SS: Ek Pal Ki Zindagi~Final Updt Pge 10~

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-Awantika-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Itna chota kyun hain ye ?? 😡

Humein tadpane k liye ???

Agar aisa hain, to chalo your mission is complete 😲

It was so short and sweet ki kya bataon ?

So so wonderful !

Extremely Awesome !

Me loved it !!

Please Update Ji !!

Edited by -Awantika- - 14 years ago

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imtiaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

it's awesome ari beautifuuly described the emotions & love. i especially love the title the moment i saw it i read it yesterday but could not comment from phone but the title pulls you towards it.

part 2 is also very good love the meeting & the fact that arjun was their before arohi & the possesive hug.

thanks for the pm. do continue soon.

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Vibha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

awesome part
beautifully described the emotions
continue soon

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Anshita

@..anshita..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

wow ...its superb ari dear...
loved it...:)

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Aysha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

great part arifa

cant wait to read the rest :)

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Amira.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Wooow! 😊 Beautiful Uptd 👍🏼 It Was Heart Touching 🤗 Please Cont Soon and Pm me 😳

~Amira~

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

PART 3

This was the moment this was dream...she had wished,dreamed prayed for this moment in every sencond of her past 3 years of blissful life...the smile on arohi's face was a reflection of her inner happiness...tears were flowing through her eyes since her brain had just realised that this was not a dream and that her wish had been realised...the happiness knew no bounds...here in his arms life and she felt complete...

After a moment that would give them a lifetime of happiness they both seperated with a different kind of glow of happiness on their faces...it was like they were content with life now...They wouldnt mind facing anything not even death...

Itne saal...started arohi

Itne din...continued arjun

So many times i wished for this moment...confessed arohi

So many times i had dreamed this moment...said arjun solemnly

Finally its here...said arohi with a huge smile

Finally you are here...said arjun with dreamy chocolate brown eyes filled with a few tears

Arjun pulled arohi into yet another hug...after 3 years of eagerness,excitement and anticipation they were finally together...he didnt feel it was doing justice to the moment being apart for another second...it felt so right...arjun and arohi together...it was like they were always meant to be...it was like them becoming arjuhi was their destiny...

PART 4

Edited by --Ari-- - 14 years ago