SS: Ek Pal Ki Zindagi~Final Updt Pge 10~

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ek Pal Ki Zindagi

Arohi got down from the train nervous and excited...she was feeling such strong emotions all at the same time...something which she had been dreaming for what seemed like a million years was happening...the excitement,the eagerness,the happiness,the slight nervousness she was feeling a million things at the same time she was filled with happiness in every inch of her body...it didnt get better than this and she knew it...she wanted to savour in every feeling every bit of the moment to her memory so that it was never forgotten...

She eagerly started searching for the person who was the root cause for all this happiness and wide range of emotions though she knew it was futile...it would atleast take him 15-20 minutes easily to reach there...The train was early and she didnt expect him to be there before time...him being on time would itself be a miracle...punctuality was never one of his strong points...she sheepishly laughed to herself thinking how well they knew everything about each other even though it was just 3 years...thats when her eyes fell on a seat on the far right corner of the station which was almost hidden...her eyes popped open so big that they would have fallen down...her jaw dropped and she stared at amazement at the sight before her...this had to be the eigth wonder of the world...

Heylo guys...i m back with another one...sorry i have been inactive lately...but this was something that i couldnt resist writing...do read and tell me how it was...constructive critisicm is always welcome...tell me if i should continue or not...Hope you liked the introduction😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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WHEN R U UPDATING 😉😆

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so he was there befor she was - interesting - u left me with mystery and confusion - cant wait to read ur masterpeice..bring it on 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AmnaIsh

WHEN R U UPDATING 😉😆


Is that a compliment 😆 cause i only work for compliments very greedy you see 😉 Btw your competition was one of the main inspirations for this...this idea came to me when i read the topic but then again i didnt want to restrict my words on this one...cause its one of my dreams and i wanna do justice to it...InshAllah will think of something else for that...just wanted to say thank you for the inspiration 😳🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Ari--


Is that a compliment 😆 cause i only work for compliments very greedy you see 😉 Btw your competition was one of the main inspirations for this...this idea came to me when i read the topic but then again i didnt want to restrict my words on this one...cause its one of my dreams and i wanna do justice to it...InshAllah will think of something else for that...just wanted to say thank you for the inspiration 😳🤗



AWWW..BABY OFCOURSE ITS A COMPLIMENT 😳 and i am expecting somethign great from u for the OS cotest and this story too 😆 i am also greedy u see 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AmnaIsh



AWWW..BABY OFCOURSE ITS A COMPLIMENT 😳 and i am expecting somethign great from u for the OS cotest and this story too 😆 i am also greedy u see 😉


Hmppphhh greedy people are such a curse to lazies like me 😭 I'll try InshAllah 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it ofcourse :) . continue karo jaldi se.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sounds great Ari! The name "Ek Pal Ki Zindagi" is so inspiring in itself, im sure it's going to be a great FF :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hugss ari...all d best fr d rest..
Continue soon n wat abt pmhuh lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loving it ari!! do continue and add me to the pm list!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb ari. I jst luv it. Do pm me:-)

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