Pyar k kuch khatte Mithe Pal...(Completed chk:pg1)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Every1,

How r u all?Hope u all r fine.I knw the name of this topic ll make u all eager to knw abt it,well there is some sweet scenes roaming around of my mind&now i want 2 share it 2 u all.First i thought to write a ff,bt it ll very difficult to me to continue the ff as im just planning a scene(u can say mixing of 3/4scenes)bt i hope&wish that it ll b liked by u all.Do comment.

Everything is fine now.Lalit got to know abt the truth of Heer&decided to give the marriage of Prem Heer.Prem&Heer both r very happy.Especially Prem🥰his heart&lip is up with joy,he want 2 dance&shout in joy.He wants to spent some time with Heer in alone&the scene started frm here..

Prem hold Heer's hand&grabbed her in a corner.
Heer:Prem!Ye kia kar rahe ho?Koi dekhlega.

Prem:Dekhne do,mai kisi se Daar ta ho kia?...

Heer beta!.Lalit is coming by calling Heer's name.


Heer:Prem,bauji bula rahe hai,mujhe jane do pls?

Prem:itne asani se nehi jane de sakta

Then Lalit arrive that place.

Lalit:are Heer?Tum dono yaha kia kar rahe ho?Mai tumhe kabse dhundraha tha.
Seeing Lalit Prem get nervous&left Heer's hand.

Heer:vo bauji mai ahi rahi thi k ap yaha chale aye.
Then Lalit noticed Prem&said

Lalit:Aur Prem,tum?Tum yaha kia kar rahe ho?

Prem(in a nervous tone):vo mai,bauji,vo mai...Ha mai v aphi se milne a raha tha.

Lalit:kyu?Kuch kam hai?
To changed the topic prem said

Prem:bauji apne kis kam k liye Heer ko bulaya tha?

Lalit remember that&said,

Lalit:acha hua tune yaad dila dia,Heer mujhe tujhse kuch kam hai,zara mere sath chal.
Saying this Lalit took Heer with him&Prem was angry,upset,like

As Heer finished Lalit's work she went out from his room&going to her room,suddenly prem hold her from the back,her scared!
Heer:Oh!Prem ye kia kar rahe ho?Choro mujhe.

Prem:Mai jab bhi tumhe pakar ta hu tum humesha chorneki bat kyu karti ho?
Heer:Prem,aisi bat nehi hai,samajhne ki koshish karo.Koi ajayega,or hume aise dekhega to kya sochega?
Prem:yehi ke mai tumse kitna pyar karta hu.
Heer:Prem(blushes)
Now this time gayatri Ma bcom Prem's pyar ka dushman as she came&Prem have 2 leave Heer.Prem in a sad face
Heer smiles naughtily.
Gayatri Maa:Heer!Beta mere sath chal,shadi ki kuch saman dikhana hai.
Heer:ji maa,
prem also coming with heer.
Gayatri Maa:Prem,tu kaha aa raha hai?Abhi chal decoraters ko phone laga.Aur unse kehna kal subha se kam suru kar de.
Prem,with a fake smile on his face said ji maa.

Again Prem missed another chance to spent some time with Heer

Prem is very upset,He cant sleep,he wants tio meet here,He was walking alone on the garden&looke at the window,He got an idea.He run to Preet.

Preet:Bhai aap,yaha?is waqt abhi tak soye nehi??

Prem:Preet,mujhe Heer se milna hai,use bina mile mujhe nind nehi ayegi.

Preet:Kia bhai ap bhi, jake millo na problem kia hai?

Prem:lekin mujhe uske liye teri madat chahiye
Preet:Meri madat,isme mai apki kia madat karo??

Heer k sath Meher bhi hai,mai Heer se milne ja raha hu tu tab tak Meher ko kisi kam me uljhake rak.Please mere bhai,apne bare bhai k liye itni taklif to utha hi sakta hai,

Preet:thik hai mai koshish karta hu,ar ap jaldi karna

Then Preet saying to himself Bhabhi k pyar ne mere bhai ko kia se kia bana diya,god help him!!!!


Meher was going to her room,Preet stopped her&said

Preet:Meher!!zara ruko,

Meher:Kia Hua Preet,koi kam tha??

Preet:Kaha ja rahi ho.

Meher (with a confusing look):mai to apne kamre me ja rahi thi,Kyu??

Preet:To mat jao na,

Meher(shocked): Kia???

Preet:Mera matlab hai jao,par kuch der bad,mujhe tumse kuch kam tha.

Meher:Itni raat ko??mujhse kam??kaho?
Preet thinking what excuse he ll give now to stop meher thinking,vo mai,vo mujhe pani pina hai,to pio mana kisne kia hai,nehi tum sath chalo na.

Meher:Mai??par kyu??

Preet:Mujhe daar lagta hai

Meher:Daar??kisse

Preet:Us churel ash se,agar usne mujhe waha dekh liya to mujhe pakkar ke beth jayegi,to agar tum mere kiye kitchen se pani ladeti to .

