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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

hi, just viewed your pm, thanks for keeping me updated. just read all last 3 now and love the way the story is shaping up. dont want to see arohi and arjun get devorced, wish arohi was a little bit more understanding and thinks for herself rather than beleiveing everything she hears from her side of family. keep up all the good and quick story telling

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Scene31 Arjun-Michael sibling rivarly and camaderie

Arjun who sees Romit passing by for drinks says to michael "Michael, i wish i was in Romit team, looks like i lost bet with Raj because of you".

Michael(the dumb) does not understand its to motivate Romit and gets angry at Arjun in field and says "Arjun, how dare you?" and throws tantrums saying that he will not play with Arjun anymore.

Raj who observes this runs to the field and says "Michael uncle, You are na, just like what dadi says?"

Michael says "What?"

Raj says "She says to dad na always, ko kotte de puttar".

Michael now really angry shouts "What?" and Arjun is desperately trying to conceal his laughter.

Raj says "Shh, you are truly kotte de puttar. Dad was just trying to motivate Romit bhaiya by saying he wanted to be in his team. You do not understand jokes also".

Michael says "OK, I am sorry, did not understand".

Raj says "Say sorry to dad not to me".

Michael looks at Arjun but does not want to admit his mistake in front of Arjun as his ego will hurt.

Arjun understand that and says "No problem Michael, after all what is use of siblings if they do not have nok jhoks and fights. I did not mean what i told you really, trust me".

Michael cools down and goes for drink break.

Raj says "Dad, your brother always fight with you. I am lucky i do not have a brother".

Arjun says "No Raj, Michael loves me but it's just that he cannot express it. And i did not feel bad that he was angry at me after all he is my elder brother and has every right to get angry at me. I should have told him before hand that i will tell like that to him to motivate Romit. It was my fault beta. And did he not agree to play this match, that shows he really loves Romit and concerned for him. And beta real test of family i mean siblings comes when you are in trouble and no one helps you. That is when siblings or brothers are really required. You will understand when you grow up. Now lets go and have drinks ".

Last ten minutes start. Arjun and Michael have decided to give Romit a free run on the ground but not make him feel they lost on purpose. Romit gets the ball and dribbles past Arjun and Michael and nets the ball. The score is 4-4. Just 3 more minutes to go.

The staff and body guards have now gathered round the pitch only and cheering wildly for Romit. Romit gets the ball and runs to the D and is by mistake dribbled by Michael and falls down in D with no defender in front of him. Raj and Billu demand a penalty stroke and Jignesh grant it. 1 more minute to go.

Dadi and Kumud also stand up and start cheering for Romit. Romit takes the penalty and Raj shouts "best of luck bhaiya". Romit hits penalty on right hand corner top and Makrand cannot catch it and its a goal. Raj and billu run to congratulate Romit. Jignesh blows whistle.

Everyone clapping wildly including Arjun and Michael.

Romit hugs Raj and lifts him and says "What champ, so you have not lost your bet with your dad. Happy now".

Raj hugs him tightly and says "Yes, Romit bhaiya, thanks. Because of you i won the bet" and looks at Arjun who is smiling.

In the excitement that Romit has won Michael is so happy, he forgets its Arjun standing next to him and puts his hand around his shoulder and standing feeling all excited and smiling.

Looking at this Raj surprised and winks at Arjun and shows towards Michael.

Arjun was also so lost in that win celebration that he did not realize it and looks at Michael and smiles.

Romit walks back carrying Raj towards Arjun and Michael and says "I am so happy, you know why not because i won, but after long time i am seeing my two elder brothers standing arms in each other shoulder."

Michael suddenly realizes that he is holding Arjun and releases his hands off Arjun's shoulder. Romit says "How I wish dad was here with us today?".

Arjun says "He will be back soon, i promise. Right Michael"

"Definitely" says Micahel.

Raj says "Now do you both agree you are old".

Arjun says "OK, my granddad(dadaji), both of us agree you youngsters are better than us old men" and all laugh.

Jignesh looking at all this Arjun-Michael camaraderie feels insecure.

He goes to kumud who is sitting far off from the hustle bustle and says "Mom are you seeing what is happening?"

Kumud says "Of course, i am seeing that Romit has won and is very happy and looks like finally he will cheer up".

Jignesh smirks at his mother in laws stupidity and feels this is not right time to speak anything else and leaves.

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

i hope jiggy leaves the house as well just like he did the field.. anywayz.. great going prem.. i also always imagined arjun n micky growing close in the future..coz micky doesnt have a bad heart after all.. luv it!!👏

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indianamerican

@indianamerican

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Hey i just finished reading all of the scenes and they are great!!!!! good writing. loved how you forced on each of the family member. Raj is sooo cute ans smart like arjun! can you please add me to your pm list.

