New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 24

hy hw r u sorry 4 da l8 rep as i jst got bk 4rm india a couple of days ago so i only read da last 3 parts 2day 😛 i saw ur updates n was really excited 2 read dem 😊 all of da parts were amazin 👏 cnt w8 2 read more plz update soon n PM me wen u do 😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

MINE! =] how do you managed to for first most of the time 😆😆

*unreserved*

Yahh really qucik update!! Aha trick question?!?! Update whenever you have time didi! 😃And good luck with all the coming assignments/reports/etc. thanks yaar...everything went well actually...have another presentation this wednesday 😕😕,...they just never end 😭😭

omgg the whole time with Preet setting up and talking about business, I just felt so BAD for him beacuse I knew Heer would tell him the truth. But honestly, you lived up to Preet's character! That's exactly how he would have taken the news and I loved how he wasne't amd at her or anything, he just knew that he had to step back and let her do her "thing" yup...he isnt overly jealous, he is understanding and sweet...i keep looking for my Preet..but alas...i gave him up...*smacks head*...but what can ya do...whats done is done

🤣Loved how Heer was making sure she didn't pick out anything "sexy"🤣🤣Kyun Heer? Asa kya daar hai?😆 aare yaar pooch maat...aage aage dekho hota hai kya 😉

aha the whole Prem-Heer interaction had me in splits. Amazingly written, loved how there was just SO MUCH sarcasam!! It really suited the characters! Ohh Prem just want's to get rid of it all? Wonder why?? Bad memories?? I have a feeling he has had areally tortured childhood? you just have to wait and see what Prem is up to and why he wants to get rid of everything...it will take a little while...but the truth will come out...phir kehna...who you like better...Prem or Preet 😛😛😛

o - m - g. DIDI! My heart and stomach literally clenched during that part, how Preet remembered Heer's dream house. Omg I hate to say this, but as much as I love Prem-Heer over Preet-Heer, as individuals, I love Preet more But I also love the hotness Prem brings with him. *sigh* ha ha...you are torn arent you...😆😆😆 Prem brings the whole bad-boy hotness that all girls are attracted to...but Preet brings the ill-love-you-4ever thing to the table...which no girl can live with out...id hate to be heer...let me tell you that much 😛😛😛

Can't wait ot read more!!

--shabz

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aur kuch?😳
🤣...aur kuch chahiyeh hoga toh bata dungi...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zarah

RESERVED- I will not leave you dissapointed like last time- I promise I will edit this soon Jaz- with a lamba comment muhahahaha!!! xx

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BTW, Congrats on becoming part of the KDMHMD DT!! 👏 You truly deserve it!! 😃 xx thanks love...😳😳

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I am back!!!!! 😛

Hey Jaz!!! How are you?? 😃😳 im hanging in there...😕😕...school is killer....but how are you jaani?

Hmmm, kahaan se shuroo karoon?? Did I say how much I love Heer??!! I love her all-honest nature!! She did the right thing not keeping anything from Preet, as secrets and lies always ruin relationships!! Take for example, Prem and Heer- clearly they lacked the ability to be able to tell each other their secrets and emotions, thus the foundation of their relationship broke!! yup yup...i didnt want her to lie to Preet because he doesnt deserve that...after everything he has done for Heer, he deserves her complete honesty...at least! 😃😃

Gosh, she is already fretting about her meeting with Prem, whilst we readers are all rubbing our hands together, waiting for the sparks to fly, hehe!! 😛 I love how she wants to keep Prem 'at bay' as if he is some sort of animal or something, lol!! 😆😆😆 Well, knowing Prem, she will definantly need to go leash shopping hehe!! Otherwise you never know when he will pounce on her 😆!! Okay, I am babbling a whole load of nonsense now- that's what your FF does to me- it turns me into a very besharam ladki!! 😳😆 Funny how she doesn't want to wear anything sexy or revealing, yet the simple clothes she is wearing would be enough to drive Prem !! honey...forget sparks...you will see full on fireworks...just give it some time...😉😉😉...ha ha...pounce...that reminded me of the Lion King...when Mufasa is teaching Simba how to pounce...now just imagine...Prem...the while Lion 😆😆...aare yaar...when it comes to Prem...we are all the same...besharam...through-and-through 😛😛

