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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi frns

here is the next part, sorry if u find any mistakes..


CHARPTER-5

Part -2

I went to my office nd unable to concentrate in my work, am totally occupied with the thoughts of arohi, Everything in her makes me surprised. At one time she says love is foolish n den she loves watching romantic serials, am unable to judge her,am trying hard to decipher her but I didn't understand which is the real Arohi.I came out of my thoughts nd started llooking at my mobile nd eagerly waiting for Arohis call. Michael came nd told me that nothing will happen even i looked at the mobile for 100times in a minute, it will only ring wen someone calls from other side.He asked me whether am waiting for Arohis call, i looked at him nd asked how did he know dat? Again he told me that Arohi will call after 5 bcoz her office timings are upto 5pm. i was shocked nd asked him how did he knew that Arohi will call me? He smiled and told me that he has some magical powers nd he will know everything.

i tried to ask him again but am fully occupied with the thought of waiting for 2 more hours for Arohis call, Michael tried to cheer me up nd he got a call nd after finishing the call, he told me that Arohi will call me with in 5 mins.I told him that it will not happen bcoz she will call me only after 5 nd suddenly to my surprise my phone started ringing nd after seeing the name in display, am happy nd surprised. happy bcoz Arohi called me nd surprised abt how michael knew abt this, i answered her call nd lost in her voice, she asked me whether i planned anything, i asked her what plan. She suddenly asked me whether i forgot abt Rashis bithday, asusual i forgot everything after hearing her voice in phone, den i answered her that i didnt get any ideas, she told me that she thought of giving a surprise party to Rashi at night nd told me that she took day off from her office so that she can buy a gift to Rashi nd get some tim to prepare for the party.

i asked her whether i can join her as i also want to buy something for Rashi nd i need her help in that, she agreed. i told her that i will come nd pick her up from the office, she told me that she is in her house nd asked me to come and wait at the coffeshop near to her house, i went der nd waited for some time nd suddenly i saw her, she was wearing blue jeans and white tees,wen she came near to me i was mesmerized by her cute looks, watever she wears her beauty makes that dress more attractive, she looked at me nd gave me one of her beautiful smile! Damn! she was killing me in every possible way, she came nd sat beside me nd told me a mall adress, and then she told me sorry for the late nd she asked me where should we arrange the party, i called sanchit nd asked him the place, he told me that he will talk with Arohi nd will inform me. I felt very bad bcoz i didnt tell him dat Arohi is wid me, how can i tell him, i dont want to hide anything from him but wen it comes to Arohi, my heart is not allowing mw to tell him.

Sanchit called Arohi nd told her to arrange the party in her house if she dont hav any problem, she agreed nd cut the call in the middle. She told me that she will arrange it in her guest house, i asked her why she cut the call in the middle, she didnt answered me nd changed the topic nd asked me wat i lik to buy for Rashi I noticed sumthing fishy in her behaviour towrds Sanchit, her eyes are hiding many things from me. i thought of asking her abt Sanchit but i dont want to make her feel uncomfortable by asking stupid questions, i just want to make her feel happy in each nd every possible way. we went inside a gift shop to select the gift, but after many choices we finally selected the gifts nd den she went to each nd every shop nd brought so much stuff.

At last she took me to a boutique nd there she spent most of the time in selecting a dress, there i found a beautiful red saree, i just imagined Arohi in dat n in my imagination it was awesome,i went to Arohi nd showed a dress nd that Saree nd asked her which she liked more, she selected the saree n told me that it was very beautiful,by looking at the happiness in her eyes i cant move my eyes from her, n i found her blushing den she tried to change the environment by saying dat she is feeling very hungry,i just wanted to hug her at that movement but unfortunately i found Natasha there, she came nd hugged me infront of everyone, the first thing i did is i looked at Arohi i saw anger in her eyes, if eyes haas the power to kill den today i will definitely got killed by her looks. Natasha was excited to see me der, she keeps on asking me different questions nd suddenly she saw the dress nd saree in my hands nd told me that the dress was so beautiful nd the saree was not good, i asked her to pack the dress, Arohi became very angry n went out from the shop saying that she will wait outside. Then i told Natasha to pack the saree differently.

