FF 'Dadi's Revenge' UPdated chapter 16 pg31

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

hey mina, lovely lovely update.. i especially luved the realization part for both arjun n arohi that neither were actually hit.. they were just stunned in shock..n the numbness leaving them...very beautifully described.. each feeling coming back to them..brain starting to pick up on the surroundings..luved it!! arjun's reactions to arohi's family.. his akwardness.. feeling wrong-footed n completely out place.. super duper loved it.. always wanted to see his interaction with the ulluwaliyas.. guess my wishes r being granted...more lovely was arohi's family's reaction.. u have perceived perfect reactions for each n every member in the family..!!! awesome awesome job!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

as for the FF contest..needless to say u wud have done an awesome job..but i think i understand ur POV 😉

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

hey mina....super loved the update....u r a really good writer and this is the aprt we are all dying to c gauris truth revelation and arjuhis realisations....u scripted it beautifully...i could imagine the scene and gauri will very likely do something dramatic like this in kmh as well....thanks for writiin this ff gosh u brought it from the dadis revenge to gauris sach ka samna too good

and as per u're pov regarding the story writing contest i know how u feel...v r in the same boat😆

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Jannat

@glitter567

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

just read three chapters in one go..WOW

mina i'v said this time and time again...but you are one hell of a writer 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

you know what i feel like doing?

i feel like dragging the CV's down here and make them read your FFs!!!

keep up the good work girl!!! 👍🏼

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: glitter567
just read three chapters in one go..WOW

mina i'v said this time and time again...but you are one hell of a writer 👏

you know what i feel like doing?

i feel like dragging the CV's down here and make them read your FFs!!!

keep up the good work girl!!! 👍🏼

chal gaddi ghuma phir.. aaj 2 jagah jaane hain.. CVs n then SBS/SBB ke office..😆

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imtiaz

@KMH-NASHA

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

what a update you are doing such a cool job hats off tto your creativity.i like arjuhi love realization,and i must say you are really working perfect on each and every charecter your story fits in as to what type of people like arohi saying without thinking and the language she uses i must say you think of everyone and fit them in at the right place.thanks for starting this i am addicted to your story and always waiting for the next part although i havent been on here long but as soon as i read your story i want to carry on reading it nonstop.

you really know how to hang each part and make us eager for the next part just like ekta does i will be waiting for the next part.

thanks for giving your readers credit but actually you deserve credit for giving us a story like this.

entering the competition is your personnal desicion and i respect that.you are a winner in my view and your story proves that..

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

1) YAYY!!! ARJUN ROLLED OVER AROHI TO PROTECT HER..

SHE TOOK OFF HIS SHIRT IN FRONT OF HER FAMILY TO MAKE SURE HE WASN'T WOUNDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GAURI'S TRUTH IS ALMOST OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg i am excited.. next part is going to be so much fun to read.. pleaseee don't take ur time and post it as soon as u can..lol

2. aww ur so sweet! our comments mean more to u than a contest.. aww!!! ur honestly an amazing writer who truly has me hooked to this.. i need a dose of either this or an episode of kmh2 to make it through my day.. its like a drug now..lol i was so excited to see this updated u have no idea..lol

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Anushya Pandian

@Minion23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

aesome job!!! please continue soon!!!

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

aww mina ur adorabl..so sweet of u 2 sayu dnt wna entere d consts n hw our coments r mor valuabl

loved ur upd8s they wer awsum!! cnt belivv gauri wud get soo low!! so glad her tru colors cme out finaly n now arjuhis relatnshp gona get evn beta afta dey know is was gauri hu pushd rashi...

cnt wait 2 c dere reaction n them ofcors arjuhi romance wil folow

thnx 4 pm..continue soon.x

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: aksh4IF
hey mina, lovely lovely update.. i especially luved the realization part for both arjun n arohi that neither were actually hit.. they were just stunned in shock..n the numbness leaving them...very beautifully described.. each feeling coming back to them..brain starting to pick up on the surroundings..luved it!! arjun's reactions to arohi's family.. his akwardness.. feeling wrong-footed n completely out place.. super duper loved it.. always wanted to see his interaction with the ulluwaliyas.. guess my wishes r being granted...more lovely was arohi's family's reaction.. u have perceived perfect reactions for each n every member in the family..!!! awesome awesome job!!

👏
as for the FF contest..needless to say u wud have done an awesome job..but i think i understand ur POV 😉

I'm glad you appreciate that part it was my favorite , being in extremely strenuous situations are hard to describe, I had to stop for a for a few moments and re-write, glad you liked!😊
This is where psych class came to my rescue I knew there was a reason why I paid attention in that class lolz