NEW SS:IT WAS NOT MISTAKE!BUT ITIS A?part6 page30 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik

hehe! Edited my comment di! I am the first one to comment Snehu :P :D

Originally posted by: Broken_Heart

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ab hum last ane ka compitition rakhnege bolo???
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Originally posted by: Broken_Heart

next time arjun ko garib bole toh BHIKHARI banana!!!!
aur meri Arohi ko princess banayoh
@:@:@@@@ hate garib Arohi
Y always MY arohi it's remind me YHHPK 1 KI AROHI 😭

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Jaya

AWESOME >...Awesome ...Awesome!!!

Extremely Sorry for my absence dear 😳... Just read last 3 parts in one go & to tell you frankly you are outstanding 👏...you made me cry while reading it yaar 👏...It was extremely touchy 😃

Splendid Jaya 👏 Loved each and every bit of it 😃

Absolutely Heart touching & overwhelming updates!!! 😊 Thanks a lot for the beautiful part. 😊 Their Love, togetherness is explained So beautifully ki kya batau 😃 Loved this tale absolutely'..This made me Cry'..it wasn't much sad'...still it tugged at my heart!! Loved the way you have created Arohi's characters. her maturity, struggle, carraige, Hope, she is the strongest & you have written that Brilliantly 👏 loved the Name of Angle 😃 Super cute & Differnt too 😃 whats the meaning of it yaar? Shefali is really a superb Friend she stood by her Side in each & every step 👏 Really respect there Friendship. 😃

Hated World for behaving in sach a way with Arohi 😭 what is her mistake if she is orphan but thankfully Shefali & Romit was there with her on each & every stage ...herAj came in her life with new opes & took her with him in a new world of happiness. their Meeting outside Church written Beautifully 👏 he forgot his wallet & Arohi help him to buy a candel . he came continuously for 7 days just to thak her & finally get to talk to her after a week ..Loved their meet he called her Rose & she called him AJ 😃 Extremely beautiful dear. their story started from there. I loved the incidances written by you 👏 this was truly cute 😃

I love the lovely moments of togetherness written by you, it was actually a treat. first hug Their getting lost in each others arms. 😊 The kiss'' you described it so beautifully dear I can completely imagine them, see even I got lost in them. Frankly can feel their each & every emotions through your writing. Specially Arohi's I was so happy for her ki bata nahi sakti yaar. 😊 Finally she was getting the feeling of belongingness, someone was waiting for him daily. him holding her in his arms. the feelings oif security for which she craved whole life 😃 frankly there is so much i am feeling right now but anable to express through words. iu am just blabbring yaar ...Kindly adjust 😳

their relation & Bond had positivity...hope'..Sharing...romance...compassion... understanding 😃...loads of warmth...friendship and above all ...a great relationship that defines Arjuhi 😃...A pre magical & surreal bond of togetherness. Being with each other sharing everything. Just amazing. 👏 👏 the time spend by them both was so surreal I hated worden yaar she punished Arohi for coming late that evening & she wasnt allowed to go out for next week ...I can so imagien waht Aj must have felt 😭 he waited for her for 5 days. while reading that i remeber when they were parting after Xmas 😭 he didnt wanted to loose her at any cost.😭 She became the reason of his happiness & joyin last 44 days. He can't let her go. 😊 I loved the way u described this, his expression said the whole story that why he gets worried. 😊 His fear is written on his face. i was feeling so bad both were thinking abt each other but destiny didnt let her meet him. plus her guilt of not telling him abt her life & she is orphan 😭 Gowd girl you are awesome ...how can you write such stuff yaar ...Brilliant 👏

Arohi had to leave orphange as she got the biggest news of her life but couldnt share with the most important person but she lived & charised the news of her motherhood & welcomed her angle with all smiles. 😃 Loved Shefali's family & Romit a Lot 😃 they love angle like their own baby. plus Romit is least bothered what others think or say abt Arohi he is there beside her in every step ...he is a gem 👏 Shefali talking abt Natasha & Arjun 😲 you made me really scared there

Finally Angle ki wagah se Arohi got to know about Arjun 😊 Arohi's happiness & later after realisation her tears 😭 you really made us cry 😭 Arjun too loved her truly & waited for her till date in fect his family kows abt Rose. & now after this sab ko yeh bhi pata chalega that Arohi s rose. their meet after 2 years & 8 mths ...wow what a moment dear ...as a reader my eyes were stuck to screen 👏 Brilliant write up 😊 I am just thinking ab kya hoga ...Arohi finally got some hope to earn money to give her angle beautiful life unlike her & other side arjun didnt know he is a father of her child life kya kya khel khelti hain yaar

What will happen when he will get to know abt everything & how his Rose spend 2 years & 8 mths of her life without him 😭 even he had a bad time without her & now they met finally. i am thinking so much yaar ab kya kya ho sakta hain 😊 miyara is super cute yaar

cant wait to read what happens next? Romit & arjun talk will change many things now. Arjun felt change in his Rose. she isnt like before now. poor guy will be so upset after listening to everything 😊 i just hope sab theek ho jaye Aru hi life mein & Arjun;s family accept her yaar. hope she gets all the happiness.

Waiting Dear for next ...you are a Awesome Writer.

Sorry for my long & ajeeb comment ...i was too excited to write so have written stupid stuff kindly adjust 😛

Love

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: sehar123

havent read part 4 yet..but after ur comment i will read all three parts all over again and then part 4...