New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#261

gosh!!! i was missing your update on this fic lately and when you did, it was great as usual... loved the mommy and son's conversation.. it was really beautiful and enough practical because I hate when parents hide the truth from their children giving some illogical reasons and therefore I am glad heer does not belong to that category.
Prem heer's business conversation was beautifully described, couldnt help but laugh at the little teasing the two shared in between their serious issues... will be waiting for the next part eagarly, hope to get an update soon....

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#262

OMG!!...... totally luveddddddddd it!!!

I Especially loved the Heer-Aarav scene.... it made me want to cry...... i hope Prem finds out abt his son soon nd changes his mind on having kids also.....

waiting for next update!!

-Pari

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SongsOf_Silence

@SongsOf_Silence

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#263

hey jaz!!!awesome update!!!👏 loved it!! it was good to read the vulnerable side of prem n heer n aarav's scene was jus adorable!hes shoo cute!!! heer should better pay him attention!!😃 n best of luck with your finals!! may u pass wid flying colours! n plsss do update wen ur free!!cant wait to read more as the track of the story is getting just toooo good!!!!😊 best of luck once again!👍🏼

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#264

I updated my comment!! xx

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#265

hey jaz

after long am reading your ff and must say really missed.the way you write is just faboulous and yes if you have some spare time in your already busy schedules then how about publishing a book.am sure am not the only one suggesting this naaa😛😛😉

back to the story well absolutely love it.the way you describe both the emotions of prem and heer.superb👏and then aarav he is just cute.and aww love it when he says"i still love daddy even though he doesnt want me"😭

lets see how prem reacts and what lengths heer goes to to keep father and son from meeting.but at the end of the day it is going to preet who willl be at a loss.but when that happens tab dekha jayega

well will be looking forward to the next update.till then take care

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#266

Hey...just caught up with this fanfic...it is absolutely superb!...loved the way you have described the emotions and stuff!...brilliant!...do continue soon!!!!!

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#267

hey jaz..
i just started this FF today..
nd finished in one go..
i really loved this..
ahhh i love aarav..he is so cutye
preet...*drooling*...he is such a understanding person..
now prem...i hate to admit it but..im hating prem...
there has to be somthing back in past which made prem go so rude...

i m totally in love with JUNIOR JUNEJHA..

continue soon..

Edited by sweetshab - 16 years ago

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#268

...Only because when I do finish up with the DVTs and MIs and what not, I don't want to have to go searching for this....

Thus, will edit this space.