New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 26

aawwwww * tries to clear lump in throat* ..... i will be back.......

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!👏

hey great update luved it cant w8 to read more update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

hey amazing part i hpe prem gets to meet his son cant w8 to read more do update soon thank u

👏xcellect!B4 i start i want2knw something do u mean after this part there ll b another part?By using the word Final??Like always u wrote the whole update beautifully,each&every part u discribe it very well,Dnt knw much abt Prem's past bt it ll b very painful&mayb thts y he dnt want any commitment,jst loved they way u discribe Prem's true feelings for Heer,have to say Heer is very lucky,"logo ko 1 nehi milta&she has 2 true lover in her life" actually 3(including Aarav,the lil angel)sweet boy drew a family pic!Thts really sweet!i jst loved the part between Heer&Aarav,i was crying,still have tears want to hugg him. tightly.How he was saying abt the people in pics&thn his confession tht He missd his mommy&want his daddyi think Heei should tell them both&introduce thm wid each other,they have right to knw,lets see wht u have in ur mind.Will wait4the next part&thanks 4 the PM.Takecare.

hi jaz,
very emotional update.
loved the scene between heer and arav very much.
thanks for the pm.
cont.soon.

wow it was an emotional upate... prem has so much within him... and heer and aarav's part was very emotional too... waiting for the next update and i wish prem will know abt aarav soon,,

hey thank you for the PM..

aww i feel bad for both prem and aarav and heer is in a difficult position...
juz cant wait it read when prem will come to know abt aarav, how will he react??? aarav must be really happy...


waiting for next update...

tat was a very sad update in the end with aarav wanting his dad...loved the entire long update...