Chandni :)

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MrsCrosby87

@MrsCrosby87

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

that was soo gudd luved how the whole family is finally coming together and raj is just too funny copying and dadi :p

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Anshita

@..anshita..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

gud part........raj is too funny.... michail khote da puttar...🤣

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Scene32: Arjuhi meet in mall and have dinner

Sunday Romit, Raj and Arjun go for movie and dinner to a mall. Many people who have seen Romit and Rudra photo in paper for Arohi supari keep staring at Romit. (A few days back, a newspaper report had come saying business tycoon RPS and son Romit Singhania arrested for plotting to kill their daughter in law Arohi Singhania) Romit feels akward and wants to run back to house but Arjun coaxes him to enjoy the evening and not bother about people.

The movie starts and its "127 hours". Raj gets bored after sometime and keeps running around the theatre. Romit keeps thinking of how to go to college tommorow and his classmates reaction and how he will face them. Arjun thoroughly enjoying movie. Movie finishes and Raj is no where to be seen. Arjun was so engrossed in movie and Romit in thoughts that they have no idea where Raj is. Both get tensed and start searching in hall frantically.

Raj meanwhile gets pushed out of cinema hall in the crowd leaving theatre and a security sees him looking tense. He takes Raj with him and start searching for his dad and Romit bhaiya. Arohi and Shefali also come to the same mall for shopping and dinner and sitting and drinking chocolate milk shake.

Raj sees her and shouts "Mom, Mom".

Security gaurd takes him to her table and says "What madam, you are sitting here and sipping coffee while your son is lost. What parents are there now adays. Why have children if you have no responsibility? Next time in crowded place be careful of your son". Arohi shocked and manages to says sorry.

Meanwhile Arjun tells Romit to go in one direction and he goes in other direction searching for Raj asking everyone whether they saw a small child. Raj is busy drinking milk shake from his mother's glass.

He sees Arjun from far off and stands on his chair and shouts dad and waves at him.

Arjun sees him from far but cannot see Arohi, Shefali sitting there and moves towards him.

He reaches Raj chair and sees Shefali and Arohi and says "Hi, Shefali. What a pleasant surprise?"

Just then they hear someone saying "Arjun bhaiya" and turns to see Romit coming in their direction.

Raj jumps down and runs to Romit and gets him to where Arohi is there.

Romit surprised to see Arohi and says "Hello, Arohi Bhabi, how are you?"

Arohi says she is fine but is feeling akward for she knows Romit was in jail without his fault.

Raj starts his banter "Do you know mom, after you left for trip (Arohi told him when Raj had called her at her residence to find out when she will come), Romit bhaiya also went for trip without informing me and when he returned after 3-4 days he was fully bruised. He was very unwell for last one week, hence dad decided to get me and him out for a movie and dinner today so that he cheers up".

Romit is feeling terribly awkward(with Raj disclosing police torture wounds to Arohi and Shefali) and

Arjun realises that and puts his hand over Romit shoulder and shouts "Raj, stop your nonsense banter and i will never get you out if you keep talking personal things in front of strangers who do not care" and stares at Arohi.

Romit wants to defuse the tensions brewing and says "Bhaiya, lets go for dinner".

Raj says "Mom, why do not you and aunty join us" and

Arohi says "No, we are going home for dinner, thanks Raj".

Romit says "Join us for dinner Arohi babhi, we will like it".

Raj excited holds Romit hand in right and Arohi hand in left and pulls them towards a restaurant in mall. Arjun and Shefali follow

Arjun had told Raj that menu will be decided by Romit only in restaurant at house, so Raj takes menu card and gives it to Romit and says "bhaiya today you decide menu and we all will have whatever you order".

Romit says "No, all of you can decide your own menu's"

but Arohi says "Romit you decide menu, please its my request".

Romit gives order and he knows everyone favourite dishes and orders accordingly.

Arohi asks him "You still remember that i like kabab's".

Romit says "definitely bhabhi, i remember you had told me you like kababs".

Arjun is really angry by now and says "Waiter, get the menu as soon as possible".

Arjun is angry at the divorce papers being sent at such a time to his house.Arjun is also very angry that Romit was tortured by Rajveer in police station and RPS was forced to sign a wrong statement about Arohi's attack. And that Arohi never trusts him and his family.

They finish dinner and leave with Raj asking Arohi when she will return from trip and she hugging and saying she will take some more time on the trip.

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago

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-medz-

@-medz-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

awwww luk raj! romit after knwing that arohi's chachu onli gave him bruises was so kind to arohi !

loved the part...

u really write weeeeellllllllll !

love ur ff and ur fast updates !

thanks for the pm !

medha !

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

wow all the tension, could feel like you cut it with a knife, awsome dudue,

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: samhit_sanaya
awwww luk raj! romit after knwing that arohi's chachu onli gave him bruises was so kind to arohi !
loved the part...

u really write weeeeellllllllll !

love ur ff and ur fast updates !

thanks for the pm !

medha !

Hi samhit

If a person is hurt by someone he forgives easily than if his family or near dear ones are hurt.

So Arjun is angry with Arohi because her family hurt romit and his dad but romit is not grudging arohi, he is still innocent and not manipulative at heart

remember he gave simi the letter without reading that gay stuff written by sanchit

Soo, i let him like that innocent and not a grudge kind of person like others are in singhania family