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cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

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my sincere apologies for reading and commenting late.. but i didnot want to comment in a rush! so here goes

part 4:

im amazed by arohis strength! but at the same time i feel sad for her... she wishes god had not made stomach, then half of worlds problems will be over??? she is so right... but the fact that she feels this way coz of her situation is sad

leaving ur baby in a strangers arms and going away... arohis feelings were beautifully written jaya 😭

shefali and romit are two angels themselves in arohis life... bless them 😊

wen AJ met rose... i cant explain! i have read that entire part and arjuns pov in one breath... my heart was beating as fast as arohis 😕

loved loved loved arjuns pov!!! he was so in love with her... poor him! when she didnt turn up and he felt devastated i felt like crying 😭 arohi was a mess too then!!!

i really hope that miraya helps him and arohi to come back together cant stand so much pain 😭

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

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part 5:

arjuns grandma is cooll... i like her! and so is his family... if only arohi agrees now

poor arohi is getting nightmares about her child bein taken away... her fears r so real, kudos jaya! loving the way you are tapping emotions 👏

again... I LOVE ARJUNS GRANDMA!!! 🤗 she is so wise and smart 😳

Miraya look arjun and said " are you ready ?" arjun with rolling eyes " is it working ?" and miraya said " I am not dump like you who forget to ask name of his girl firned "

i love miraaya too 🤣 🤣 🤣

jealous arjun is a treat to watch... anywhere... anytime 😆 thoda jalna to deserve karta hai! dumb kahika 😡

But before she said anything arjun jump " then why are you smiling when she mention kisses ?" miraya glare her impatient idiot asshole brother

hahahahahahaha... thanks jaya... this update made my heart a bit lighter!!! and i love this arjun and his super smart sister ❤️

thanks for the note at the end jaya... i can totally understand arohis insecurities 😭 but i have full faith in arjun, their love and your writing 😆

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cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

part 6:

arjun shefali romit convo was awesome... wen romit held arjuns collar i felt like 👏 totally love shefali n romit in this one!!!

poor arjun... his pain is so real i know its nothing in front of arohis trauma... but still!

And arjun said " aarina " and shefali said " yes your daughter name is aariana". And arjun glare romit and said " stay away from my daughter ".

this was such an AWW moment 😳

arohis shock and possessiveness for angel was so heart wrenching... i hate u jaya! u made me cry 😭😭😭😭😭

arohi with crying " she is not mistake arjun ". Arjun grabb her in hug and arohi cry in burst .arjun kiss her forhead and said " yes rose she is not mistake she is our babby , she is our love ". Arohi cry in burst . all years of pain come out in arjun's warmth .

i still hate u! u made me cry with them 😭

👍🏼 to aariana for snapping at her idiot father!

i loved loved loved this story!!! there was so much pain but so muc happiness in the end 😃

awesome writing jaya 👏 loved this rose and AJ... super!!!

thank you for writing this... pls write more... im waiting for TMRDH and YHPPK update now 😆

P.S. I LOVE YOU ❤️ 🤗

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KaranKittu4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Jayuu di🤗Thank you so much for this beautiful story I got so attached to it so quickly❤️

AJ and Rose's unique love story is one i won't forget these two are adorable and have been through a lot without each other and at last you reunited them!!

They way Shefali told the truth was great and AJ finally knowing everything and realizing wut he has missed out on. His happiness of his daughter and tears of joy! Beautiful!

Adorable end, Arohi realized she has her AJ back and he is here to support her and love her for eternity with their Angel and she welcomes him with open arms! Lovely! Finally Angel forgives her daddaa too! Cutee!

Thank you for this SS di❤️

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arjuhi_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

first of all jaya..thankyou so much for the wonderful ss..a beautiful end i must say to a beautiful story..

shefali and romit played an imp role at the end..loved arjun's family..u portrayed the story so beautifully..i am speechless..want more of arjuhi from u..

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