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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zoya_naziya

You're an amazing and brilliant writer... I am completely truly in love with your story...


Awesome Blossom:):)

And i am liking the fact that you are exploring every small thing that was ignored/left untouched by the CV's...

thanks zoya! i loved all the characters in kmh2 and felt that they were unique in themselves and could have done a lot to take the story ahead... even rudras character! so im trying in my own way to give them justice... your comment is very encouraging 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

do u knw wat i luvd most abt this update?

rashi-rajveer meeting and their small convo..
jus lyk mannu i had always felt that the character of rashi wasn't well explored in the serial.. there ws so much potential in that character..
i am happy you are exploring that character well..
and there are people in both singhania and ahluwalia families who are working together to make the two love birds unite..
i still can't believe arjun gave up so easily.. which is why i don't believe anything that came out of his mouth..
surely somethng is missing.. my arjun won't do this!

thanks achu... regarding arjun you'll get your answers, but not so soon 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

nyc work dear👏👏 n

thanks dear... wish you a very happy diwali too :)))

whats your name girl???
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Posted: 12 years ago
We have full faith on u & your writing
Its an fantastic , awesome update . . .
I just loved the "Rajveer-Rashi" . . .scenes!!
Take ur time bt continue soon . . . can't wait for Arjun-Arohi meeting!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
love the updt...
dont worrry dear...u write the way u want u write...
no need to rush...
as they say sabr ka meetha hota hai...😳
waiting fr arjuhi's meet😉
thnx fr the pm...
happy diwali😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 6 a

The automated doors opened as Arjun approached them. Buttoning up his coat, he entered the mall and proceeded towards the lifts. He had gelled his hair today for the meeting with the overseas client, as if his navy blue suit with a white shirt and bright yellow tie didn't make him look hot enough. Every female eye had turned towards him the moment he had entered. Following, worshipping, ogling gazes accompanied him till the doors of the lift shut, cutting off the privileged view of this greek god. Women around him in the lift had to strain their necks to take in his complete 6 foot form as they were standing too close. Arjun looked around as a short, aged, plump, smiling woman with a mop of white hair, caught his attention when she winked at him. He adjusted his tie in discomfort and moved back a step, only to crash into a guy. As Arjun turned around to apologise, the guy looked shyly at him and smiled. Completely flustered, Arjun got off as soon as the lift doors opened, not bothering to check which floor he had got off on.

He stood looking lost on the womens clothing floor. Right in front of the lingerie section.

***

"Oh my god! You look so pretty." Shefali screamed seeing Arohi in the pure white wedding gown.

Arohi smiled at her reflection in the mirror. She DID look very pretty.

"Haina. Ye dress kitni pyaari hai. Dekh isska flair kitna bada hai." Arohi turned around 180 degrees to give Shefali a complete view of the dress, making it balloon up. She held the two sides with her hands and waved them around as if she were dancing.

Shefali looked at her best friends lit up face. This is was the first time in weeks that Arohi has given a genuine smile. She seemed happy. Excited. Shopping really is a womans best de-stresser. Or is there something else?

"Tujhe pata hai shefali… jab mein choti thi aur christian weddings dekhti thi na, tab I used to dream of wearing a pure white wedding gown with a veil… walking down the aisle, sprinkled with rose petals… a peach coloured bouquet of flowers in my hands." Arohi sighed dreamily as she went back in time to relive the innocent dream that she had harbored as a 6 year old.

"Aur gale mein sirf ek pearl necklace… haina?" Shefali joined in painting the rosy picture.

"Hmm…" Arohi agreed distractedly as she once again checked herself in the full height mirror. The smile refusing to leave her face.

Snapping back from her trance, Arohi turned and spoke excitedly to Shefali. "Tujhe pata hai, hamare class mein ek christian ladka bhi tha, David naam tha usska. Haaye… bada hi cute tha! Usske wo dimples… Saari class ki ladkiyaan marti thi usske un dimples pe! Aur kuch seniors bhi… lekin wo, wo sirf mujhe pasand karta tha. Mere liye christmas pe cakes laata tha, mein bhi diwali mein usske liye mithai laati thi iss hopes mein ki shayad hum dono bade hoke shaadi kare aur mujhe wo gown pehenneka mauka miley!"

Arohi and Shefali chuckled at the same time. Shefali could not believe this is the same Arohi from yesterday. She had seemed so subdued and lost, mechanical even. But today seeing her old best friend back Shefali's heart burst with unusual happiness. She just wished that the smile should not slip from her face in sometime, that her happiness increase ten-fold and not diminish, at what she had planned exclusively for her.

She watched Arohi turn back to the mirror and smile at her fond memories.

"Tu bilkul doll lagrahi hai Arohi… Wo wedding cakes ke upar rehte haina. Ek suit pehna huaa ladka aur usske side mein ek gown pehni hui ladki. Bass ab sirf ek ladka dhundle to stand next to you. Toh picture ekdam complete hojayega."

Arohis brains digested this information as her eyes caught something behind her. Not something… Someone. As the reality of the situation seeped into her memory muddled brain, her smile started to slip from her lips.

***

"Ullu ka pattha… Duffer kahika! Pehle to phone karke mujhe pareshaan kiya, aur ab usska phone unavailable aa raha hai. Pata nahi kaha shopping karraha hai jab isske jeb mein paise bhi nahi hain. Ab mein kaise dhundu iss Romit ko?!"

Staring at his phone, trying to send Romit a text, Arjun was muttering to himself as he roamed the floor with a huge amount of woman rushing around him, trying to get to the shop of their liking for shopping or coming out of the shops and rushing home. Trying to dodge them as much as possible, Arjun again tried calling Romit. He placed the phone near his ears to hear the ringing of Romits phone, with a scowl on his face, when he saw something.

A vision in white.

An angel descended from the heavens.

The most prettiest face with a heart warming smile on her lips.

A dancing figurine, playfully displaying her innocent mind.

His feet automatically took him around the glass barrier to enter the shop where the object of his attention was located, his mind was completely enchanted.

The full height glass window seemed to be a window to his heart where he was seeing his dream play in front of him as he walked in a trance.

His body was on auto pilot and his mind took him back to a distant memory.

A similar vision in white. Laughing, as she played with rose petals flowing on her saree clad sexy body. The laughter streaming from her lips like pearls showering on the floor after the breaking of a necklace. Her innocent eyes crinking with happiness, laced with mischief, that was completely adorable. Her smile as radiant as the sun rays on a cold January morning, bringing immediate warmth by just the presence of it, it made the crude jungle also seem like paradise. The artificial wind created by the table fan, blowing her silky soft hair away from her face, her shoulders. Her spaghetti strapped white blouse, displaying her sun-kissed shoulder for his shameless gazing. Her beautiful, flawless, milky white skin, glowing with happiness that came very easily to this stubborn, strong minded, gorgeous girl.

Not girl… a young woman. At that moment, Arohi had suddenly grown up in his eyes. He had looked at her as a spoilt child, the laadli grand daughter of Kartar Singh Ahluwalia. Many a times she had seemed to him like an irritating brat, a pestering but innocent soul, who saw the world with clear eyes. That quality had struck to him hard, because he himself could never do that. Life had shown him too much to be that nave. But this girl, who wore her heart on her sleeve, not caring much incase it breaks, believing in constantly being postitive or meeting the love of her life on a certain midnight, no matter how hopeless the situation or funny the idea, had impressed and amazed him. But she had not attracted him… until now!

That day she had metamorphosed from a sweet innocent irritating girl to a beautiful naughty sexy woman. He had not been able to tear his gaze away from her. And when she had done the hot rain dance… that was the death of him! The resisting, in control of the situation, determined arjun, had left… to never return again when it came to this woman. He had tried consciously to avert his eyes, stop his feet from approaching her, pull back his mind from getting consumed with her thoughts, and had failed miserably.

He had wanted to grab her and kiss her wet lips then. The only thought that he remembered which had ruled his mind. Rest all was faded, as if not important enough to be stored in his memory. He had never willingly or forcibly pursued a woman. His charm and mysterious quality used to draw them to him like a moth to a flame. And they were the easiest one to be with. It gave him the power, the upper hand, since they were smitten by him and not vice versa. It gave him the authority to break their hearts, later on claiming that it was HER who had wanted him. It helped him stay in control of his life and his feelings. But his entire theory of attraction and rules for love and relationships went down the drain that day.

He had never been attracted to any woman this way before… women for him were things to play with. A toy to entertain himself in between his work and family. But they were never his priority, he would make sure that they would never be. But this child-woman had possessed him completely and that thought, that all-consuming feeling scared him… even today.

