new FF:~ 'HAAL-E-DIL' Prt 10 pg 10 - Page 3

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by da way thora long hona chahye tum bht aaacha likhte ho 👏

Part 5 (This one is also short please bear with me I don't have time)

Heer: Prem chodo mujhe please chale jao... (somehow she manages to get free of Prem's strong hold) "Saare fasaad ki jad to mai hi hoon... pata nahi kyun Ma bauji ne aise kaha tha...Kyun unhone mujhe ek aise insaan ka khwaab dikhaya jiska milan mujhse hona na mumkin hai...chachi ji theek kehti hain..mai MANHOONS hoon...jiski zindagi mein jao use barbaad kar deti hoon...

TUM CHALE JAO KAHA NA MAINE CHALE JAO...(she screams at Prem)

Prem: Yeh kya Pagalpan hai heer tum hosh mein to ho?? yeh kya bolrahi ho tum?

Heer: Hosh!!! hosh mein to ab aayi hoon main...kya mila us insaan ka zindagi bhar intezaar
karke mujhe...kuch bhi to nahi...ulta uski bhi zindagi barbaad kardi maine... sach kaha tumne Main hoon Pagal HOON main PAAGAL!! jo pichle 15 saalo se us Prem ka Intezaar karrahi thi...jisko mere Ma Bauji ne mere liye chuna tha...

Prem is stunned to hear what HEER just said!!!

Heer: Zindagi ne aur mere apno ne
mujhe bahut dhoke diye.. lekin ab mujh mein aur himmat nahi hain..
Heer goes to Prem and hold him by his shirt's Collar

NAHI HAIN MUJHME AUR HIMMAT SUNA TUMNE....NAHI HAI... NAHI HAI...

Heer: Kyun Prem Kyun?...( Kyun tum aur tumhare bauji ne mere bauji ka dil dukhaya... kyun nahi apna waada nibhaya Heer kneels down infront of Prem... crying Kyun hamein akela choda diya.. Nahi tum mujhse shaadi karne ke liye inkaar karte aur nahi Manmeet se meri sagaaai hoti ...(crying)


Prem: (sobbing by now...and thinking Heer... yeh wahi Heer hai jise Bauji ne mere liye chuna tha...)
Heer gets up and runs away from him...and Prem was shocked immensly..

wow..that was GREAT!!!
finally prem knows the truth..wonder whts next..????
continue soon..and next time plz make it little bit longer 😳
that was awesome hun..keep up the good work..just loved this part.. 😳 👏

👏 👏 👏 very nice very yaar uffffffff i will be waiting update it i know u will next wek but i will be waiting

hey
thanks for the pm sweety
this part was simply wow n mindblowing part
i was toatlly bowled over by it ................

finally truth is out.......... holding ma breath wat will happen next............

do cont soon......... do pm me when u will cont........... & thnx 4 da pm

it was awesome pls update next part soon
can't wait anymore👏 u r great 👏 👏

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aight..then will wait for you till you update...

but plz do it SOON!!!

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:~~Part 6~~:

Prem is all shattered to hear this from heer...just then Meher comes..

Meher: Di ko kya hogayawoh aise kyun chaligayi....? boliye na Prem ji...AAp kuch bolte kyun nahi..?

Prem: (in a low tone..) Tumhare bauji ka kya naam hai?

Meher: (she is all stunned..hearing this )ji.. ap... aap yeh kyun puch rahe hain...?

Prem: Maine jo sawaal kiya hain mujhe uska jawaab chahiye...Meher mujhe batao tumhare bauji ka kya naam hain???? aur sach sach bataana...BATAAO!

Meher: ji .. woh.. Bal.. Balraaj Maan..
Prem's eyes opened wide and tears stopped falling from his eyes...he didn't know what to say.. He was just SHOCKED..

Meher: ji haan yeh sach hai... hum Balraaj Maan ki betiyaan hai.. wahi balraaj Maan jisse aapke bauji behat nafrat karte hain.. wahi Balraj Maan jiski Beti Heer ki shaadi aapse bachpan mein hi tai ho chuki thi...lekin aap aap logon ne hamare ma bauji ko bahut dukh diya... kya dosti nibhai hai aapke bauji ne .. apne Dost ko hi Pehchanne se inkaar kardiya..? itne saalon ki dosti kyun yun hi bhool gaye.. aur Heer didi unka kya ...bachpan se leke aaj tak unhone sirf aur sirf aap ku chaha hain.. SIRF AAPSE PYAAR KIYA HAIN...BINA APKO DEKHE AAPKI HOGAYI WOH...KISI AUR INSAAN SE SHAADI KARNA TO DOOR WOH TO AAPKE SIWAYE KISI KE BAARE MEIN BHI NAHI SONCHTI THI..

Prem was confused hearing all this...he didn't know what meher was saying..

Prem: Yeh... sab jhooth hain.. mere bauji aise kyun karenge woh toh apni jaan bhi de denge magar apne dost ko diya hua waada kabhi nahi todenge isiliye toh aaye the hum yahaan par..tum dono ne humse itni badi sacchai chupaai... khair ho na ho ismein zaroor kisi ki sazish hain.. hamein toh yeh bataya gaya tha ke tum dono ab nahi rahe..Mujhe Heer se baat karni hogi ...

saying this He runs downstairs... and Heer is standing near the gate all crying ..

Prem: Heer...

Heer sees prem but turns.. back..


Heer: says to herself.. ab mat aana mere paas Prem ... ab mat tum aana.. mere paas tumhein dene ke liye kuch bhi nahi hain..

taking her steps backwards... she starts running bare foot..and Prem runs behind her..

Prem: Rukh jao Heer... ruko...

Prem: Heer uko meri baat suno Heer... ruko...

without even listening to him she is still runing away from him ...and at last she reaches SHIV MANDIR...

heer hides herself near a wall and Prem comes looking for her

.....next part... to be continued.. 😳 by tomorrow evening..same time..till then take care.. 😊 😳