OS: NA JANE KYU! - Page 5

hey karanika007...
i'm varshini :):)
i read all your updates at one go n i was like how could i miss such an awesome os!! man you have top start an ff!!
i was away for two days because of studies n i miss such a wonderful piece!! thank god! at least now i caught up!!
you are too good!!
i love the way you shaped up arjun n arohi's character!!
i loved their friendship!
i loved the way arohi made him realise that he was a true acheiver!!
i loved the way they expressed their love!
i loved the way they were able to read their minds n thoughts!
i loved the way she was jealouse!
i loved the way arjun helped the girl while helping himself!
i love the way he proposed!
i love the humor interlaced in their dialogues!!
i loved the way she knew arjun would come for her!!
i love the way she rested on his chest while listening to him!
i loved their nokh-jokhs!
i loved the way he opened up only to arohi!
i loved the way he became her best friend n then went on to be someone special!
i loved the way she helped him through that project!
i loved every small gesture of both arohi nd arjun!!
i loved the way she always understood him!

okai...i can go on like this forever!!
so simply saying this was fantabulous!!
please continue writing!!
sorry for the late commen...:(

Originally posted by: vrshn

hey karanika007...
i'm varshini :):)
i read all your updates at one go n i was like how could i miss such an awesome os!! man you have top start an ff!!
i was away for two days because of studies n i miss such a wonderful piece!! thank god! at least now i caught up!!
you are too good!!
i love the way you shaped up arjun n arohi's character!!
i loved their friendship!
i loved the way arohi made him realise that he was a true acheiver!!
i loved the way they expressed their love!
i loved the way they were able to read their minds n thoughts!
i loved the way she was jealouse!
i loved the way arjun helped the girl while helping himself!
i love the way he proposed!
i love the humor interlaced in their dialogues!!
i loved the way she knew arjun would come for her!!
i love the way she rested on his chest while listening to him!
i loved their nokh-jokhs!
i loved the way he opened up only to arohi!
i loved the way he became her best friend n then went on to be someone special!
i loved the way she helped him through that project!
i loved every small gesture of both arohi nd arjun!!
i loved the way she always understood him!

okai...i can go on like this forever!!
so simply saying this was fantabulous!!
please continue writing!!
sorry for the late commen...:(

omg i m overwhelmed.. u understood each and evrythng i wanted to convey... m glad that i m sucesssful in impressing u...thank u

Originally posted by: Karnika007

omg i m overwhelmed.. u understood each and evrythng i wanted to convey... m glad that i m sucesssful in impressing u...thank u

so...can i know your name??😊
any plans of starting an ff??

Originally posted by: vrshn

so...can i know your name??😊
any plans of starting an ff??

my name is mrinal.. actually no immediate plan to start ff coz i sill bb little busy.. m shifting and then college start ho raha hai but surely will try to come up with different ideas...

Amazing os..I really loved reading it.
You did a very good job...thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: SHAHAD971

Amazing os..I really loved reading it.
You did a very good job...thanks a lot!!

i should b thanking u fr appriciation... thanks a lot

its awesome...such a beautifulll journey of luv...
hats off buddy...ur writing is jst tooo gud...super likesss...tc :)

Originally posted by: justprati

its awesome...such a beautifulll journey of luv...
hats off buddy...ur writing is jst tooo gud...super likesss...tc :)

thanku thanku thanku dear

Awww it was very nice and very cute 👏

i read it again - very nice OS