If only his mind was active then he would realise that he was repeating history. But then, his eyes had also been starved of this exclusive beauty for a very long time now, and hence he just got sucked in to living the feeling that elated and scared his heart at the same time. He walked like a zombie, towards Arohi, his eyes not leaving her form for even a slightest of second, to not even blink. As if, there was string attached between her and his eyes, holding which he was pulling himself towards her, unconsciously.

By the time his mind started clearing a bit, he was already standing behind her, staring at her reflection in the mirror. She was talking to shefali, unaware of the man behind her, whose gaze was roaming hungrily over her form, like a man starved. Her sweet melodious voice was honey to his ears. But the words werent.

***

Romit slurped the last drop of his coffee loudly before setting the cup down on the table, and raising his eyes to see Sanchit staring at him with disgust.

"Hogaya??? Ya kuch coffee bachi hai? Chaahe to dhakkan kholke check kar le…" Sanchit frowned at his new found best friends garrish display of consuming beverages.

Romit smiled sheepishly and checked his watch. "Bhai ko ab tak aa jaana chahiye tha naa… Pata nahi kaha reh gaye!"

"Agar Raj ne kuch maanga hai toh jeeju jaroor aayenge. Shayad meeting mein late ho gaye honge. I just hope hum tab tak Arohi ko rok paaye yaha. Warna ye plan bhi flop ho jaayega aur pata nahi next plan kab bann paayega."

"Tujhe lagta hai agar ye plan successful ho bhi gaya to wo dono khush honge? Mujhe to darr lagraha hai kahi bro mera gala na kaat de." Romit gulped trying to imagine the pain that he would have to endure.

"Gala tab kaatenge jab unhe pata chalega ki humne ye plan banaya hai. This is a mall. Hundreds of people walk in everyday here. If he meets her here then it can very well be a coincidence." Sanchit finished making a rational point in the argument.

"I hope you're right man. But jab Bro ki baat aati haina to mujhe lagta hai unka shaitani dimaag aise plans soong leta hai."

"Chill yaar. Chahiye to ek aur coffee pi le. Waise why don't you call jeeju yourself. He should be here by now, aur Arohi ka mujhe kabhi bhi phone aa sakta hai. Mujhe bhi chachu ki maar khaane ka koi shauk nahi hai."

Romit thought it was a good idea and he pulled out his phone from his pant pocket.

"SHIT SHIT SHIT!!!"

"Kya hua!" Sanchit stared worriedly as Romit jumped out of his chair and started screaming.

"I don't have signal! No wonder Bro didn't call me. Unka phone hi nahi laga hoga!! Dammit!!! Im so dead Sanchit."

"Oh god!! Ek kaam karte hai… Switch your phone off and back on. Shayad signal aajaye. Lets go near the window. Waha shayad signal catch karega."

Rushing near the window, Romit did as Sanchit said. The moment his phone switched back on, it beeped twice, indicating he had received two messages. One was informing him about the missed calls and second was from his Arjun Bro. Romit looked at Sanchit and gulped. His finger browsed the cursor to the second message and closing his eyes for a brief minute in a silent prayer, he opened it.

CHECK NEXT POST FOR THE PART B

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Part 6 b

By now Arjun had gotten a grip on his mind, in time to listen to Arohi share her memory of when she was a child. Whose dimples was she talking about? Did she mention marriage and some guy in the same sentence? Regarding HER??? Suddenly his mind was alert to the talks that these two best friends were sharing. He agreed with Shefali, she did look like a doll, but his conscious mind had taken over, totally enraged at the dream of a 10-year old girl, of marrying some moron named David.

At the exact same moment, Arohi turned to adore herself in the mirror and saw his suit-clad perfect body standing a couple of inches behind her. But in the mirror it displayed a hot sexy man with gelled hair, wearing a perfect suit, standing next to a beauty in a white gown, like two figurines on top of a three tiered wedding cake, a picture painted few seconds ago by Shefali.

They stared at each other through the reflection, when Arohis smile slipped on seeing the silent rage in his eyes.

"ARJUN!!!" Shefali's scream brought Arjun and Arohi out from their trance and broke their eye lock.

She rushed to him and hugged him tightly as Arjuns hands went around Shefali. Even when Arjun had forcibly married Arohi, Shefali had still maintained her friendship with him. Refusing to acknowledge her best friends hostile feelings as a valid reason to keep her distance from Arjun. And she had truly been a great friend, to him and Arohi both.

