Pyar Tho Hona Hi Tha2(Part 21 page 135)Jan27

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indianamerican

@indianamerican

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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

What an emotional update. i am crying right now but, its happy tears Characters are more than characters after following this story forever. The writing has been amazing and flawless. I can see that you put LOTS of effort and time into this updates and i really appreciate it. In my opinion this kind of stories don't exit in real life but i am glad i can at least read something as romantic as this!

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#922

first of all di, the like button isn't working! and that's the only reason i am not liking this update!

this chapter was amazingly calm and soothing for me! usually when i read your updates there is a heat rush and i always feel a kind of desperation of one kind or another! in the beginning there was that heat rush but towards the end it had a soothing effect! arjun's concern for her and the way his brain worked or his thoughts that he will destroy everyone and everything if anything happened to her! that was the cutest thing he ever thought and the biggest sacrifice or gift a wife could ask from her husband! he most certainly isn't like his parents! he care too much about her!

and i like the way arohi realized she can't manipulate him or seduce him like that! she was right! she is too innocent and virtuous for that! and that was her biggest beauty! she isn't like the rest of the girls! may be that's what attracted arjun! i am sure it is!

then about the highly dramatic and emotional last section! loved it how calmly and maturely arohi handled arjun! she knew it was because of his love he was so angry at her for leaving in the dark! and i would like to hug arjun for taking the big step of accepting openly that he do care for her! that surely was a big step for him! people like him lives in a shell! they could even joke or laugh with anyone but they won't open their hearts and it is like slitting their throats open for them to accept that they do care for someone! bravo arjun! you are getting there! and he will get there as arohi is with him!

update whichever ff di! i am all ready to read any of your ffs!

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#923

congo for d completion of dis thread dear...new updt in new thread i guess..so whn r we gettin d update???

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sh.

@.Dulcet

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#924

Wooondeerfuul Update Raman Di :) Loooved It Totally :))

I Love Arohi, She Is A Beauty With Brain.. SuuperLiked It How She Drives Him Crazy.. Poor Arjuun. But Thats Life :D

Suuuperb Awsome, Amaaazing Update :))

Thanks For The PM Dear :)

Shilpa :O)

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Manan_love123

@Manan_love123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#925

hey Raman the update was as usual superb...i was reading it while coming frm my cab i was so engrossed in reading that ppl were talking 2 me but i was in some other beautiful world...was reading it while listening the song 'AE DIL DIL KI DUNIYA MEIN" frm yaadein .and i was feeling the pain of AROHI dat her ARJUN is not admitting his love and also the helplessness of ARJUN dat he is not able to put his feelings into words...i was actually crying while reading it but those were tears of happiness...Finally Arjun is trying hard to express his feelings not only thru actions but thru words...U r jus AWESOME yaar...keep Writing..update soon...😉

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 13 years ago

#926

oh my god too brilliant for words cant wait for next part

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nams1303

@nams1303

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#927

Hi Raman, I know it is early to ask... when are u updating this... I am so excited about what is going to happen next... since arjun has confessed some part of his feelings I am waiting on how his behaviour is going to be from now on... please please update soon...

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perfectsoul

@perfectsoul

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#928

wow...Amazing.

You are brilliant Raman. I am so so so proud of you. We can see you putting your heart & soul in your writing.

That was a beautiful update. Full of emotions…………

Loved the way how Arohi could not continue with her game plan and couldn't control herself from confronting Arjun. The flow of emotions were so real. It touched me to the core. In reality too, all our plans and pretense don't stand a chance when it comes to the person we love. Atleast not in my case, no matter how much I plan to pretend, I go weak and fail completely like a fool in front of my hubby. And I am sure it's the same case vice versa. Love does that to people, I guess. 😆

The last para was the most emotional part. Arjun's fear, helplessness, pain, and relief was so beautifully penned down by you. Arjun has said it all…..I don't think there is anything left to be said now. I know he hasn't said those words yet. But whatever he has, is what those words actually mean. And I know Arohi is sensible enough to understand it.

Lets see how the story goes from here.

Raman, you Rock!!! 🤗

Now, let me read it again…..