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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zach

This was super update :)

hmmm..loved the way you describes the romantic side of a guy 😛 in this forum, i am so used to see all the talented writers explaining all these magical moments..but, mostly from a girls point of view...and here you are...writing from guy's viewpoint 😊 sometime i wonder...you must be pretty good at analyzing guys..either that or you are a guy yourself 😆

Arjun's excitement about receiving call from Arohi...the way he loses his senses each time he sees Arohi...its cute 😳☺️ very, very realistic ...most good guys in real life reacts like that 😛

Arohi is so cute..her jealousy when natasha hugged her arjun...the way she cutely scolds Arjun...i loved it 😆 especially loved the part when she told him just to shut up and drive and then few minutes later she realized her mistake..can totally see that sort of scene happening between such a cute couple 😃

Ladder incident was super cute..liked it ☺️

This is a cute story and a cute couple 😊 You have written a beautiful story. please continue.
thanks for pm'ing.


Thanq very much for ur lovely nd sweet comment
and am not a guy😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupa28

Lovely update...loving the pace and the momentum of the story

I really like your !st person style of narrative it makes me quite appealing and different..


Thanks for liking ma work😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Anu! very sweet update
Birthday with no cake LOL!
I love Arjun in dis FF, he is super cool
everytime u are adding some jokes in the updates
first Arohi thought he is dumb
second Night Watchman
nd now party with no cake
very funny
🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

WILL READ AND COMMENT

ANUSHA
LOVE THE WAY YOU ARE SHOWING ARJUN FALLING FOR AROHI, THE WAY HE ALWAYS THINKS ABOUT HER, WAITS FOR A CALL FROM HER, FINDS A WAY TO BE WITH HER (to go buy Rashi a gift), LIKE THE WAY HE HIDES IT FROM SANCHIT, HE DOESNT WANT THE WORLD TO KNOW AS YET,(kisiki nazar na lag jaye)
THE SCENE WHERE TOLD HIM TO KEEP HIS MOUTH SHUT AND HE ENDED UP DRIVING ALL THE TOWN AS HE COULDNT ASK FOR THE ADDRESS WAS HILARIOUS AND ALSO THE DIFFERENT JOBS ARJUN KEEPS DOING - NIGHT WATCHMAN AND NOW A PARTY PLANNER
ARU WAS JEALOUS OF NATASHA, PATA NAHI NATASHA KAHA SEY TAPAK PADHTI HAI
i cant stop myself from kissing her nd she also didnt show me any nervousness
DID I READ IT RIGHT, DID THEY JUST KISS WITHOUT ANY FANFARE, WITHOUT ANY VIOLINS GOING AROUND THEM, NEED TO REWORK THAT SCENE, WE WANT MORE FROM THE FIRST KISS


Thanq punam for ur lovely comment, i edited that kiss scene, just read it once
actually he thought of kissing her but he didnt bcoz Michael disturbed him
sorry for the mistake, till now i didnt noticed it, after reading ur comment i saw wat i wrote😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
it was so cute nd funny i almost laughed my head of :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god this was super cute!
they planned birthday party and forgot to buy the cake! well tend to happen wen u r lost in each other!
wat r u planning wid sanchit? why do i have a bad feeling abt it!
anyways loved the entire update! arohi jealous of natasha and angry at arjun! so cute!
update soon!
tnx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was very funny... B'day and no cake to celebrate yaar... it was freakn' funny😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍 heheheh so cute!
Loved how Arjun was waiting impatiently for Arohi's call and when she called how he was so lost in her! Bless 🤗
Why did Arohi cut Sanchit's call half way 😕???? 🤔
awww Arohi jealous... Super like!
Jokes... 😆 couldnt stop laughing when Arohi told Arjun to shut up and drive and how he actually did it... hahahaha then she realised her mistake LOL! 🤣
Her anger towards Arjun and then Arohi falling off the ladder super cute! 👍🏼
Damn why did Michael 👎🏼 have to disturb them hehehe 😆
Two jobs; Night Watchman and Birthday party planner... 🤣 Hahhhaahahah, liking Michael's character, funny guy! 👍🏼
Really enjoyed the update... super cute!
Please update soon 😊
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.1

😍 heheheh so cute!