"Kaisi ho Shefali?" Arjun asked pulling back from her hug and smiling.

"Mein thik hu lekin tum yahan kya karrahe ho? It sooo nice to see you after so long." Shefali smiled with genuine happiness on her face. She was truly happy to see him, and happy for Arohi.

"Woh mein… Raj ke liye kuch toys lene aaya tha." Arjun blurted out.

Shefali saw Arohi stiffen from the corner of her eye on Raj's name. She knew Arohis feelings for her foster son, and how everyone had avoided mentioning him in front of her. She threw a quick glance in her direction to see her eyes tear up, before she looked around, feigning ignorance. She had to do something, this was not how this meeting was supposed to go. Quickly turning to Arjun, she said the first thing that came to her mind.

"Tum Raj ke liye games lene aaye ho??? Yaha??? Lingerie section mein???"

Arohis ears perked up as she realised this minor detail. What was he doing in the lingerie section? What games do they sell here for a 6 year old??? Was Arjun lying??? She turned towards him, hands crossed across her chest, waiting for him to answer as her foot started tapping impatiently.

Arjun frowned. What was he supposed to say now? That his heart had drawn him to his ex-wife, who had left him a couple of weeks back? That she still rules his heart and he can act like a complete idiot in front of her??? Or that her mentioning some guy, even a childhood crush can boil his blood and make him do the most unthinkable. 'No Arjun.' He chided himself. 'Remember that You.Dont.Care. You are not jealous. You will not react. You are going to compose yourself and deal with this situation with dignity and maturity.'

"Haaannn… Naaiii… woh…… tum bhi toh yaha iss section mein ho aur gowns try karrahi ho." Arjun finished the sentence, turning the tables on them and looked at Arohi accusingly.

"Hum to yuhi try karrahe they… for fun. Aur yahan issliye hain kyuki waha pe saare fitting rooms busy they. Lekin tum mera question kyu avoid karrahe ho??? Lingerie section mein kaunse toys lene aaye ho?" Shefali asked him teasingly.

Arohi was watching this friendly banter, only interested in his answer.

Arjun thought Arohi would be the one offering the explaination and then he would cross question her on the wedding gown. And David. But he will not be the one to start the conversation. Arohi will HAVE TO talk to him first, and he knew how to make Arohi talk. Bhaad mein gayi maturity and integrity!!!

Clearing his throat, Arjun started, "Actually mere kehne ka matlab hai ki mein MALL mein toys lene aaya hu. Lekin ye section mein... mai… woh… ahem… apni nayi secretary ke liye gift lene aaya hu." This time Arjun avoided looking at Arohi after he finished talking.

Arohi felt as if someone had slapped her. Nayi secretary? Gift? Lingerie??? Kaun apni nayi secretary ko lingerie gift karta hai? Lekin Arjun Singhania kar sakta hai. Arohi was vibrating with jealousy and anger. She had to let it all out, thrash him verbally for even thinking something so cheap. If she kept it inside her then she might slip into coma due to excessive emotional haemmorage. Finally when she could not take it anymore, she looked at Shefali and spoke, because she will be damned if SHE spoke to HIM first!

"Dekha Shefali… Kaise cheap log hai iss duniya mein, Secretary nahi koi girlfriend hui jaise… Bichhari, wo jo bhi hai. Kaam shuru kiya bhi nahi aur boss ne tharkipan dikhana shuru kar diya."

"Shefaaaleee…" Arjun started, his eyes quickly checking on Arohi, enjoying her fuming self and imagining smoke coming out of her ears and nose. "Tumhe kuch jalne ki smell aarahi hai kya? Waise TUM ho issliye batata hu. Meri nayi secretary bohat modern hai you know… Salwar kameez wagaire nahi pehenti, only skirts, minis, micro minis. Aur usska naam bhi usski personality ki tarah hai. Valentine D'souza. Ab ladki jab itni modern ho toh, she will not mind if I give her a nice lingerie, as long as it is tasteful. Haina???"

Arohi rolled her eyes and muttered to herself. "Valentine… ye kaisa naam hai? Ladki hai ya koi saint!"

Shefali was staring at Arjun and then Arohi and then Arjun again. Switching her eyes back and forth to the conversation directed at her, yet feeling completely out of it. She felt like grabbing both of their heads and knocking them against each other. They were seeing each other after more than a month and still could not show their real feelings even for a micro second. Sighing at their stubborness she realised that SHE will have to steer the conversation in the desired direction. Where was her boyfriend when she needed him??!!"

