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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my god Mina tu to kamal karte ho ! Loved it
And I'm dieing to read the continuation please make the wait less! Your fabulous really love your writing. WOW!
Can't wait for the next update it's like 4:00am here I was doing homewrk and I just checked my email n saw this and I couldn't stop reading. Amazing you honestly made my day! Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update, but didnt expect you to put gun towards gauri's head. felt sorry for arohi that her family miunderstand her so much, but aleast arjun is still there for her. update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey mina..suprb update..bt why u end here plz update soon..can't wait..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Minaaaaaaaaa iss psyco guari ko gun kisne diya??? 😡😡

what was she thinking pointing a gun to Arohi... that too in front of Arjun....🤣🤣🤣

but seriosuly awesome update....👏 👏

i saw a thread on the forum thinking what would happen if Arjun goes to the Ull's house.....i hope ke Arohi stick to him just like in your FF.....😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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arey mina you are too good yaar. i cant wait to find out what happens to that leech😈😡!!!! hamesha suspence par rakdeti ho 😒 very annoying! i seriously cannot wait till the next part so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
mina!!! 🤗

my fav part!! the oscar winning movie!! i wud give that movie an oscar any day!! mauh...n aww!! arjun cant leave his wife alone can he!! awesome awesome one.. go mina!!

i think u shud name the next chapter..Ulluawaliya Family Shootout!! saare police wale hain!! rajvir apna dusra pistol nikalega.. arjun apna, KSA ke paas bhi toh gun hota hoga..n arohi ki mom apne aansun nikalegi!! AGAIN!! and teh best part..arohi apna pepper spray!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi mina
that was great i didnt think we would get to read the next part so quick but you are doing a great job please continue this cant wait for the next part. i like the extra masala you add to your words it adds the spice .ill be waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome work mina...
while reading this i was actually watchin it..i mean imagining it...
n nw aftr readin ur takes weneva i watch da epi i feel itz ur story goin on...
but den i rem noo is is ekta kmh n dat was mina's kmh....
cnt wait 4 the nxt chapter....
n thankz 4 shwin arjuhi 2geathr.....luvd the handcuffs part....
the cv's need 2 pop in hea n get ur ideas.....
:)
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Posted: 14 years ago


Dadi's Revenge


Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!

You can read my fics here

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations


~*~



"Not as much as this will hurt you!" Arohi let out a gasp when she saw Gauri pointing her Cha chu's gun at her forehead.


Chapter 13



"Gauri!" everyone shouted.

"Gauri put the gun down." Rajveer took a step towards her. Gauri took the gun off safety and he froze on the spot. He wasn't expecting her to grab the gun from his shoulder holster. He was going to get it from his mother. She never liked seeing guns in the house.


"I told you Arjun, no one can have you besides me!" Arjun put his hands up infront of him in surrender.

"Gauri put the gun down, we can work this out. There is no need to do this."


"You want to kill me?" Arohi couldn't believe her eyes.

"Well isn't it obvious I do have the gun pointed at you."


"But why, I know your crazy luchi, but didn't think you were this mental. Why the hell would you want to shoot me in front of my family, they will all be witnesses against you in court, seriously you should have thought this out better."


Gauri gripped the gun tighter.


"Arohi SHUT up!" Arjun barked, she was going to get her self killed. Who the hell talked like that to a person who had a gun pointed to your head?


"Hello mister, how can I? She was my best childhood friend, now shes pointing a gun at me!? Me of all people, sweet innocent me! I'm allowed to say something aren't I?"


"Women, that mouth of yours is going to get you killed."

"Ha! Please, Gauri is just pissed she doesn't mean it , do you Gauri."

"What would you know ab--" Arjun was cut of by the sound of gun fire. Gauri had fired a shot but missed on purpose.


"Shut up both of you! Stop displaying your damn matrimonial bliss infront of everyone, I won't miss next time."


Arjun gave Aorhi a serious look that said , She is one deranged women, keep you mouth shut and let me handle this. Aorhi only nodded her head.


"Gauri look at me." Arjun started talking in a controlled slow voice trying to calm the frantic women.


Arohi's mom was about to say something, but Kartar gave her and the rest of the family a look to stay quiet. This was now officially a hostage situation. He signalled to his second oldest son to clear the other family members, slowly out of firing range.



"Gauri I understand you are upset. It makes perfect sense. How could a loud mouth chatter box be my wife? Gauri look at my eyes." When Arjun was sure she was looking at his eyes he slowly made his way closer to Arohi's side he was only 10 feet away from her.


"Yeah why are you attracted to her?" Gauri asked.


Because I am awesome.