Okay, on to Preet- can he get any sweeter??!! I thought it was so cute that he could tell straight away that Heer was worried about something. AAAHHHH- Prem is an architect!!! AN ARCHITECT!!!!! 😍 Hehehehehehehe!! I love him even more now!! Lol, that's soooo amazing, I am doing a degree in architecture!!! Jaz, I love you!!! LOL, I can just imagine him, measuring, making plans of buildings- ooohh, I wouldn't mind working with him, hehe!! yaar...if you think Preet is sweet...you aint seen nothin yet! 😛😛...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😆😆...oh wow...you an architect too...thats cool...maybe some day..you will run into your prem jhuneja at a site or something 😉....ill leave you to your imagination about Prem Jhuneja as your boss!!! 😆😆

Oooh, okay, I am calm now, back to the update!! Preet is so lovely!! The fact that he didn't lose his top over learning the fact that Aarav's father is the one and only Prem Juneja makes me love him even more!! He always puts Heer's needs infront of his, so it was nice of Heer to think about him and agree to meet Prem! So she's gonna meet Prem- hmmm, if only the girl knows what she's getting herself into, lol!! 😛 I missed cute little Aarav in this update, hope we get to see more of him!! what can i say about Preet...you know what they say...be with the one that love you, not the one that you love...because in the end you know that they will be there for you no matter what ...but its hard...how do you forget the one that YOU love 😭...now im getting senti...lets move on...Aarav...he is missing...and will sort of be missing for purposes of advancin the story...but dont worry...you will doses of him through out the ff...😳😳😳...he is a doll isnt he...i could just squeeze him!!!

It's so sad that Prem kept sooo much about his life hidden from Heer!! I'm sure if he had told her everything, it would have strengthened their relationship rather than weakening it!! He probably felt he would lose her if he told her more about himself, but he just ended up losing her anyway!! Men find it difficult to talk about their feelings than women, so they feel that if they start talking about emotions it will drive people away!! I think it's quite sad really, cuz it's like a lose-lose situation!! That tree house scene was really nice!! Gosh, I wonder how long Prem stood there for- absorbing the image of his Heer!! 😳 I could just imagine Heer's expression as she turned around to see him standing there, eyes fixed on her!! 😳 She should take out the leash now!! 😆 i understand about men...you are right...the dont want to tell people their business and stuff...especiall to women...but here is my philosophy...men should tell their deepest darkest secret to the woman they love...😳😳😳...if she loves him back then the men dont need to worry about them leaving them...what screwed Prem up was the fact that he couldnt see he loved Heer...he grouped he in the category of mistresses...not love's....😳😳😳....lol...she didnt have time to get a leash...lets see if she needs one afterall 😛😛

I love Prem's condition for Heer!! He will never back down, and I find this determination sooo hot!! 😳 But ooohhh the end was so spiteful of him!! Taking advantage of Preet's love for Heer was just so malicious!! 😲 I don't know why, but Prem here reminds me of Rishabh Rampal, and that is something I do not want to imagine!! 🤢 Please Prem, if you want to get Heer, this is not the way to do it 😆!! Prem is thinking with the mind of a business man who must win at all costs...not the heart of a man who want the love of his life back in his life...big difference 😉😉😉...only when/if he realizes what heer means to him...will he change...until that change...he is a lost cause 😆...but yes...that was particularly curle!!! nto cool at all😡😡😡

Now I am getting really worried after reading your reply to my previous comment- 'just wait and watch what the Prem Juneja does to Heer' ??!!!! 😲 Gosh, I hope he doesn't do something too evil!! But no matter what, I will always love Prem!! 😉 I am very loyal you see?! 😛 Especially when it involves hot and dashing Prem, the scent of Cool Water lingering on his body 😍☺️ *swoons* Cool water reminds me of the advert with Josh Holloway- man he is hot!!!! Loved him in Lost!! 😍 Anyhoo, I am guessing Heer will accept Prem's condition to give happiness to Preet- will find out soon enough!! I hope she agrees----- then we get to see the 'raw sexual tension'!! 😉😆 jaani...when you see what exactly this Prem Jhuneja does...then you tell me where your loyalties lie 😉😉😉...im an evil person...in case you hadnt noticed that yet 😈....what can i say...lol...i love cool water...its my favorite mens sent 😳😳😳...tu bhi...after the 'raw sexual tension' 😆😆😆...fine fine fine...ill see whta i can do....😆😆

