Pyar k kuch khatte Mithe Pal...(Completed chk:pg1) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol hahha.. bless u.. do continue🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lian ...u there???? we are waitingggggggggg..............ok prem has already missed two chances now give him one chance
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Prem is very upset,He cant sleep,he wants tio meet here,He was walking alone on the garden&looke at the window,He got an idea.He run to Preet.

Preet:Bhai aap,yaha?is waqt abhi tak soye nehi??

Prem:Preet,mujhe Heer se milna hai,use bina mile mujhe nind nehi ayegi.

Preet:Kia bhai ap bhi, jake millo na problem kia hai?

Prem:lekin mujhe uske liye teri madat chahiye
Preet:Meri madat,isme mai apki kia madat karo??
Heer k sath Meher bhi hai,mai Heer se milne ja raha hu tu tab tak Meher ko kisi kam me uljhake rak.Please mere bhai,apne bare bhai k liye itni taklif to utha hi sakta hai,
Preet:thik hai mai koshish karta hu,ar ap jaldi karna
Then Preet saying to himself Bhabhi k pyar ne mere bhai ko kia se kia bana diya,god help him!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Last part of my scene🙂
Meher was going to her room,Preet stopped her&said
Preet:Meher!!zara ruko,
Meher:Kia Hua Preet,koi kam tha??
Preet:Kaha ja rahi ho.
Meher (with a confusing look):mai to apne kamre me ja rahi thi,Kyu??
Preet:To mat jao na,
Meher(shocked): Kia???
Preet:Mera matlab hai jao,par kuch der bad,mujhe tumse kuch kam tha.
Meher:Itni raat ko??mujhse kam??kaho?
Preet thinking what excuse he ll give now to stop meher thinking,vo mai,vo mujhe pani pina hai,to pio mana kisne kia hai,nehi tum sath chalo na.
Meher:Mai??par kyu??
Preet:Mujhe daar lagta hai
Meher:Daar??kisse
Preet:Us churel ash se,agar usne mujhe waha dekh liya to mujhe pakkar ke beth jayegi,to agar tum mere kiye kitchen se pani ladeti to .
Meher(laugh):thik hai chalti hu.
Preet:Thanks
Onthe other hand in heer's room.
Heer was thinking about Prem &smiling
Now guess where is Prem???Approve
Prem is coming from Heer's window😆
Prem jumped over from the window&Heer get scared
Prem!!!!!!!!!!Tum yaha is waqt Kia kar rahe ho??Pagal hogaye ho kia??
Prem(smiling naughtily) come close to heer&Keep his hand on Heer's mouth&said
Prem:Bohat bolti ho,ab kuch pal chum rahke khamoshio ko baat karne do.
Eye locked for few minutes then Prem speak out.
Prem:kabse is ek pal ka intezar kar raha tha,jaha sirf tum ho,mai&humara pyar.Par subha se leke ab tak jab dekho koi na koi ajata hai.Heer mai sirf tumse itna kehna chahta hu,Mai tumsebohat pyar karta hu,or tumhe ek pal k liye bhi apne se door jate huye nehi dekh sakta.
Heer:Main bhi,main bhi tumse beimteha pyar karti hu,kuch hi dino ki baat hai,phir humari shadi hai,uske baad koi hume ek dosre se alag nehi kar payega.
Prem:Ye kuch din mere liye bohat bhari parengge.
Then Preet shout so that Prem could understand that Meher is coming so Prem said goodnight to Heer&kissed her on her forehead&went frm the window
The End
Did u enjoy it???i really want to see Prem is climbing up through a window to meet heer.
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Edited by lian - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeh very nice dear so sweeeet yeh really gud
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was really cute....
thanks for writing
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was great!
Thanks for writing it!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was really sweet...😜
finally prem got to talk to heer....going thro window?? ummm...sounds intrestinggggg...🥰i would love it if he does that..😆
Thanks for writing😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome scenes liana.I really enjoyed reading it.I hopw we get to see something like this in kdmhmd.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww...that was so cute....amazing....👏

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