New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 41

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

i dont like this FF esp you make Heer kiss Preet, no way...

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Great update as usual😊

Originally posted by: aati1429

hey first such long time dear....

and lovely part.. i a so in love with ur preet.. her is just too romantic... amazing loved every bit of it...

Originally posted by: Nitty2910

lovely and interesting update...as always.... Wondering if anything good or bad will happen during the party.

For how long now will I have to wait for the next update???it's really difficult you see....😉

Thanx for the PM and will be waiting for the next one too...

Originally posted by: Premeer_chahat

Hey awesome update as usual!!! Plz can u add me to ur pm list??

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

Great update Great update Great update now jaz don't dissappear sis .................... cause i'll bug u to update if u disappear

love

lekha

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey jaz di! that was a great part! hmmw onder what will happen during the party! aww..loved everything that preet did!

cant wait to read the next part!

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

u know i am a huge huge huge fan of premeer but in this fic i truly feel that heer should marry preet and not return to prem 😆😆i have to say...you are one of the few Preet fans...lmao...hang in there...everything will play out eventually...there is more to prem than what meets the eye...and...major twist coming up 😉😉

preet is much compatible with heer than prem and moreover prem and heer seem to have just physical spark between them they don't have the understanding between them that preet and heer have. Prem has his reasons...you'll be shocked when his truth comes out 😛

a marriage cannot sorely be based on physical needs only it needs understanding, care for one another and the need to do little things for each other that bring a smile in yr partner's life which preet does for heer and not prem. well put! loved the way you say it...its not all about sex 👏👏👏

moreover in the last upadate even heer was slightly attracted towards preet seeing his body(at least i felt that) Heer and the other girls were drooling over both Prem and Preet...can you blame them...i know i'd be doing the same 😍

i wud love to c preet and heer 2gther-only in this fic mind you-and not premeer hmm....wait til you see what i have planned...😈

Originally posted by: angel82

u update after so long and that too a complete Preet part with just a little of my prem....

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

You have written the part well but I CANNOT imagine Heer with anyone other than my gorgeous Prem no matter how ever sweet the other person is....and for that reason, I hate the Heer in this FF....

She was the one who decided to accept Prem's offer to move in with him for a no-committment relation...

she was the one who left him all of a sudden without even telling him in person so that she could see his reaction ...She was the who didnt even inform him of her pregnancy...She .........😡 is now playing with Preet's emotions, giving him hope when she ONLY loves PRem....Heer may kiss , hug and think she loves preet but I'm damn sure she loves and will love only prem... love isnt always enough...thats all ill say because i dont want to come off as mean 😳

I can understand why she is distancing herself from prem,ignoring him but when with him, why is she acting as if he destroyed her life, he's the meanest man on earth and all when she was the one who made a mess of her life ....or is it her way of hiding her love to him? he didnt destroy her life...in some way he made her life...she is happy with Aarav...without him Aarav wouldnt be here...but he did break her heart...their whole story is not out yet...pls have patience 😳😳

my poor prem , is soo lonely in his life...there is no one to share his pain and uper se, this heer is torturing him by acting all cozy with preet..i'm sure everyone will love him when you bring out his miseries...his loneliness.....in this FF , Prem is a man with a golden heart , why isnt heer realising....why isnt everyone realising....😭😭😭 he is not bad.....most of the readers think he is a jerk , yes he is one but he isnt at all bad...and only he deserves heer ..she is no saint ....just becoz preet gets to show his love to her , he doesnt become the better one to get her....prem did not get a chance to do all this for heer...once he realises his love and acknowledges it , i am sure he will out do preet...he would be the best....

he did impress heer a lot before they lived together , why isnt anyone remembering all that...😭😭😭

jaz, give him a chance and he will prove to be a better match...plz Prem didnt show his love because he didnt want to...his deal was no love, nothing serious...that is how is character is...just because you want to see him in a positive light doesnt mean that it will happen...his character is the way it is for a reason...

I love this FF.... please give us some prem -heer scenes....and plz no more preet-heer hugs and kisses ...PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ...it kills me reading it....🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

please do justice to prem , he deserves happiness and preet deserves someone much better and naive than heer..Arav deserves his original Papa...plz.....preet could remain his uncle P...

I am a rebel , am i not .?😆 But what to do , i'm a diehard premeer fan....😆and a Jnawaz fan too😆

luv

Angie thanks 😳

Originally posted by: tadashi

Yoir story was great! you are making me fall in love with preet! Who is heer going to end up with? preet or prem,her baby daddy. hehe

Originally posted by: yasu09

wooooooooooow..................
can't wait to see what happens next.........................
plz update sooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..........

