FF Premeer are married Finally!!! Part 8 on pg 23 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awesome update 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 . I was happy that daljeet was exposed but then lalit spoiled it all. cute prem and heer scene.... that made up for it. plz PM me if u update again. thanks and update soon 🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice dear very gud plsssssssss do cont soon
i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
thank u soo much all of u.
4pm rocks.., i amglad u liked it jankidi......and don't worry i am not quiting it. thanks for the appreciation. would u like me to pm u for further parts.
4rinki...thank u sooo much rinki...i'll update it till the next week.
4sunayna...thank u sooo much sunayna....i'll surely update it as soon as i get gud ideas...
4ghia...thankusoo much ghia...and i might cum up with sum more cute premeer scenes.
4tanya..thanku soo much.........tanyaa would u like me to pm u for the upcuming updates..
thank u guys for ur lovely comments i just luv reading them....
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
hiiiiiiiii iqra!
i m so glad prem proved her innocent!
how stupid is Lallu! Dead
and tht DJ, kick her outta the house soon!
luuuuuvvvvvveeeddd it!
update soon!
Luv,
Sam!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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4 sam: thank u sooo much...i'l try to kick dj out of the house.......and ya iknow how stupid lajeet is...i'll try to add more stupid fool scenes of laljeet.

4zenia:thank u sooo much zenia...would u like me to pm u for the upcomming updates..
thank u all for the lovely comments.
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi iqra.I just read all the parts n they r amazing👏.Continue soon😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
wow, that was awesome, from the beginning till part 3. Can't wait for you to continue writing. 👍🏼

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Posted: 17 years ago
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4 shareen: thanks yaar...i'll update as soon as i finish part 4 i am working on it...thanks once again.
4 zainab(bigj66): thanks zainab..i am glad u liked it....i'll continue soon.
4 nikita: thanks nikita....i'll surely update soon..
thank u guys sooooooooooooooooo much for ur appreciation....
and i'll pm to every one here for the next up date....well i'll try to pm..if i had time...
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great update please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys….i updated my 4th part of the ff…plz do comment….hope u like it.

Recap: prem saved heer from being insulted. Heer thanks him.

Part 4

dj is very mad on prem for saving heer and on heer for not being insulted.

Dj thinks: har baar…har bar yeh prem beech mein tapak parta hai….uss heer ke liye…lekin too bhool raha hai ke too dj se panga le raha hai..dj se…maine bhi heer ko iss ghar se naa nikal waya na to mera naam bhi daljeet nahi.

Ok guys premeer are married but preet is still using ash., cuz he knows that his bhai and bhabi won't rest in peace until that dj chaachi is there..

Ash told preet all about dj's plans that dhe'll kick heer out of the house.

While dj is thinking ash and preet come in and preet interrupts dj.

Preet: kiya hua dj chaachi…

Which surprises dj as usual.

Dj; h..haan.

Preet: kiya soch rahi hain..

Dj: k..kuch..kuch nahi.

Preet: waise chaachi eik baat kahoon…maine suna hai ke , koi heer bhabi ko iss ghar se nikalwana chahta hai.

dj: arre..beta preet..aisi koi baat nahi hai ..tujhe zaroor koi ghalat fehmi hui hogi…

preet: iska matlab hai ke aap use jaanti hain.

Dj: n..nahimaine aisa kab kaha….

Preet: khair…wo koi bhi ho, main heer bhabi ko is ghar se kaise jaane de sakta hoon…aur agar aisa hua tu iska asar shayaad kisi aur ke rishte par bhi pare

Looking at ash.

Preet and ash leave as soon as preet is finished.

Dj: arre..meri..meri baat to sun…yeh preet to kuch ziyada hi urr raha hai, iska kuch to karma hi parega..lekin gilhaal to yeh soch(to herself) ke us heer ko is ghar se bahar kaise karoon.

Scene shifts to premeer's room.

Prem is looking out side the window..lost in his own thoughts.

It rainig and prem loves rain.

Heer is doing some work, she notices prem looking outside the window from a long time.

Heer: prem.

Prem; haan.

Heer: kiya hua…wahan kiya dekh rahe ho.

Prem: heer bahar bearish ho rahi hai..chalo bahar chalet hain.

Heer: prem tum pagal to nahi ho gaye ho kiya…

Prem; is paagal hone waali kiya baat hai.

Heer: itni tez bearish ho rahi hai..beemaar ho jao ge.

Prem: oh ho, kuch nahi hota aur waise bhi mujhe koi faraq nahi parta…ab plzzz chalo na.

Heer: nahi prem mein tumhe bahar nahi jane doon gi.

Prem: bas theek hai, ab mujhse kabhi baat mat karma.

Prem turns the other way folding his hand showing heer that he's mad on her.

Heer holds her ears

Heer: acha mujhe maaf kardo..i am sorry.

He turns the other way.

Heer: please maaf karso na.

Prem: theek hai..lekin sirf eik shart par..agartum mere saath bahar chalo to..

Heer: phir wohi baat

Prem: tum meri itni si baat nahi maan sakti..to phir theek hai..

Heer: achha baba theek hai chalo.

Prem grabs her hand and runs out.

Heer: aaaa….preeem!

Now heer and prem are outside in the rain!!!!!

Prem and heer play in the rain and enjoy…

Prem is standing far from heer.

Heer looks at prem and luvs his wet dripping hair and the strands going in his eyes.

Heer and prem look at eachother and smile..

Heer runs to him and hug him…

Now they r apart.

Prem: maine kaha than a ke bearish mein kitna mazaa aata hai.

Just then they hear thunder and see the lightening.

Heer hugs him tightly and is shivering.

Prem could feel that she is shivering, he puts his hand on her head.

Prem whispers: heer….kiya hua..don't worry, tum daro mat main hoon na yahan tumhare pass.

The thunder is over and they both go inside.

Prem is sneezing.

Heer: kaha tha na maine..lekin tum ho ke meri baat hi nahi sunte.

Prem smiles. He looks at her and is mesmerized by her beauty specially her wet dripping hair.

Prem tries to get closer.

Heer; nahi, prem nahi..main sab samajh rahi hoon.

Prem is getting closer but heer is moving back.

Heer stops cuz there is wall behind.

Prem is only 1 inch far from her.

He sneezes again.

Heer: prem…bohat raat ho chuki hai tum abhi so jao…aur waise bhi tumhari tabayat theek nahi hai..

Prem: heeer…meri tabayat theek hai…

And he sneezes ahain.

Heer: tum eik min ruko mein abhi ayi.

She cums back with a glass of kara in her hands.

Heer: yeh lo, ise pi lo theek ho jao ge.

Prem takes the glass from her and his hand touched her's.

Heer felt it warm.

Heer touches prem's fore head, which she feels very warm.

Heer: arre..prem tumhe to bohat tez bukhaar ho raha hai…tum let jao mein patiyaan rakh deti hoon.

She holds his shoulders and takes him to the bed.

Heer: chalo ab let jao mein abhi patiyaan lati hoon.

Heer is at to go just then prem holds her hand.

Prem; tum mere liye itna pareshaan mat ho mein theek hoon.

Heer: tumhi to mere sab kuch ho..tumhari fikar kasie naa karoon..aur waise bhi main tumhare liye pareshaan nahi hoon..yeh to mera farz hai.

Prem smiles.

Heer; main abhi ayi haan.

Heer goes.

That's it for this week, I'll update the next part next week…hope u guys like this one.

And plz comment….and I have more p scenes stored in my bank!

p.s. tell me if u want me to pm u for the upcoming updates, so that I can add u in my pm list.

And any type of suggestions are most welcum.

Luv iqra

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