Loved how Arjun was waiting impatiently for Arohi's call and when she called how he was so lost in her! Bless 🤗
Why did Arohi cut Sanchit's call half way 😕???? 🤔
awww Arohi jealous... Super like!
Jokes... 😆 couldnt stop laughing when Arohi told Arjun to shut up and drive and how he actually did it... hahahaha then she realised her mistake LOL! 🤣
Her anger towards Arjun and then Arohi falling off the ladder super cute! 👍🏼
Damn why did Michael 👎🏼 have to disturb them hehehe 😆
Two jobs; Night Watchman and Birthday party planner... 🤣 Hahhhaahahah, liking Michael's character, funny guy! 👍🏼
Really enjoyed the update... super cute!
Please update soon 😊
Thanks



Thanq so much for ur sweet nd lovely comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
Firstly, HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU KARAN.

Here is the next part, sorry for the delay. Thanks to everyone for supporting me..

CHARPTER-6

In between the sobs she told us that she forgot to buy the cake, At that minute i dont know how to react, i just looked at Michael n Michael started laughing looking at her, I asked her wat should we do now? she was still in tension nd she was crying, nd then we heard the sound of Rajveers car nd i told her to stop crying nd bring the candles, she looked at me nd asked whats the need for candles? I told her to stop asking stupid questions nd told her to bring candles, she is still crying. I answred her that atleast we can lit the candle nd ask her to off it.she told me sorry for forgetting the cake nd went inside to bring the candles. MIchael went nd switched off all the lights in the house, Arohi gets scared from dark nd suddenly came running from the kitchen calling my name, I closed her mouth so that Rashi will not hear her voice, she told me that she is scared of dark. I told her not to worry bcoz am der wid her nd suddenly i heard Rashi asking Rajveer wer he is taking, Rashi opened the door nd suddenly i lit the candle nd we all shouted Surprise nd Rashi was surprised nd came running to me nd hugged me nd thanked me , i just hugged her wid one hand bcoz Arohi is still catching my hand tightly, Rashi noticed it nd winked at me nd hugged Arohi nd told in Arohis ear that she should atleast leave my hand now.


Immediately she removed her hand nd then michael also wished her nd Rajveer told her to cut the cake first, by hearing that Arohi looked at the cake nd she gave me a serious nd surprising look, Rashi cut the cake nd to every one surprise she kept the first piece to me, suddenly i felt tears in my eyes. This is the feeling am craving since many years, I hugged Rashi nd she also felt emotional. she then kept the cake to Arohi nd then she called michael as Bhayya , michael is overwhelmed with that nd he hugged Rashi nd his eyes are also filled with tears. Rajveer suddenly shouted at us to stop crying bcoz it should be him who should actually cry, we all looked at him nd Arohi asked him the reason. He told us that me nd Michael are crying bcoz Rashi gave us small piece of cake but she didnt even give him that small piece, so he has to cry.


This made everyone laugh, we laughd lik crazy people. Then Rashi told him dat he didnt deserve even the cream bcoz he forgot her birthday, Arohi also joined Rashi nd start scolding her brother for forgetting her birthday, Rajveer tried to convince Rashi but as usual "convincing girls is impossible". Rashi told him to stop convincing her nd we all sit der, Rashi told Arohi that the guest house is looking very beautiful, she gave one of cute smiles nd den Rashi suddenly took Arohi inside nd after sumtime Rashi came out happily but Arohi gave a fake smile. Rajveer asked Rashi for the reason of her happiness, Rashi told him not to ask bcoz she is still angry wid him. Rajveer made a puppy face, Rashi told us dat she made a decission dat everyone should stay here for 2 days as it is the weekend.

Then i observed Arohi, i feel lik she is not at all happy with Rashis decission. Rajveer immediately signalled sumthing to Arohi nd she nodded.After seeing Arohis expression i dont feel lik making her uncomfortable by staying der, so i told Rashi dat i cant stay der bcoz my dad will not accept.Rashi insisted me nd Michael to stay der.Michael interrupted nd convinced Rashi that he has to go so that i can stay der. He assured that he will convince my dad nd then Michael left to home. Then we 4 started talking about some random topics and wen am talking except Arohi everyone is responding nd wen Rajveer was talking everyone except Rashi is responding.Arohi is not even looking at me n she is completely ignoring me, finally i decided to convince her i think Rajveer also decided the same, he asked Rashi to come out so that he can take her for a long drive. Rashi didnt answer him, I prayed to god to send them out for atleast few mins