Originally posted by: zaara006

damn it!!!!!!

Reserved!!!!

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

Fabulous update Jaz..very well written 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved it loved loved....you made us wait a lot for this update...
hope nothing serious happen in the party...and i loved the Desi theme
Preet is such a nice guys.....
personally speaking i would to see heer with prem only...
but but but..you are the writer and its up to you how and where to move the story naa 😉
i think deep down Heer still loves Prem.....want to see prem's jealousy in the next update...
once again Jaz...beautiful update 👏 👏 👏
waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: fj08

hey Jaz

thanks for the updates, u do make us wait, but i am too addicted to the story to not read whats going to happen next

great work

fatima

Originally posted by: curledup

MERA

Originally posted by: bd670816

great update,jaz. loved each and every part of it very much.
hmm wonder what will happen during the party!
tc.

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was amazing...👏 loved heer's saree...it was so beautiful... 👍🏼 preet is so adorable and the flashback was too sweet...⭐️ thanks for the PM and continue soon...😊


love
Afreen

Originally posted by: fungrl

me like the update, the sarri , and Preet ...............since I have a feeling that preet may be left out in the cold just to complete our Heer's family with Prem...................can we find him like the best grill I am sorry, the best girl ever and ever..................I really like Preet ...............of course Prem is drollalicious..................but Preet is such a shweetu..............don't make him cry por favor...........comprende

Originally posted by: -Payal-

Thank God I check the FC from time to time....*sigh*...I hope I get to read the update soon...thanks Jaz...

Originally posted by: Cess-

*reserved*.... *faints*....

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey thankgod you updated i was over da moon ijust luv this ff one of my favs wounder wt happens next but u keep up da gud wrk

i miss arav though

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey

wow that was long update

awesome as always

thankz for pm

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

very nice

it feels very weird when i picture heer and preet though

thanx for the pm

and do update soon

Kamal

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

U UPDATED!!!!!

YAY!!

i have been waiting so long for this..

anyways, thanks..

arav is such a cutie, wish he and prem meet soon..

anyways, no offense, how long is this heer-preet track gona go on..

cause i mean, whenever i think of preet, i think of him as heer's devar..ugh, yea..

anyways, awesome update like usual!!

oh yea, cant wait for the next installment!!! =D

Originally posted by: Amitoz

simply amazing! no words to explain ur creativity! keep updating! thanks!

Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd

Hi jaz how are you? good...and you? 😃

Ok one thing good about this ff that you don't make cry while I am reading it, rather you make me angry. Ok on a serious note, I like this ff a lot. The chemistry between heer and prem is awesome. Especially when he forbids her from 'looking'. Last update was a nice. I can imagine what heer, meher, and ashlesha would have enjoyed the sight in front of them😉. Seeing preet and prem without shirts would have been very interesting. 😆 yes...it would be awesome to see them like that...😳😳 just imagine...hmm...we should send a request to the creatives about that 😛😛😛😛

And telling you I literally dieing for prem and heer's scenes now, ok let me clear it, I am dieing for romantic and passionate scenes between them. Jaz cant you fulfill even this tiny-miny wish of mine 😊. This is first time I am asking you something😉, ok second time after tanhai, but technically speaking it is first time for this ff😆. And uptil now even that wish isn't fulfilled so why don't you consider this new one till then. Ok I know I am going on and on about this, so lets focus on your update. ha ha...you and many others are dying for premeer scenes 😆😆😆

It was not only heer who was smiling after the letter finished, rather I too joined her. see...Preet is a cutie 😳

Aarav asking whats good for nothing guys, that was so sweet. So saali aadhi naukarani hoti hai 🤣. That was so good. I wonder how preet escaped with that comment. hmm...how did he escape...i think someone came or he ran away...i forget

Now prem is here in the party, I really hope something does happen between him and heer. Prem you have never seen her in a saree na, now plan something that you are the only one you could see in that dress. I mean by making her rightfully yours.

Plz jaz give them a chance to come together, keeping preet aside. Waiting eagerly for your next

Sia

Originally posted by: 268143

hy Jaz so glad u finally updated n thanx 4 da PM 😊 i absolutely loved da update .................. jst lovin da bond between da sistas n da teasin between Preet n his saalis 😉 da flashback was cute n Arav is soo adorable ................... cnt w8 4 him 2 get bk n even meet Prem 😛 hope u update soon n yh do PM wen u do ⭐️