new FF:~ 'HAAL-E-DIL' Prt 10 pg 10 - Page 2

very very nice...loved it..
continue soon hun..
will be waiting for premeer scene.. 😳

wow really nice these gr8 ff making me easie to pass this weeekend

hey it was awesome......... u left us in the middle.......... do cont soon .... hoping whts nxt

do cont soon . do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm

Part 4

Upon Holding her hand .. Heer turns to Prem ina shock... she felt like a hot current in her hand...

Heer: (touching his forhead and holding his hand.. she said..) APKO TO BAHUT TEZ BUKHAAR HAI... AAP APNE MUJHE BATAYA KYUN NAHI... KHANA BHI NAHI KHAYA ....PURA DIN BAHAR RAHE...APKO NAHI JAANA CHAHIYE THA... MAINE KAL KAHA THA ... AAPSE BAHAR BAARISH HORAHI HAI..PHIR BHI... AAP...AAPNE AISA..

prem puts his hand on heer's mouth..

Prem: shhhh.. bas.. itna bhi beemar nahi hoon main..woh to bas..

Heer: Beemaar nahi hooon.. iska kya matlab hua?? tez bukhar se jal rahe hain aap... ap chaliye mere saath andar chaliye..
she takes Prem inside holding his hand..

Heer: Meher thande paani ki pattiyan laana jaldi se.. (she makes Prem lie downand starts putting cold water pattiyan.. while Prem keeps staring at her cutely. she makes kada for him makes him drink it..and sits beside him all night.. at midnight she hears Prem calling Ma... Bauji mujhe maaf kardijiye..she is tears and is all upset.. She goes outside the room and starts weeping..

Heer: Yeh sab meri wajah se horaha hai.. nahi mere satth yeh sab kuch hota aur nahi Prem ki shaadi tuth ti...Bhagwaan Mai hi kyun??? (she kneels down and cries bitterly covering her face with her hands..)

Prem comes and sits in front of her.. he holds her hands..(removing from her face)

Prem: Apne aap ko kuch bhi ghalat kehne se pehle tumhe mujhse baat karni hogi..(touching her face) Mai Heer ke baare mein/uske khilaaf kuch bhi nahi sunsakta.. chahe woh khud Heer hi kyun na ho..

Heer: kyun karte ho mujhse itna pyar... kya tumhe dikhai nahi deta meri wajah se tumhara rishta tumhare pariwaar se tooth gaya...woh bhi meri wajah se tum chale jao Prem tum chale jao..Mai jeelongi tumhare bina jaise aaj tak jeeti aayi hooon..

Prem: kya matlab hai tumhara..??
Heer moves away from him but prem grasps her kuch nahi Prem bas tum jao..chale jao mai apni zindagi jeelongi..

Part 5 will upddate later... 😳 😉 sorry guys to keep u waiting but I am busy.. will try and post the next part soon by evening.. o.k 😊

wow..loved it..
finally you have some premeer scenes.. 😳 😉
well continue soon..i'll be waiting 😉

plz do continue soon plz plz
it was good 👏

Too good vey nice
i will be waiting
👏 👏 👏

hey it was terrific........... hoping prem ko saari sachayai pata chal jaye.............. u leave us in the midst hoping wats nxt.............

do cont soon & do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm

just read your ff from the begining.i must it is preety nice.and yeah love the many premeer scenes you have.oooh and wow prem is soooo romantic.heer ke baare mein kuch bura nahi sun sakta chaahe woh khud heer ne hi kaha ho.cho chweet