Aorhi bit her lip ready to say something, Rajveer gave her a sharp look indicating for her to keep quiet.


"I wasn't attracted to her, not first time I met her not the second time I met her not the fourth, fifth, or sixth time. I actually hated her." He inched closer to Aorhi.

"Then why marry her!?"

"For revenge."

"You said you loved her! You even gave me that stupid dancing couple and letter to give to her explaining your love for her!"


"You never gave it to her?" Arjun was actually shocked.

"Of course NOT! I did everything I could to make sure you two never got together."


Arjun had to reagin in his rage and keep his voice calm and soothing. "Okay, I can see why."


"Why did you fall in love with her and not me?"

Now he didn't want to answer that, not with Arohi's family present and he couldn't lie too much or else Gauri would catch on.


He moved another few feet he was almost four feet away from Arohi.

"Aorhi-"

"Don't say her name! Only my name!"

"Okay Gauri, I will say only your name Gauri. This pagal ladki, demanded my attention she invaded my space and my mind even if I wasn't near her. She has a different take on life that I didn't know existed."


There at last he was standing next to Aorhi, who in her relief grabbed onto Arjun's hand.


Bad idea.


"NO! DON'T touch him!"


Gauri fired her gun at Arohi.


"Aorhi!" Her mother shouted.


"AHHHH!!"


Arohi screamed she was joined in by every other women in the house including Gauri.


~*~

Everything happened so fast for Aorhi. One moment she was standing, the next moment she was on the floor with Arjun covering her. The fall wasn't gentle either it forced the air out of her lungs making it hard to breath for a few moments.


Aorhi gripped on to Arjun shoulders, after she regulated her breathing. Did Gauri shoot her, because she didn't feel the pain anywhere.

Did that mean it was Arjun who was actually shot?


Oh no was Arjun dead? He wasn't moving or breathing, tears came to eyes automatically.

Arohi closed her eyes tight and prayed to every god she could think of, she took deep breaths trying to calm her self.

Deep breath in.

Deep breath out.

Deep breath in.


No this wasn't happening Arjun was fine, and this time she wasn't stuck in a jungle she could get him help! She would get him help, NOTHING was going to happen to her husband.


The only sound that Aorhi could hear was her heart thudding a frantic beat in her ears, blood was rushing around her head she couldn't articulate her words correctly. Her hands were shaking her breathing became irregular, a bell started ringing in her head. What if he was dead?


"No no no no no." She whispered. This could not be happening again!


"Arjun." She shook him, no response. "Oh my God, Arjun are you hurt? Arjun say something! Don't you dare die on me!" She frantically pushed at his chest.

"Arjun!" She yelled the tears flowing non stop from her eyes.



"Shhh I'm fine." Arohi pushed at him until he sat back. She cupped his face in her hands.


"Your talking!" The bell stopped ringing and she leaned down hugged him tightly, she felt a little light headed, "your alive! Your talking!" she mumbled into his shoulder.


Arohi pulled back after a few moments when Arjun didn't respond.

Her smile fell when she saw that he wasn't moving and he was breathing hard, "Your not hurt are you?"


Arohi began searching his body for the gun wound.

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Arjun didn't say anything and let her search him, he was shocked himself.

For a moment he had thought he didn't get Aorhi down in time. She wasn't breathing, he felt blank his mind had gone completely blank.

Then he heard her voice calling his name shaking him, and he slowly came back to reality.


It was like waking up from a deep drug infused slumber. Groggy, unaware of your surroundings because you brain is just waking up. One by one each sense returning; hearing - her voice , touch-he was holding her in a death grip under him, smell-Arohi's light floral perfume and the smell of the carpet mixed in, sight-her tear stained panicked face, taste-he could feel the taste of bile at the back of his throat, he swallowed it down, and lastly touch-he could feel her hands searching him looking for the non existent wound. Arjun came back to reality and blinked his eyes a few times clearing them.



"Women if I was bleeding it would show through the shirt."

"Shush you don't get to talk."

She unbuttoned his shirt and reveled his torso. Arjun grabbed both her wrists in in one hand and held her face with the other. He pulled her face up and looked her in the eye and spoke slowly and clearly. He knew she was frantic and worried, possibly in shock.


"Aorhi. I. am. Fine. I was not hit by the bullet."

"B-but I h-heard and w-we went down, you didn't say anything!"


~*~


Rajveer had snuck up on Gauri and knocked the gun away from her hand and quickly cuffed her, while everyone else along with Gauri was distracted.


~*~

The entire family continued to watch as Arohi yanked her hand away from Arjun and put her arms around him and hugged him again, he slowly put his arms around her.


"It's all good Arohi, Gauri has the worst aim I have ever seen."

