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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

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read the three updates in one go - good updates prem - pls continue

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Scene324 Arjun admits his fault

Gunjan looks scared. Her father rarely gets angry and if he does God save the person he is angry on. She knows that it's her fault and bends her head to avoid his angry eyes. She grabs Karan's hands which have protectively been wrapped around her and pulls them near her chest to feel secure.

PRS: Now do not stand silent. On other days if I ask you one thing you speak hours now what happened? Open your mouth and speak who gave you permission to go on cartwheel?

Arjun trying to save her: Sirrr

PRS holds his hand indicating him not to speak in between

Karan understands his small sister is scared and tries to save her: Papa leave nooo

PRS shouts: I am asking Gunjan not you? Do not speak in between

Gunjan scared now and moves back very close to Karan and tries to hide herself between his legs as if that will save her from papa's raging eyes.

Gunjan looks at her Baaa and he caresses her cheek to give her courage to answer papa.

Gunjan: Paaapaaa(thinking of an good answer)

Arjun intervenes: Sir, its not her fault. I took her to mela for her birthday

PRS turns to Arjun: You, Who told you to take her on cartwheel and to mela?

Arjun fumbles: Sorry Sir

PRS: Did her mother or brother give permission? Did you both permit(looks at Karan and Yashu)

Karan and Yashu look at each other. No, they did not give permission, but keep quiet looking at Arjun as they know PRS will go wild on Arjun if he knows he took Gunjan out without persmission.

Arjun saves them: No Sir

PRS shouts: No, What if something happened? I did not expect you to be so careless. Why did you take her out without asking her family's permission? That too on cartwheel.

Arjun bends his head as its his fault. All guests are now turning and watching.

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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Sreeja Nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

res..yea me 1st

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luvely update dear😊

Edited by sreeja_rox - 13 years ago

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Scene325 PRS blasts Arjun

PRS shouts: Listen Arjun, I know you are her friend but sometimes you are exceeding your limits. Who will take her responsibility if something had happened? Would you? What difference it will make to you if something happens to her? You just know her from 6 months. You will get new friends, I will not get a new daughter. You would just forget but we will bear the burnt all life.

Arjun has tears hearing that from PRS. How does he tell his father he can die but not allow a scratch on his baby sister rather daughter?

Yashodhara: Leave it Prithvi, its not Arjun's fault

Arjun looks at his mother with wet eyes. His mom is defending him not even knowing he is her own son. First time he is experiencing mother defending his fault. Kumud always added fuel to fire when RPS or Mikhael shouted at Arjun. But here Yashodhara is taking Arjun's side.

PRS shouts: What leave it? Am I wrong. He is only a friend and that too for last 7 months only. Why did he take her without informing you or Karan?

PRS: And why did you not call us from hospital her family? You will take all decisions independently for her is it? Blah blah Blah

Gunjan looks at people looking at Arjun and feels sad for him. It was she who had forced him to take her to mela and papa was shouting at him for no fault of his. She has to save him from papa's rage. She releases herself from Karan's embrace and goes forward.

Gunjan: Daddyyy daddyyy

PRS too busy shouting at Arjun to listen to his angel.

Gunjan shouts: OK, stop it now. I had asked Arjun bhaiya not to tell you that we are going to mela. Stop shouting at him now daddy

Karan and Yashu shocked at Gunjan sudden transformation from gungi gudiya to Jhansi ki rani. Karan moves forward and puts both his hands on Gunjan's shoulder to calm her down. His sister is very funny thinks Karan. Will do all things against parents and Baaas wishes and when caught and not able to justify will start shouting back at them only like a real dadimaaa. Karan is sure Gunjan forced Arjun to take her to mela. She had asked him also but he refused knowing her health condition as doctor has told not to take her to heights etc

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zooombie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Oh no feeling so bad for Arjun...he must be going through so much pain n especially when his own father is saying this to him...he can't even reveal tht Gunjan is his own sister he is deir family...I wonder wht PRS will do when he finds out da truth...will be he able to forgive himself for causing so much pain to his own son...poor Arjun didn't say a word loves his family so much...well I'm happy at least his ma tried to save him...this part was very emotional...plz continue soon...really want to know further...

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saira

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

poor arjun, hope some good things happen soon, its just seems like your dragging the story to long, on the same situation. sorry if i'm giving a bad comment, but thats the feeling i'm getting as you keep going back to gungans condition time and time again, but nothing seems to be getting sorted out, the story doesnt seem to be moving any where, please make it a little faster.

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Sreeja Nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

aww...feeling so sad for Arjun😭😭

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sezo
poor arjun, hope some good things happen soon, its just seems like your dragging the story to long, on the same situation. sorry if i'm giving a bad comment, but thats the feeling i'm getting as you keep going back to gungans condition time and time again, but nothing seems to be getting sorted out, the story doesnt seem to be moving any where, please make it a little faster.

arjun has met his family just 2 months back i cannot suddenly make them a family without establishing relationships and there are many things to be sorted between many characters. thats why you may be feeling story is dragging or too long

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Scene326 PRS_Yashu argument on who spoilt Gunjan

Arjun: Gunjan, do not speak like that he's your father

Gunjan looks at him. Arjun shakes his head and Gunjan keeps quiet

Arjun: Your papa is right. I must have asked their permission. Sir, I am very sorry I exceeded my limits. Just forget I am just a friend of Gunjan's. I apologize on behalf of her also. Please forgive.

Dadaji comes: Prithvi what happened? Why are you shouting?

All guests who had gathered around to hear this unfolding saga run off back to party seeing Bade Maharaj.

PRS complaining like a kid: See papa your poti she went on cartwheel without telling anyone at home

Dadaji not amused: That's all is it?

Dadaji knows his poti very well after all he is there all 365 days with her in house. Indeed he is the only one who is with her always from birth not a day away. PRS, Karan travel a lot and Yashu sometimes. So only he is there at home to take care of her and she is a real handful for him too to manage when all alone.

PRS shocked: Means papa

Dadaji: Means, tell me something new? This is a normal thing for your angel

Arjun looks at Gunjan and she gives him a crooked angelic smile. PRS looks at Karan and Yashu and both look at each other. This Gunjan cannot be controlled by them both. If only PRS was at home to look at her rage if they object her for anything?

Yashu starts her complains: See dada, What does Prithvi know of taking care of small kids? He is always travelling and escaping his responsibilities as father

PRS stares at Yashu: What do you mean? Did I not take care of Karan as a kid?

Karan and Gunjan look at each other: Oh no not again not in party their mom-dad have started one more non conclusive argument

Yashu: Karan, you are comparing Karan with this baby. It is like comparing Gandhi with Hitler.

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago