 12 years ago

U made me cry:'(
Fanally arjun n arohi face to face
Arjun so much in love with arohi!
Their bad luch:(
Arjun's pov is awsum!
Waiting for nxt part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... they met finally, arohi is working in his house, so arjun still loves her, he missed her all time, so cute,
miraya has doubt she is his rose. i want their convo...
its awesome di.
now can't wait for the next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
arjun also equally missed and loved arohi and how living only for her just loved it .
want them to come face to face and what to know what will be arjuns reaction when he will come to know about angel

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG...this is so lovly...jayu...update next soon...i want sme happines...make them meet na...ur thr god now...kuch kar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eagerly waiting for today's update Jayu
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Posted: 12 years ago
pls update, I can't wait pls di.

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