FF Premeer are married Finally!!! Part 8 on pg 23 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u soooo much, i am glad u all liked it. and ghia sorry if u struggled finding it. i'll surely put the page no next time. and samm thank god finally u found it.sorry for the trouble yaar.i'll sed u the link next time.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i enjoy reading ur story u made me relax thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u all for the lovely replies. i really appreciate u comments. keep giving me ur lovely comments. i luv reading them.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Great chapter, please continue soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aaaawwwwww that was rlly adorable iqra...i enjoyed reading it ugh that evil chachi why wont she just die...anywayz i loved the cute scenes between prem and heer!! so cccuuuuutttttttteeeeeee!!!! srry im kinda hyper lolz by the i have a request can you make the font larger so its easier to read since its pretty long [which is very gud] nd yea other than that i have no complaints since it was absolutely awesome! please update the nxt part soon and please if u can pm me wen its up? thnx a lot hope u cont soon!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi every1, sorry for the delay. I updated part 3.thank u all for the lovely comments. Plzzzz comment on this one as well. I hope u al like it..enjoy.

Recap: prem and heer hugged.

Part 3.

Prem is now thinking how to get to that person who is behind all og the misunderstandings.

He passes by daljeet's room and hears someone talking..

Dj: nahi chorongi!nahi chorongi us sheer ko!

Prem stops there, he hides behind the wall and starts to listen.

Dj is talking with ash.

Dj:heer ko to maine sab ki nazron mein gira hi diya, bas ub uss ke aur prem ke durmiyan dooriyan pauda karni hain.

Ash takes out a salwaar suit and shows it to dj.

Ash: mom…….dekho na preet ne diya hai ye mujhe…..kaisa hai….acha hai naa.

Dj; mein prem ki baat kar rahi hoon aur too uss preet key gun gaa rahi hai.

Ash: mooom…ab mera prem se kiya rishta.uski shaadi to heer se ho chuki hai na…aur waise bhi ash to preet ki hai na.

Dj: main tere liye itna kuch kar rahi hoon aur too hai ke uss preet ke piche pari hai…arre us preet ke chakar mein too zindagi bhar kawari reh jaye gi aur wo preet yahan se nou do giyarra ho jaye ga.

Ash: moom..aap bhi na…preet ki shaadi hogi to sirf aur sirf ash se samjhi aap.

Ash exits the room and dj after her.

Dj: arre meri baat to sun!

Prem presses a button on his cell phone with a smile on his face because everything was recorded on his cell phone now.

Prem enters a hall where lalit and gaya3 are having a conversation

Lalit: gay3..meri samajh mein to yeh nahi aa raha ke heer ne aisa kyon kiya..

Gay3 is about to say sumthin but prem interrupts.

Prem: maa…baoji..heer ne aisa kuch nahi kiya hai.

Lalit: lekin brief case to usi ke kamray se mila than na.

Prem: haan..wo brief case wahin se mila tha lekin wo wahan heer ne nahi rakha tha.

Lalit: to..phir kis ne rakha tha…

Just then the family including dj and heer comes there.

Prem: wo brief case wahan dj chachi ne rakha tha..

This shocks everyone.

Lalit looks at dj.

Dj: prem yeh too kiya keh raha hai…too heer ko bachane ke liye mere upar ilzaam kyon laga raha hai…aur waise bhi mein aisa kyon karongi.

Everyone looks at prem with questioning eyes.

Prem: kyon ke aap heer ko sab nazron mein gira kar is ghar se nikaalna chahti thi.

Lalit: preeem yeh to kiya keh raha hai…

Prem: haan baouji mein sach keh rah hoon….aur agar kisi ko meri baat par yakin nahi to mere paas is ka sabot bhi hai.

Prem plays the recording wich again shoks everyone.

Lalit to dj: daljeet yeh sab kiya hai..

Dj: praji mera yakin kijiye meine aisa kuch nahi kiya…yeh sab maine nahi kiya…

Prem: acha to phir aap yeh bataye ke aap ne heer ko kab brief case le jate huye dekha tha..

Dj: d..do..do din pehle.

Prem: achha!!! Do din pehle to heer mere saath goa mein thi..

Lalit: dj yeh sab kiya hai…tum sach sach batao.

Dj:praji…wo kiya hain na ke kuch din se meri tabyat kuch theek nahi hai..shayad yeh meri aankhon ka dhoka ho..

Lalit believes har as usual.

Lalit: yeh sab eik ghalat fehmi thi…dj tum jao tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai..

Dj: jaisa aap kahein praji.

She goes into her room.

Lalit to heer:heer…beta mujhe maaf kardena maine tum par shak kiya..

Heer: yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain baoji…….aap plz maafi mang kar mujhe sharminda mat ki jiye…aur waise bhi isme aap ki koi ghalti nahi hai.

Everything is cleared and everyone leaves the hall.

Scene shifts to premeer's room

Prem to heer: ab to khush ho na.

Heer smiles and nods.

Heer: haan…lekin tum ne…who..recording..kaise.

Prem: heeeer! Tum ne apne pati ko samajh kiya rakha hai……bas thoda sa dimaagh istamal kiya aur hogaya kaam.

Heer: prem…thank u.

Prem: no problem

Heer: waise …agar aaj tum na hote to pata nahi kiya hota.

Prem: arre yaar..tum bhi na…koi itni badi problem thodi na thi…….anything for u.

Heer and prem smile and share a lovely moment…

Soo that's it…hope u all liked it….plzzzzzzz do comment.

p.s: if anyone wants me to pm them for the up coming updates then let me know.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am sooooo glad that Heer is proven innocent...awesome update iqra rlly good wonder whats gonna happen next! uugggghhhhh that stupid ullu thinks that dj is always rite he needs to get his brain nd eyes checked!! 😆 anywayz i luved it nd plz plz write the nxt part soon too kay? rinki :]
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Posted: 17 years ago
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YAY! The blame isn't taken out on Heer but still they think it was a mistake.!
Can't wait till the next chapter. . . . looking forward to it!
Please reply soon!
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Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was GREAT hun....superb! amazing!!!!!👏🏻
awwwww our prem knows how to save heer...keep up the jasoos work prem....Thumbs%20Up
wht kind of stupid exuse was that...Confusedmy eyes are tired and i am tired that why i put the breifcase in heer's room..Stern%20Smilefirst of all where the hell she get that breifcase from...Confused were you sleep walking and got it from lallu's room...Stern%20Smilekya ladki hai yeh daljeet...sweetie daljeet come up with some logically good exuses...how stupid of you...😆 Prem gaver her the answer...LOVED IT!!!!😆
with daljeet lallu is stupid too...kya kabhi wooh skool nahi gaya tha...Confusedno common sense...hahahhaha....😆
it was awesome hun!!!! 😉continue soon!!!😜 its great!!! 😀AND DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT QUITTING OKAY!😉 😜its going great!!!!🥰
Just loved DJ's exuse...😆it was funny...come up with some more funny things like that so I can make fun of DJ and Lallu...simply love doing it😆

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