Meher(laugh):thik hai chalti hu.

Preet:Thanks

Onthe other hand in heer's room.

Heer was thinking about Prem &smiling

Now guess where is Prem???

Prem is coming from Heer's window

Prem jumped over from the window&Heer get scared

Prem!!!!!!!!!!Tum yaha is waqt Kia kar rahe ho??Pagal hogaye ho kia??

Prem(smiling naughtily) come close to heer&Keep his hand on Heer's mouth&said
Prem:Bohat bolti ho,ab kuch pal chum rahke khamoshio ko baat karne do.

Eye locked for few minutes then Prem speak out.

Prem:kabse is ek pal ka intezar kar raha tha,jaha sirf tum ho,mai&humara pyar.Par subha se leke ab tak jab dekho koi na koi ajata hai.Heer mai sirf tumse itna kehna chahta hu,Mai tumsebohat pyar karta hu,or tumhe ek pal k liye bhi apne se door jate huye nehi dekh sakta.

Heer:Main bhi,main bhi tumse beimteha pyar karti hu,kuch hi dino ki baat hai,phir humari shadi hai,uske baad koi hume ek dosre se alag nehi kar payega.

Prem:Ye kuch din mere liye bohat bhari parengge.

Then Preet shout so that Prem could understand that Meher is coming so Prem said goodnight to Heer&kissed her on her forehead&went frm the window

********The End********


Did u enjoy it???i really want to see Prem is climbing up through a window to meet heer.
TakeCare.Do Reply😀



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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue immediately...cant wait for tomorrow
the wait for monday is itself making life boring.,...seems like u can cheer us up
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Really??🙂Do u think so then here is another part🥰

Heer:Prem,bauji bula rahe hai,mujhe jane do pls?

Prem:itne asani se nehi jane de sakta

Then Lalit arrive that place.

Lalit:are Heer?Tum dono yaha kia kar rahe ho?Mai tumhe kabse dhundraha tha.
Seeing Lalit Prem get nervous&left Heer's hand.

Heer:vo bauji mai ahi rahi thi k ap yaha chale aye.
Then Lalit noticed Prem&said

Lalit:Aur Prem,tum?Tum yaha kia kar rahe ho?

Prem(in a nervous tone):vo mai,bauji,vo mai...Ha mai v aphi se milne a raha tha.

Lalit:kyu?Kuch kam hai?
To changed the topic prem said

Prem:bauji apne kis kam k liye Heer ko bulaya tha?

Lalit remember that&said,

Lalit:acha hua tune yaad dila dia,Heer mujhe tujhse kuch kam hai,zara mere sath chal.
Saying this Lalit took Heer with him&Prem was angry,upset,like to pull his hair.


Thats for now,tommorrow i ll add another part.Do reply wht do u think abt it.Positive/negetive all kind of comments r welcome.
Thanks for reading my post😀
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow..that was great....Thumbs%20Up
amazing....keep up the good work...👏🏻
poor prem..dont get to romance with heer...😭Ouch😆
why dont you make it a FF...looks like its going great!!!!😉
anywyz...it was awesome hun...continue soon...😜
(it was really short...😭but its okay...)🥰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol please do continue soon looking forward to the next part....prem are heer are pretty cute but in this one prem seems a bit outspoken lol
sukhi :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome ...plz continue...cant wait to see such scenes on the screen.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks 2 all for liking this my writing 🙂its not so short bt not big as a Ff,the scene ll b continue still Prem meet Heer&b satisfied with the meeting🥰

As Heer finished Lalit's work she went out from his room&going to her room,suddenly prem hold her from the back,her scared!
Heer:Oh!Prem ye kia kar rahe ho?Choro mujhe.

Prem:Mai jab bhi tumhe pakar ta hu tum humesha chorneki bat kyu karti ho?
Heer:Prem,aisi bat nehi hai,samajhne ki koshish karo.Koi ajayega,or hume aise dekhega to kya sochega?
Prem:yehi ke mai tumse kitna pyar karta hu😉.
Heer:Prem(blushes)
Now this time gayatri Ma bcom Prem's pyar ka dushman as she came&Prem have 2 leave Heer.Prem in a sad face
Heer smiles naughtily.
Gayatri Maa:Heer!Beta mere sath chal,shadi ki kuch saman dikhana hai.
Heer:ji maa,
prem also coming with heer.
Gayatri Maa:Prem,tu kaha aa raha hai?Abhi chal decoraters ko phone laga.Aur unse kehna kal subha se kam suru kar de.
Prem,with a fake smile on his face said ji maa.

Again Prem missed another chance to spent some time with Heer


Readers must b thinking wht m i doing?I had bcom the main vilain btw Premeer.Woh kehte hai na "pyar mei intezar ka bhi ek apna hi maza hota hai,ishq mei ashique tarap tarap ke hi dewana hota hai."kisne kaha???Maine😆😆😆sorry if i bored u.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesomeeeeeee too good waiting for more asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh its very nice do give us some more soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful
please quickly update the next part cant wait for it

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