May be either god listened to me or Rashi understood my feeling, she suddenly stood from der nd went out. we wonder wer she is going, suddenly she shouted "oye Rajveer, will u come or shall i go alone".Rajveer got excited and ran out mmediately. After they both went i felt very happy bcoz we both are going to stay alone without any interruption, how sweet? In my happiness i forgot she got angry wid me. she gav me a surprising look bcoz may be she didnt understand the reason to my happiness. I looked at her and we had an eye contact nd she broke that eye contact and started going to her room, i jumped from my place nd holded her hand, she lookd at me, i told her sorry but she is not in a mood to forgive me. I told her dat I realised after coming here dat we forgot to buy the cake so i called Michael nd askd him to bring. She shouted at me that she feel very bad wen she got to know dat she forgot the cake nd she was ver angry wid me for making her cry.I said Sorry by holding my ears n I was lik begging her to forgive me but all my attempts are in vain.I asked her whether she will forgive me or not n she didnt gave me any answer.

Girls will never forgive boys who beg for forgiveness nd mainly Arohi she will never forgive. so i released her hand and went towards the door and locked it. she was shocked by that gesture, i went towards her n she steeped back nd again i stepped towards her and atleast she was stopped by the wall, she leaned back nd den i moved towards her nd our faces are inches apart. She tried to move from der but i locked her way with my hands, she just stood there with great shock not knowing wat to do. I looked at her eyes nd then wen i looked at her trembling lips, i just feel lik touching her lips but i controlled my self bcoz i should not do any mistake which makes our relation sour. only god knows how i controlled my self at that instance, i bent my head towards her lips just to scare her, she shouted at me nd her hand was struggling to release from my lock nd she asked me wat am doing. I told her that after a lot of research i got to know that the best way to shut girls mouth or control girls anger is kissing her. she was dumbfounded by my words nd looked at me as if she was watching a horror movie and suddenly she hided her fear nd told me that she was not at all angry wid me. I asked her whether she was sure, she told me that she was damn sure nd she was not all angry wid me nd all the while she is just joking. I asked her to prove, she asked me how to prove.I told her that am feeling very hungry, she immediately cut my words nd asked me whether she has to prepare food for me with a puppy face. I controlled my smile nd tell her to bring sum cake piece nd make me eat. she got a piece nd looked at me nd she came near to me nd gave a smile, before i realise wat is she upto she applied all the cream on my face nd she started running from der. she made me run all over the house nd she went inside a room n before she close the door i went inside, she fell on the bed nd immediately rubbed my face wth her face nd nw her face is filled wid cream. Then i realised that we are inches apart, i feel lik taking the chocolate from her face nd taste it and suddenly she told me that she want to tell something.I got up from der nd i gav my hand to Arohi, she also got up from bed nd i asked wat she want to tell. she came near to me, i think i hav to feel nervous but she told me that she is feeling very ungry.what? I thought she will ask sumthing nd here she is talking abt food. I dont know how to bear this crazy girl all my life.

I told her to go and fresh up nd come to terrace after 10 mins, she asked me the reason, i told her it is the surprise.I went out nd washed my face nd arranged everything in terrace. After 10 mins she came and surprised to see the food ready, she asked how did i cooked in 10 mins.She is completely crazy, how can anyone cook the food in 10 mins. I told her that this food was prepared by mom nd Michael brought it from home. she became very happy after seeing the food nd asked me shall we start? I smiled at her innoncence nd we both strted eating den i again said sorry to her she asked me the reason, i strted telling abt Natasha dat she is just my friend and after long time she met me so she became hyper nd hugged me nothing else between us.Arohi asked me why am telling all this to her, i told her that dis is the reason she got angry in the shop so am telling. she told me that she is not angry abt dat, i was surprised n i asked her wat was the reason that she got angry. she told me that she got angry bcoz i didnt buy the dress she selected nd i bought the dress which natasha selected.

Can someone be this much stupid to get angry for small things, she is a master piece may be i cant find another piece lik her in dis whole world. I asked her whether she got angry for this small thing, she said yes nd told me dat y she will get angry if Natasha hugs me, wen i myself didnt hug her back. Then after few secs i regained her words and asked whether she said that, she ignored me nd went down finishing the dinner. I went with her nd asked her again but asusual someone will be present specially to disturb my special moments. Rajveer nd Rashi came back nd Rashis anger was also controller nd the love birds are back. we all started talking nd gossiping nd we decided dat the lunch should be prepared by Rashi nd Rajveer, we spoke for many hours ndslowly one by one went to sleep der itself. I looked at my sleeping beauty nd dat name perfectly suits her. I slowly kept a cushion below her head nd went inside to search a blanket nd threw it on her top so she was comfortable.

