FF Going Forward KMH-PartIV-Page44-14th june - Page 9

thanks for the clarification i understand, but still feel you are going a bit slow, maybe i'm so used to your ff at it was in the beginning that things did happen quicker, i dont mean every update but after at least four but now feels like this track for family bonding has been going on for ages, no arohi for ages, i understand that your establishing their relationships but it doesnt feel like that its a arjun arohi ff, it feels just like and arjun ff.

Originally posted by: sezo

thanks for the clarification i understand, but still feel you are going a bit slow, maybe i'm so used to your ff at it was in the beginning that things did happen quicker, i dont mean every update but after at least four but now feels like this track for family bonding has been going on for ages, no arohi for ages, i understand that your establishing their relationships but it doesnt feel like that its a arjun arohi ff, it feels just like and arjun ff.

i dont want you for force arohi entry but dont you feel when your husband and wife and love each other you want to share things, doesnt feel like in your ff that they are coming to gether or arohi maturing.

sorry if it feels like i complaining. but i still like your ff. evan if no arohi for now.

Scene327 Gunjan's birthday celebration

Karan pulls her back. Gunjan looks at him and he shakes his head to cool down and not get angry. Dadaji shakes his head and Arjun smiles.

Raj laughs: Gunjan didi is hitler

PRS: When I am escaping my responsibilities as a father and never here how did I spoil angel? Its you who are here always with her that responsibility goes to you only

Yashu not ready to give in: Whattt? She is your daughter gone on you. Do you listen to me nooo like that only your daughter does not listen to meee

Dadaji ordering: Ok leave it now. Come lets cut cake all are getting late to go home

Yashu: But dada

Dadaji stares at her: Keep quiet and come to party both of you

Yashu and PRS realize they are fighting around friends Arjun and Raj and keep quiet. Yashu wants to fight more but dadaji's stare makes her keep quiet.

PRS cools down and goes forward to take Gunjan to cut cake. In rage he had forgotten today is his small angel his princess birthday.

Gunjan cuts cake and feeds PRS, Karan, mom, dadaji, Arjun and Raj. She is angry with PRS and is full of nakra with him in party. Like she first gives cake to him and before he bites it removes and gives to Karan. All guests laugh looking at Rajkumari Gunjan who is playing games and misbehaving with PRS their Maharaj the 6^th richest person in world.

PRS takes it sportingly and smiles at his angel Gunjan's anger filled antics towards him and tries to pacify her but to no avail. Arjun smiles looking at his parents and siblings today in party a perfect family except missing one member him, how he wished he was part of their family? Buttt dreams are only that dreams.

Scene328 Gunjan-Raj argument

The kids start playing and Gunjan pulls Arjun and Karan also in the games. Karan is scared at what his father will say and looks at him. PRS nods to carry on and join in the games after all its his baby sister's birthday today. Karan very happy and joins in the games with other kids.

But Gunjan and Raj cannot have enough of the games. They include all maids, servants and Yashodhara along with Arjun and Karan in games. Its 12pm already and while playing and running around Yashodhara slips and falls and has sprained her leg.

Karan: Shall I call doctor mom?

Arjun: Shall I try ma'am if you do not mind?

Karan: Do it fast, why will mom mind?

PRS has just returned and is watching this from far.

Arjun: Is it paining now Ma'am?

Yashodhara: No beta, thanks a lot, Your hands have magic and takes his hand and kisses them.

Karan: Arrey waah, Arjun you are an expert healer

Arjun: My didi says cure is in the love and dedication of the healer

Yashodhara: Wow, your sister is very correct beta. Indeed healing is in the love of the person not in any medicine.

Raj: You included aunty in play, your fault

Gunjan: Your fault

Raj: Your fault

Raj angrily: You made my dad get scolding in front of everyone, its your fault only

Arjun: Rajjj

Arjun looks at Yashodhara and Karan who are feeling bad

Arjun hugs her: That's ok baby, I did not feel bad at all

Raj throws balloon on her face. Gunjan back to normal starts chasing him.

Karan, Arjun and Yashodhara smile

lovely update!!!waiting for the next part!!!!!

Scene329 PRS asks pardon from Arjun

Yashodhara gets up and holds both his hands: Sorry Arjun. I apologise on behalf of Gunjan's dad. He is a bit over emotional about Gunjan because she is small. And you know for all fathers daughters are their life nooo. I am very sorry beta

Arjun: No Ma'am you do not have to apologise. I can understand it was a father's love and concern for his childs well being that Sir got angry. Indeed I am sorry for taking her to mela without your permission.

Arjun observes his father looking guilty and goes to him.

PRS: Arjun, I know what I said was unpardonable, but if possible forgive me

Arjun: Please Sir, I did not feel bad. Do not ask sorry, you are elder to me what you said was correct. It was my fault only.

Arjun hears beta word first time from PRS mouth and gets emotional and has tears in eyes.He keeps staring his father teary eyed.

Arjun looks into his father eyes and sees an emotion an emotion of guilt. For past 2 months since he knows PRS not once his father's eyes have shown any expression not once. First time he sees an expression of guilt.

Good one prem - pls continue

thanks for the pm, i understand what your trying to say, please continue soon.

Scene330 PRS consoles a tearful Arjun

Arjun: No Sir, I am very lucky to have such a great father

PRS: Never met your father ever but I guess he is a great person by looking at you and your character

Arjun thinks: You are right, he is great indeed greatest papa in the world and that's you

Arjun suddenly sees a bandage on PRS hand hidden by his suit

Arjun concerned: Sir, what happened bandage?

PRS looks at his hand a small piece of bandage is seen outside the suit sleeves

PRS smiles: Ohhh this, a small hurt very small hurt

Arjun tensed: How did it get hurt pa Sir Sir?

PRS pulls his sleeves forward to hide it: Nothing Arjun, got injured around the house

Arjun: Take care sir please

PRS smiles and holds Arjun elbow: Thanks a lot Arjun, I will take care

Yashodhara: Prithvi, Arjun come for dinner

Originally posted by: sezo

thanks for the pm, i understand what your trying to say, please continue soon.