Hope you like my comment!! 😃 LOVED IT!!! always fun to read lamba comments...makes writin the ff...totally worth while 😳😳

Love Zahra xx luv you too 🤗

Originally posted by: zaibun

omg thank you sooooooooooooooo much for da update i wonder when prem will find out about his son cant wait plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey, thanks for the PM. awsome update.. loved every bit of it. and preet is just a sweetheart.. he is more than a sweetheart!!! and pre, well he likes to research alot about heer.. and any thing/one related to heer. good luck with ur school work.. and take care. update wen u get the chance..

~nikki😳

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was amazing. 👏 I suppose prem is never going to give up. loved preet and heer scenes. 😛 continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: zaara006

I can't believe it, Prem could be so ....... callous.... towards the Preet-Heer relationship???? 😳Is that the right word even????? Just get over it dude, she has found happiness let her get on with it (Hint, hint i want Preet Heer still 😉 !!!!!) !!!!! Prem is an a*s...plain and simple...wait til you see what else he does...if you dont HATE him by the end of this ff...then...mera naam bhi jaz nahin 😛😛

Thank you for updating soo quick, i quite like the idea of you updating sooner, rather than later!!!! The whole update was really well written, all the different details were really good!!! 😃 Preet is such a sweetheart and very understanding (hint hint again!! 😉 😆) Do you know where i can get a 'Preet' for myself?????😆 😳 wow...any chance you want Preet and Heer together...or am i just shooting in the dark 😆😆😆...hints taken and put into my mind for future reference 😉😉😉...glad that you enjoyed the update...😳

Lets just hope it gets better and we find out why Prem is soo cold when relationships are concerned or else i will permanently wish for Preet Heer to end up together (see i can't stop!!! 😉) !!! Oh and the side by side thing, may be interesting, but please make Heer strong enough to stay away from Prem eventhough i have a feeling Preet will not allow Heer to do this just to get all the 'money', so lets just hope you prove me right, eh (please!!)???😊 😊 see...i wanted Preet to say no as well..but but but....then the story fall short...i need Prem and Heer in close quarters to advance the story...this is the one and only time Preet may disappoint you...but but but...he greatly..and i mean GREATLY!! makes up for you...just you watch 😉😉😉

Overall a very good update, 👏 👏 👏 👏lets just hope it gets better and better and the wait for the next one doesn't just kill me!!!!! 😉 😆 haila...no plans on killing you...just as long as school doesnt kill me... 😳😳

p.s. Go Preet, go!!!!! 😃 😉 haha...Preet...who's that? 😛

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesum update
can't wait till prem find abt his son
tooo goood

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey di!hey! 😃

thanks for the PM...haha knw what u mean by papers being due in and midterm exams and all!..cant wait for the year to be over..though it just started 2 weeks ago! well...im almost done...just two more weeks then finals...but but but..i only get one week off and then its back to school 😭😭😭

hai...

a quick update...and heer told preet abt Prem and what he said in the meeting..hmm..preet took it all in his stride..which is a very good thing!..like that abt him...wow....things worth millions..think i could a few hundred thousand to pay off my loan and buy a few new things!... Preet is a catch...h*ll...id never let him go 😳😳😳 and i know...give me some of that $$$ so i can save up for grad school 😉😉...and you know...maybe a few dozen purses and shoes 😆😆

aww..preet is an utter romantic and the best there ever can be in here at least....remembering what she said abt her dream house and all!..wonder what heer will do now!...wonder if she will take the deal or and talk to preet..i am thinking that she will take the deal as she doesnt want to dissappoint preet...

cant wait for the next part...when ever ur updating.....update soon! she will do both, talk to preet and take the job...its necessary for the story that she take the job...and as they say...let the games begin! 😉...next update will be posted soon 😃

Originally posted by: only.asking

Jaz, omg, what a dilemma you have put me into -- Now I truly want Preet and Heer to be together 👏... i think... 😆 what a great guy Preet is! And what a needy guy Prem is! Are you putting us in the eternal woman's dilemma? Do we stay with the guy we need?... do we stay with the guy who needs us??? OMG, this is such a terrible place to be in... I do wish you all the best of luck on your school and exams and everything... but i BADLY hope you will be able to update this story like you have updated it this time... QUICKLY! 😆...Especially if the show turns out to be taking us for a Big Ride on getting Prem and heer together again... Beautiful story.