I went back nd sit in the couch nd looked at her nd lost in that beauty, i myself dont know wen i slept der nd we all woke up at almost the same time nearly 11:30 in the morning nd Rashi nd Rajveer got freshen up nd started both fighting nd cooking nd after that i remembered that i didnt brought my clothes to wear now nd suddenly sumone came nd handed a bag to me saying Michael sent it to me. He is a sweet heart, without asking him he will always do what i want. Then after the lunch, Rashi told us that we should go out in the evening as she promised her friends that she will giv party. Then she asked Arohi to cum for shopping to buy new dress for the party, Rajveer looked at Rashi nd told that he will marry Rashi only after he will earn billions as he cant bear her expenses with lakhs. We laughed at that dialogue nd den i asked Rashi to wait for one min nd then i brought the gift pack nd gave it to her. she opened it nd felt very happy nd Arohi was surprised to see that dress which i brought yesterday selected by Natasha.She stared at me for a while nd i winked at her she smiled nd turned her eyes.

Then evening we all got ready except Arohi, My eyes are searching to see her nd Rashi told Rajveer to bring Arohi nd she will cum wid me. I cant deny her nd on the way Rashi told me to ask Arohi for a dance today nd gave me suggestions how to impress her etc etc. But i didnt hear any words other asking Arohi for dance. we went inside nd Rashi got busy wid her frnds. Suddenly Sanchit appeared there, me nd Rashi didnt expected him der bcoz wen Rashi announced abt the party, Arohi kept a condn that no other person should join us in the party nd we should not tell anyone abt we staying in her guest house. At first wen she told me abt dat, i dint hav any clue but nw after seeing Sanchit i feel she is hiding sumthing. He came towards me nd tried to ask me wer i was before i answer Arohi arrived nd i was lost in her beauty she was wearing a black knee length dress with diamond studs nd we all went inside.

Then after some time everyone is moving to dance floor, I went to Arohi to ask her for dance but i was scared to ask nd before i ask her, Sanchi asked her for dance. I feel dejected but Arohi said sorry to Sanchit nd told him dat I asked her for dance nd she came near me nd catch hold of my hand nd asked me shall we go.I didnt expected this am very happy at that moment, wen am walking with her nd her hand in my hand i feel lik "The King Of The World" but i noticed the anger in Sanchits eyes but am not in a position to think abt it. we both went to the dance floor nd suddenly song changed nd der i looked at Rashi nd she winked at me.




(Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho) 2
(Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera) 2

she was so close to me nd her skin was too soft to handle nd her perfume was driving me crazy. wen i kept my hand around her waist that touch sent a chill down on my spine and a tingling feeling in my stomach

Pehli nazar ka pehla nasha
Dil mein utarta jaaye sanam
Sharmake mujhse milna tera
Jaadoo sa karta jaaye sanam
Yeh beqarari aisi khumari
Pehle kabhi to mujhpe na hui
Kabhi dil pe yoon bekhudi to nahin thi
Kisise mujhe aashiqui to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho

am feeling every word of the song, the same words which i want to tell her nd now i feel lik hugging her tightly that even air should not come between us. This feeling never hapened to me

Kitne hi chehre dekhe magar
Maine chuna hain bas ek tujhe
Har pal ho meri baahon mein tu
Mil jaaye aisi kismat mujhe
Dil yeh pukara tera nazara
Karta hi jaoon o jaan-e-jaan
Mujhe pehle itni khushi to nahin thi
Yoon mehki hui zindagi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho
Tu saanson mein samaye
Tu dhadkan ko churaye
Kahi deewana ho jaoo na tera) 2
Mohabbat kabhi maine ki to nahin thi
Kisiki nigahon se pi to nahin thi
Magar yeh achanak hua kya, ho ho ho(Movie: Yaad)

we both were lost in eachothers eyes, i mean i was completely lost nd i think she is also feeling the same, her eyes has sum magic in it. everytime i saw them i lost myself nd i stared at her for so long that even i dont know wen the music stopped suddenly the clapping sound made us back to senses. And everyone are seeing us we both feel embrassed and went to different directions...
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Edited by Anusha.V - 14 years ago

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