FF 'Dadi's Revenge' UPdated chapter 16 pg31

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Hi Mina sorry for late reply, busy with my work....awsome updates buddy....love the part when arjun saved her n then dadi's entry, u discribe each n every scene beautifuly , luv u n a big hug to u.........chalu is baar maama jee ko kuch tu time per yaad aya, hehe....waiting for next part........

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Love14

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

that was another fantastic part from u Mina............hoping to see some lovey dovey moments in the next update:)

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Khadhija

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Wow Mina. This was mind blowing. I cant tell you how much i loved it. I know i kinda keep on repeating myself but what can I do, when ever i read your FF I loose my words, thoughts. All I can think is tht Mina is FABULOUS writer. I can imagine the story in my head while im reading it. Just love it. Thank you so much for taking your time and writing such amazing pieces of work. you BLOW my mind ! &. i laughed at the part where the Mamaji came down saying " Muje Yaad Ayea" Lol tht killed me 🤣Too good. wow....

Thanks❤️

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Anshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

wow mina.....another suprb update.....luvd it...🤗🤗

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dishdirection

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

mindblowing no scene can be better than this update soon

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chandarani1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

simply mind blowing!!! totally knock out material !!!now i can sleep or can I??????🤗mina whatevr everyone has said so far,just multiply that 100 times and even then it won't be enough!! u r toooooooooooooo gooooodddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Great update Mina

Superb dialogues and situation. I thought Arjun will take abullet for Arohi again. Thank GOD he is not hurt

I realy liked it that Arjun saved Arohi in front of her family from one of their own 👏👏👏

Now i want him to give that Gauri one big slap for pushing rashi. I wish RPS also comes to their house now. Want to see his reaction after knowing gauri pushed her