New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9

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sanyoprithviraj

@sanyoprithviraj

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Posted: 16 years ago

#381

u know i am a huge huge huge fan of premeer but in this fic i truly feel that heer should marry preet and not return to prem

preet is much compatible with heer than prem and moreover prem and heer seem to have just physical spark between them they don't have the understanding between them that preet and heer have.

a marriage cannot sorely be based on physical needs only it needs understanding, care for one another and the need to do little things for each other that bring a smile in yr partner's life which preet does for heer and not prem.

moreover in the last upadate even heer was slightly attracted towards preet seeing his body(at least i felt that)

i wud love to c preet and heer 2gther-only in this fic mind you-and not premeer

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Angie

@angel82

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Posted: 16 years ago

#382

u update after so long and that too a complete Preet part with just a little of my prem....

😭

You have written the part well but I CANNOT imagine Heer with anyone other than my gorgeous Prem no matter how ever sweet the other person is....and for that reason, I hate the Heer in this FF....

She was the one who decided to accept Prem's offer to move in with him for a no-committment relation...

she was the one who left him all of a sudden without even telling him in person so that she could see his reaction ...She was the who didnt even inform him of her pregnancy...She .........😡 is now playing with Preet's emotions, giving him hope when she ONLY loves PRem....Heer may kiss , hug and think she loves preet but I'm damn sure she loves and will love only prem...

I can understand why she is distancing herself from prem,ignoring him but when with him, why is she acting as if he destroyed her life, he's the meanest man on earth and all when she was the one who made a mess of her life ....or is it her way of hiding her love to him?

my poor prem , is soo lonely in his life...there is no one to share his pain and uper se, this heer is torturing him by acting all cozy with preet..i'm sure everyone will love him when you bring out his miseries...his loneliness.....in this FF , Prem is a man with a golden heart , why isnt heer realising....why isnt everyone realising....😭😭😭 he is not bad.....most of the readers think he is a jerk , yes he is one but he isnt at all bad...and only he deserves heer ..she is no saint ....just becoz preet gets to show his love to her , he doesnt become the better one to get her....prem did not get a chance to do all this for heer...once he realises his love and acknowledges it , i am sure he will out do preet...he would be the best....

he did impress heer a lot before they lived together , why isnt anyone remembering all that...😭😭😭

jaz, give him a chance and he will prove to be a better match...plz

I love this FF.... please give us some prem -heer scenes....and plz no more preet-heer hugs and kisses ...PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ...it kills me reading it....🤢

please do justice to prem , he deserves happiness and preet deserves someone much better and naive than heer..Arav deserves his original Papa...plz.....preet could remain his uncle P...

I am a rebel , am i not .?😆 But what to do , i'm a diehard premeer fan....😆and a Jnawaz fan too😆

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Angie

Edited by angel82 - 16 years ago

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natasha

@zzzzzzzzzzfffff

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Posted: 16 years ago

#383

Yoir story was great! you are making me fall in love with preet! Who is heer going to end up with? preet or prem,her baby daddy. hehe

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441240

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Posted: 16 years ago

#384

wooooooooooow..................
can't wait to see what happens next.........................
plz update sooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..........

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Sarah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#385

Fabulous update Jaz..very well written 👏
loved it loved loved....you made us wait a lot for this update...
hope nothing serious happen in the party...and i loved the Desi theme
Preet is such a nice guys.....
personally speaking i would to see heer with prem only...
but but but..you are the writer and its up to you how and where to move the story naa 😉
i think deep down Heer still loves Prem.....want to see prem's jealousy in the next update...
once again Jaz...beautiful update 👏 👏 👏
waiting for the next update

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fj08

@fj08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#386

hey Jaz

thanks for the updates, u do make us wait, but i am too addicted to the story to not read whats going to happen next

great work

fatima

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bd670816

@bd670816

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Posted: 16 years ago

#387

great update,jaz. loved each and every part of it very much.
hmm wonder what will happen during the party!
tc.

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

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Posted: 16 years ago

#388

hey
that was amazing...👏 loved heer's saree...it was so beautiful... 👍🏼 preet is so adorable and the flashback was too sweet...⭐️ thanks for the PM and continue soon...😊

love
Afreen

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fungrl

@fungrl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#389

me like the update, the sarri , and Preet ...............since I have a feeling that preet may be left out in the cold just to complete our Heer's family with Prem...................can we find him like the best grill I am sorry, the best girl ever and ever..................I really like Preet ...............of course Prem is drollalicious..................but Preet is such a shweetu..............don't make him cry por favor...........comprende