After 5 mins Natasha got a call nd i skipped from der widout informing her, i went out nd searched for Arohi, she was standing near the car, i went to open the door for her but she didnt allowed me to do that, she angrily opens the door nd sit inside. i smiled to myself nd went inside the car, in all the way i thought of different ways to manofy her, then suddenly i asked her whether we can eat sumthing nd go, she told me dat she is not feeling hungry nd in reverse kept all the blame on me that i wasted a lot of tim in the boutique, i asked her wat i hav to do for making her smile, she told me it will be better to shut my mouth nd concentrate on driving,.I started driving nd going on different directions as i dont know the adress for the Guesthouse, she realised it after sometime nd asked me wat i was doing, i didnt answer her, her anger increased nd told me to stop the car, after that she asked me whether i gone mad, still i didnt answer. she shouted at me nd asked me to open my mouth nd answer her. I told her how can i open my mouth wen she told me to shut my mouth, her face turned red in embrassment, den she told the adress nd we went der. It took 30 minutes to reach der but she didnt spoke even a single word.

After reaching der, she went inside directly i understood that now i will definitely hav to become a servant for her, nd carried all the shopping bags inside. That was a big nd beautiful guest house with beautiful lawn having many kinds of beautiful flowers, she went inside the room nd closed the door.

I started decorating the hall but she is nowhere to be seen, After sumtime she came out nd gave a surprising look n den we both realised that we didnt planned how to bring Rashi here n we even forgot informing Rashi. we both shouted at the same time "Rashi". We both sarted blaming ourselves, then she told me to call Rajveer. I called him nd informed abt the plan he agreed to bring Arohi but wen i told him abt the place, he was shocked nd asked me whether Arohi herself decided the place,I looked at Arohi nd she took my phone nd told him to come fast widout wasting the time by asking the stupid questions.I didnt understand how to persuade him, i just told him "dont worry" nd told him to call me before they come near to the guest house.

Then i remembered that she forgot her anger on me, i smiled to myself n she looked at me nd asked me y am smiling, suddenly she remebered nd again she started giving serious look nd started doing the decoration, i got a call from Michael nd i went out to talk wid him, after finishing my call i went inside nd saw Arohi standing on the step ladder, that was a delicate one. I asked her to come down but she didnt listen to me. I holded it but she told me not to touch it in a very angry tone, i got very angry dis tim nd unknowingly my leg slipped on it nd she suddenly fall on my arms.


I can feel the softness of her body, my hand under her waist nd her her hands tightly grabbing my shirt, she still closed her eyes in fear n her hair fall on the front, i wanted to move the hair to get the perfect view of her face but i cant move my hands n den suddenly climate helped me by sending cool breeze nd her hair moved slightly giving a nice view to see her ees, she opened her eyes nd looked at me. This is the second time i am carrying her in my hands but this tim is more beautiful bcoz last time she is sleeping but now she is looking at me nd i can look into her eyes deeply, I was mesmerized by her beauty nd by seeing her lips, i am unable to stop myself nd i bent down to kiss her n she also didnt show me any nervousness, still she holded my shirt nd just looking at my eyes, it was lik a dream for me n i really wish that dream should nvr end..i bent to kiss her n but.