"Well its a blessing. Why do you do such stupid things?"

"Saving your life isn't stupid, I thought you would be more grateful."

"I wouldn't be grateful if you died."



"Is this for real?" Love asked her second oldest bahbi, they were standing up a few feet away listening to Arjun and Aorhi's conversation.

"Looks like it, I think...as sad as it makes me to say it, those two are in love."

"Yeah looks like it. Poor Aro, this isn't going to be easy. I mean she just had to fall for a criminal, couldn't keep it simple."

" Then again when was our Aorhi ever simple?"

"Can't argue with your there bahbi!"




"Arjun putar ki hon ya?" Arjun and Arohi quickly broke apart and stood up to see Arjun's Dadi rush into the Alluwahlia living room.


"I knew I shouldn't' have let you two come alone, I heard a gun shot when I got out of the car. Are you both alright?" She put her hands on both there cheeks and looked them over.


"Dadi Aorhi and I are fine."


~*~

"Mujhi Yaad aya!"

Everyone looked at mamji. His sister DJ responded first.

"This isn't the time for your antics! We have a serious situation." Of all the times for her friend two show up she had to show up now.


"But I remember where that CD is, that one Rajveer was looking for. I remembered because of Arohi's CD, I'll go get it right now!"


"What is he talking about Rajveer?" Kartar asked.

Rajveer held on to a quiet Gauri. "I asked him to give me a CD he made the day Rashi fell. He hasn't been able to remember."


"Kartar sab I hope you can explain why someone tried to shoot Aorhi?" While the Allowhalia family was talking amongst them selves she had gotten the info from Arjun that Gauri had tried to kill Aorhi.


"You think your granddaughter is in danger at MY house, it seemed she was the most safe there, because she didn't have to live with this snake! No one has in my family ever tried to physically harm Aorhi nor would they even consider it! And today in front of you, your child was in danger and my grandson her husband saved her! So I ask you who is she really safe with?"


Karter looked conflicted. Why was everything so backwards. What was he going to do about Gauri, she obviously mental needed help. Arjun was so contradicting was he good or bad?


Arohi's mother wiped away her tears. She didn't care what anyone said, her daughters life was in danger and only one person was responsible for saving her, again.

She made her way to where Arjun and Aorhi were standing with Dadi infront of them.


"Arjun beta thank you so much for saving my child. I am forever indebted to you, we all are." She put her hands together in apology.


Arjun felt uncomfortable, he was just doing his job. It wasn't a big deal.

"Um ah-- no need to thank me. Its really alright I'm used to it, trouble follows Arohi around." When he noticed her mom start to cry more.


He put his hands up and looked at his dadi for help, "Did I say something wrong?"



"No putar, don't worry about it Aorhi's mom. He is her husband uska fardz banta hai, Arohi ki kyal rakna." She patted Arohi's mom on the head and hugged her.


"Mama!" Aorhi put her hands round her mom and dadi.


"Oh Aorhi!" Her bua then her chachi joined in the group hug, Arjun took a few steps back.


"Anyone else want to join in the group hug?" He looked at Arohi's DJ.

"Of course I do, your dadi son is so big how will I be able to access my granddaughter?"


"I heard that you fat old hag."

Arjun smirked , his Dadi knew how to diss. The men in the room save for Arjun looked out of place and didn't know what to do with themselves. There enemy had just saved there child, from one of there own. The wind was taken out of there sales.


The ladies hug fest was interrupted by mamji who came into the room again shouting and smiling with the disc in his hand.




TBC..................



Hello my lovely readers.Thank you all for your comments and words of encouragement🤗, I love them all!😳


Many of you have PMed me asking if I will enter the KMH2 FF contest.

The answer is no.

I have one reason which I don't want to state the other more compelling reason (and everyone is entitled to there own opinion) is that writing for me is creative work, and a stress reliever, for me it can't be forced.


Thus, no biggie I'd rather hear one of your comments then win a contest, you guys have said such amazing things that winning a contest pales in comparison. You guys are soooooo awesome and thank you!! 🤗

That being said good luck to everyone entering! Looking forward to reading them. 👍🏼


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Posted: 14 years ago
YAY!! first 2 comment. Firstly, mina u r so sweet i understand u dnt want 2 enter the comp and i respect that. Ur a fab writer and ur ff is mindblowing! Wat an up8! Arjuhi love eachother whether they like it or not! Haha chachu must be guttd that his enemy had 2 save his neice that 2 4rm his psyco wife lol. Yay mamaji found the cd now the rashi raaz will com out and that kamini leech will get som more butt kicked! Cant wait 4 nxt part. Update soon and do pm me. TC XX
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