***

"WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU??? AND WHY IS YOU PHONE UNREACHABLE??? IM IN THE MALL. CALL ME AS SOON AS YOU GET THIS MESSAGE. ASAP!!!"

Romit read Arjuns message for the third time. Why did god hate him so much? Kisika achha karne jaao aur ussi se gaaliyan khaao. Sending a message is safer. He quickly typed a message and sent it. He sent one more message and turned to Sanchit.

"Bro aagaye hain. Maine unse keh diya hain ki hum, mera matlab hai ki mein ground floor pe hoon. Aur Shefali ko bhi msg kar diya hai. So lets go down."

"Ok." Sanchit and Romit both started to go downstairs.

"Waise plan kya hai? I mean sirf un dono ko saamne laane ka koi faayda nahi. We will have to make them talk."

"Exactly. Issliye thodi der baad, tum shefali aur bhabhi neeche aajana bill bharne ke liye. Sms me, so that I make sure hum bhi billing ki line mein ho. Tab hum sab jhooth ka natak karenge milne ka. Tum Bro se baat karna aur mein bhabhi ko emotional banaunga. Hopefully wo dono koi aisi baat karenge jisse ya to humey koi clue mil jaaye ki problem kya hai, ya wo dono ko hint mil jaaye that how much they miss each other."

"You think this will work? I mean wo dono jab pyar se saath mein rehte they tabbi 24x7 jhagre karte they. Aur abb to unke paas jhagrey larney ke kai reasons hai."

"Risk toh hai. But we will have to take it. Kuch nai to humey hamari next move ke liye koi clue mil jaayega."

Romit turned towards Sanchit but he was not there. Looking around he tried to locate Sanchit, when he saw him standing behind a pillar, hiding, and franctically pointing a finger in his direction, as if asking Romit to look behind. Confused Romit turned around to confront Arjun Singhania's murderous gaze.

"Tuney to kaha tha tu ground floor pe hai. To tu yaha kya karraha hai???" Arjun cocked one eyebrow and glared at him.

"Woh mein coffee peene gaya tha upar jab tak aap nai aate. Lekin aap itne gusse mein kyu lagrahe ho?"

"Kuch nai… Chal neeche." Grabbing Romits arm Arjun started dragging him towards the escalator. Cheap… She had called him cheap. And tharki! Arjun was fuming with anger, and to top that she had dismissed him and walked away to change as if he was nobody. Well he will show her.

***

"Hum yaha kyu aaye hai? Billing counter toh upar ke floor pe bhi thaa na???" Arohi asked exasperated as Shefali had dragged her to the ground floor mens section for payment. She was already irritated with Arjuns shameless display of interest in his "to-be-appointed" secretary, and now her friend was irritating her more.

"Unka credit card ka machine nahi chal raha tha Arohi. Tu itni irritated kyu hai? Thodi der pehle to tera mood achha tha. Ye jo kurta tuney liya hai wo bohat cute hai." Shefali was desperately trying to change her mood, preparing for the next turn of events.

"Mujhe bas ghar jana hai. DJ mera intezaar karrahi hongi." Arohi turned towards the cash counter and placed her purchase and credit card on it, just as another hand placed a couple of video games and another card next to it.

Arjun and Arohi looked up to meet each others angry gazes.

"Tum??!!" They both screamed in unison.

"Tum yahan bhi aagaye… Tum kahi mera peecha toh nahi karrahe???" Forgetting her vow to not talk to him first, Arohi burst at the opportunity to fire at Arjun.

"Oh hello… Mujhe tumhara peecha karneka koi shauk nahi hai! Aur waise bhi MAINE tumhe bataya tha ki mein toys lene aaya hu. Aur TUM yaha aayi ho. Kahi tum mera peecha toh nahi karrahi???"

"Tumhara peecha karey meri jooti. Mujhe aise tharki logon ki shakal dekhna bhi pasand nahi hai." Arohi turned her face away from Arjuns glowering one.

Three people were shaking their heads in despair, as if this action might magically change the situation.

"Are you both together???"

Arjun and Arohis heads snapped to look at the cash counter attendant in disbelief, as if she had grown two heads.

Arohi found her voice first. "Together?? Hum aapko together nazar aate hain!!! Aise insaan ke saath "together" hone se achha mein marr jana pasand karungi!"