Suddenly a flash appeared nd i looked at the door nd found it as Michael but still i didnt put Arohi down, i was just in a shock nd forgot to put her down, Arohi pinched me nd i realised the sittion nd kept her down her face turned red in embrassment nd went inside fastly. Michael smiled at me nd asked wats happening? I gave him a threatening look nd really i felt lik killing him for disturbing the beautiful moment. Arohi came from inside but i noticed the nervousness in her face, Michael know how to lighten the situation so he told us to take rest n he will do the remaining. Then suddenly Michael told me that even i can join as a birthday planner nd shouted that in just few days i was experienced in different jobs. Arohi surprisingly asked "2jobs" nd asked Michael wat are the two jobs, he said one is Night Watchman nd the second one is birthday party planner.Arohi asked Michael to tell the reason abt Night Watchman.

Michael started to tell but i tried to stop him nd we 3 ran all over the house, nd suddenly we got the phone call from Rajveer that they will reach there with in 10 mins, we 3 came down nd started arranging all the things nd i asked her to bring the cake, she went inside nd came back after few mins with worried expression on her face, she had tears in her eyes, i asked her wat happened, in between the sobs she said "she forgot to buy the cake"...

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Thanks to Moon nd Missing u Mansi

Edited by Anusha.V - 14 years ago
Anupa28 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...loving the pace and the momentum of the story

I really like your !st person style of narrative it makes me quite appealing and different..
Edited by Anupa28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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how sweet - aru forgot to buy the cake for the surprise b'day party
haha - that's nice
pls continue
Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha! birthday party and no cake lol!
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Posted: 14 years ago
This was super update :)

hmmm..loved the way you describes the romantic side of a guy 😛 in this forum, i am so used to see all the talented writers explaining all these magical moments..but, mostly from a girls point of view...and here you are...writing from guy's viewpoint 😊 sometime i wonder...you must be pretty good at analyzing guys..either that or you are a guy yourself 😆

Arjun's excitement about receiving call from Arohi...the way he loses his senses each time he sees Arohi...its cute 😳☺️ very, very realistic ...most good guys in real life reacts like that 😛

Arohi is so cute..her jealousy when natasha hugged her arjun...the way she cutely scolds Arjun...i loved it 😆 especially loved the part when she told him just to shut up and drive and then few minutes later she realized her mistake..can totally see that sort of scene happening between such a cute couple 😃

Ladder incident was super cute..liked it ☺️

This is a cute story and a cute couple 😊 You have written a beautiful story. please continue.
thanks for pm'ing.
Edited by zach - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WILL READ AND COMMENT
ANUSHA
LOVE THE WAY YOU ARE SHOWING ARJUN FALLING FOR AROHI, THE WAY HE ALWAYS THINKS ABOUT HER, WAITS FOR A CALL FROM HER, FINDS A WAY TO BE WITH HER (to go buy Rashi a gift), LIKE THE WAY HE HIDES IT FROM SANCHIT, HE DOESNT WANT THE WORLD TO KNOW AS YET,(kisiki nazar na lag jaye)
THE SCENE WHERE TOLD HIM TO KEEP HIS MOUTH SHUT AND HE ENDED UP DRIVING ALL THE TOWN AS HE COULDNT ASK FOR THE ADDRESS WAS HILARIOUS AND ALSO THE DIFFERENT JOBS ARJUN KEEPS DOING - NIGHT WATCHMAN AND NOW A PARTY PLANNER
ARU WAS JEALOUS OF NATASHA, PATA NAHI NATASHA KAHA SEY TAPAK PADHTI HAI
i cant stop myself from kissing her nd she also didnt show me any nervousness
DID I READ IT RIGHT, DID THEY JUST KISS WITHOUT ANY FANFARE, WITHOUT ANY VIOLINS GOING AROUND THEM, NEED TO REWORK THAT SCENE, WE WANT MORE FROM THE FIRST KISS
Edited by punam2712 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb update
birthday and no cake hahaha
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update relii relii swt
awww aruhi 4got 2 buy a cake 4 da b'day party lol 😆
plzzz cont soon x fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 14 years ago
comment updated on previous page :)

looking forward to the next update...i guess you updates on weekends...cool 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Forgot to buy a cake for bday party wat next

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