New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 2

very good, love it..
please continue 😊

Loved it, PLEASE continue soon!
?xXx?

OMG OMG OMG!!!! I just read it!!! JAz Di, u sure ur going to be able to balance to totally awsome rocking FFs together!!! I already try to control my impatience waiting for ur first FF now ur going to kill me waiting for this one???? 😆 Oh god!!!! Haiye rabba kuch toh taras khaao iss kudi pe!

It was a really suble itro. I actually felt like I was halfway into the FF. 👏



love,

komz

CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!

Kya di, dono kahanion mein cliffhanger? 😆 Fantastic entry!!!! 👏 👏 Do continue!!!!!!!Sorry I am in a rush! 😳

i like the story...keep it up and continue soon
thanks for the pm 😊

Jaz!! You and your cliffhangers, yaar! Theere theere maar dalegi mujhe tu!

On a serious note, let me just say, what I love most about your other FF is how very Hatke it is from "traditional"...and, I can already tell, I'm going to love this one just as much, for the same reason. Again, you make me feel as though I'm (VERY SLOWLY, which is usually never the case) reading a novel. I am so very excited about this FF, and what makes it even more exciting is that Heer's got a son. Love the angle dear. Can't wait for more.

Love,
~Payal

wow.. i love the concept and the storyline.. its different... amazing az always... plz continue soon....thanx 4 a lovely part...

oh jaz ear its gr8 one more ff very good i will be waiting for this also eagerly so do update soon dear 👏 this is for u

lov
Tanya

AAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!! * screms once again*

seems like i m fond of screaming, huh? 😉

omg, wht is heer's raaz? she's got a four yr old son? wht happened in London, Heer? 😃

prem's an antagonist? how did this happen? 😕

luved it! update soon! add me to ur PM list! 😃