"Aur aisi junglee billi ke saath together rehne se achha mein himalaya jaake sanyaas le lunga."

The attendant stared at both of them as they continued their staring match.

"Hi jeeju" "Hi Bhabhi" Sanchit and Romit walked in to salvage the situation. Arjun and Arohi calmed down enough, to acknowledge them with a small smile. Their faces showed the turmoil of emotions running in their minds as they avoided looking at each other.

Romit asked the counter attendant to bill Arohi first. Arjun took a step back, as if accepting defeat silently. Romit tried to make small talk with Arohi till her bill got cleared, whereas she responded to him in monosyllables. Shefali and Sanchits heart was breaking to watch the two most amazing people, who belonged together, act like strangers.

"Bye Romit. Take care… Apna aur Raj, Dadi, Rashi ka khayal rakhna." Arohi spoke as every word choked her voice with emotions. Arjun watched her face even though she refused to look at him. Taking her card and shopping, Arohi moved away without a backward glance. This was the second time in one day that she was walking away from him.

***

Romit was checking the games bought by Arjun, walking towards the exit. Arjun had gone ahead to take an important call and asked him to pick up the packages and meet him near the car. As he turned a corner, Arohi called out to him. Turning back, Romit waited as Arohi came near and slipped a small package in his hands.

"Ye meri taraf se Raj ko de dena. Aur kehna ki usski Arohi mom usse bohat miss karti hai." Arohis eyes filled with tears, as Romits hand covered hers.

"Hum sab bhi aapko miss karte hai bhabhi. Bohat." Romit smiled at her. Arohi smiled a watery smile and said, "Mein bhi."

"Aur mein sab ka khayal rakhunga… Bro ka bhi." Arohis head jerked up to see the understanding in Romits eyes. She looked away before Romit could read her. Pulling her hand away from his grip, she walked away towards the parking lot. Romit looked at Shefali and Sanchit, who were standing a few feet behind. The three planners sharing a happy smile with only one thought in their mind… All is not lost!

***

"Do you remember anyone in particular? Koi purani dushmani ya…"

"Uhuh… Dushman to bohat hain. Lekin unme koi ladki nahi hai."

"Probably a lover scorned. A heart broken womans revenge is the most dangerous."

"Nope. Ive never dated anyone from my business contacts. This is the reason Ive always kept my personal and professional life separate. Hamare profession mein dushman ko dost, aur dost ko dushman banne mein time nahi lagta."

"To phir, kaun ho sakti hai? Can we just discuss this with the others???

"Maine tumse pehle hi kaha hai ki mein kisi aur ko involve nahi karna chahta. I cannot put anymore lives in danger!!!"

"But Arjun…"

"No buts!!! You're involved only because I didn't have a choice warna…"

"Im involved because I didn't leave you any choice!!! Anyway if you do remember or hear anything, make sure you inform me. I'll try to find it out from my end. And take care."

"Yea… you too." Arjun smiled as he jogged away towards his house.

Arjun checked his watch for the umpteenth time, wondering why Romit is taking so long to pick up the bags. He decided to put his brain to better use while he waits instead of calling Romit names. The conversation played over and over in his mind but everytime, in the end only one question was killing him inside.

'Kya maine usse bhi involve karke thik kiya???'


Sorry for the delay. Hope you enjoyed this diwali dhamaka episode!!! As you can see i got carried away and had to post this in two parts. Next update will be after 18th.

Happy diwali to all of you... May this diwali bring happiness and prosperity to you and your family 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! Super dhamaka update! I loved it. Bhad main jaye maturity,i love my crazy arjuhi. Love love love evry1. Muaaah di,u jst made my day.btw m sad dat m nt gettng my b'day update;-( wl miss it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kickass update!!!! Loved every single detail and scene to bits!!!!!! And with every update, you are just creating more and more suspense... And who is the "usse" now?

a big🤗from me:) Such a captivating and an engrossing story...

Happy Diwali and enjoy your holidays!!
Edited by zoya_naziya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my God, this is getting more and more, more and more interesting sheetal
Haha loved valentine d'souza part -
So the efforts of sanchut, Romit and shefu has finally paid off (though not in the way as desired by them)
Hmmm, the conversation, rewinding and playing in Arjun's mind - whom did he speak to - who is it????
Classic update sheetal - loved it

Happy Diwali dear

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