Originally posted by: sadizzle

prem is so tricky!!😆 love it! - preet's such a sweet guy...whats gonna happen?!?!

maybe preet gets..killed?!?! idk..how are things gonna go down..so confusing!!..how are heer and prem gonna be together?? -

so can't wait for this stuff to be revealed!!

thanx for another wonderful update

plz do continue on with the storyline very soon!

-Sadi*

Originally posted by: Intellienough

OMG fiery Heer and cold prem.I remebered Kuljeet chachi's dialog ...Ek aag ka gola dushra baraf ki tray.
Nice and chilling update.Good so prem is determined to bring back heer in his life.
Update soon

Originally posted by: Thapanee

hey loved the update.....prem has done research...will he find out abt his son??? waiting to know wht happens next??

Originally posted by: bd670816

hi,
excellent update.
can't wait till prem find about his son.
cont.soon.
take care.

Originally posted by: -Liana-

Hey Jaz i was shocked this time it was quiet early &im really very Happy&surprised to see it,now like always u wrote it beautifully but I just Hate it!!!Hate myself for being sooooooooooooooo selfish,Preet is a sweetheart He has everything tht a girl want to have in her dream man but still...............i want Prem to get Heer i cant imagine PreetHeer togather the charecter of Prem of this FF is soooooooo disgust tht i have no word to say but still i love Prem&thts y i hate myself,please jaz help me out please.contineu whn u get much time.great update.Takecare,Best Of Luck for ur all projects,midterms&presantations👍🏼

Originally posted by: sonu0511

oh me waitin for prem to knw bt his son...

amazing updt...

thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: destinny

great part.

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

i jus love the way preet is characterized... so carin,lovin,etc etc....

n prem well he is not givin up for sure.... i guess she'll take up the assignment....

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

the update was nice,, so preet is actually gin to buy the house that heer's has always dreamt of.... that nice.. then wat about prem,, I feel so sorry for him... waiting for the next update and ur PM...

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey jazz wen will prem ne tht aarav is his son????cant wa8 for tht part!!update soon!!!😊

Originally posted by: munam_13

hey jaz sorrry for not commenting earlier but I was pretty busy...this part was amazing... really I hate Prem in ur ff and love Preet he is such a understanding friend...:) post soon

Originally posted by: 268143

hy hw r u sorry 4 da l8 rep as i jst got bk 4rm india a couple of days ago so i only read da last 3 parts 2day 😛 i saw ur updates n was really excited 2 read dem 😊 all of da parts were amazin 👏 cnt w8 2 read more plz update soon n PM me wen u do 😳

Originally posted by: -Rani-

YAY..finally Heer confessed to Preet..not that she had done something horrible but still she remained honest and told about that lil meeting with MR.Juneja..ahh what a relief..u know seeing these BT serials I was lil scared that Preet might come to know from other source and Preet-Heer relation would go haywire..but u did it. yes...honesty is the basis for their relationship...from the beginning...😳😳😳...she owes him that much at least! nothing is messing with the Preet Heer relationship...not if i can help it😳😳

Liked how Preet set up breakfast thing so sweet of him..and also Heer's visit to Prem's place..but the thing is why is Prem hell bent on working WITH Heer?oh no wait..silly me, ofcourse he WANTS to work with her.. ..totally looking forward to the next update!!hopefully I'll reserve the replying spot first 🤔 yeah...i love that place...their muffins are the best!!!...yaar...yeh bhi koi poochne wali baath hai...why else wouldd prem want to work with heer 😉😉😉...next update soon...watch for it 😃

Originally posted by: IndianPari

Thanks to Rani for digging this one up...

*tear*....Reserved...I know I have a lot of commenting to do.... you sure do missy 😃😃...and im so waiting for it 😛

*Reserved for manana* (with a tilde over the 1st n...wish i knew how to put it there...ah, well...tomorrow it is.) lol...manana has come and gone...lol...but take your time yaar...its always worth it 😃😃😃

(please don't hate me jaz...) 😲😲😲 i could never hate you...tum sooch bhi kaise sakte ho@!!!😲😲😲