FF: Ek Paal...Epilogue pg45 Oct 8 09

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Priya

@::Prem$_Priya::

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#61

Okies...since u know I lovee you and your FF🤗....From now I'll just start with my comments😆😉😳...if that's ok😃!!! Okies...I loveedd the fact that you didn't spend too much with their eye locks...and they actaully talked..good start...another one of my fav songs....awesome selection Di...u know what's perfect...okies...lovedd Nancy even more...her character is sooooo perfect...lovee her....and I think her and heer's friendship is really awesome.....I ABSOLUETLY loveeddd Heer+Prem's confrontation...it was really well written and I agree with Salma Di..ur an undercover writer😆😃...and while I was reading the "Mrs.Heer Singh" part..I was listening to a song..and it fit sooooooooooooooooooooooo perfectly....uff the ending broke my heart.....but what's a story without the bad parts na?? well..it was mindblowing as usual...can't say enough...it'll always be less🤗

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prab_rockinn

@prab_rockinn

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#62

I am new to this place jus came across your ff......

The way you write is fantastic.....
i mean the emotions,the thoughts the helplessness all so perfectly described......

would love to read more.....
Great work.....

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#63

omg manmeet is such a jerk!!
poor heer 😭
****Prem to the resue****
>>>after 4 years..hehehe..thank god he came back right?... 😳 ..

omg how is heer going to go home?!?! Manmeet will kill her! 😕

Some many questions..plzz continue when you get a chance!

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tanya

@tanyaaaa26

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#64

oh ! its so nie yaar i just love it
oh now i am waiting for another
keep up the good work dear
and not last but the least its for u 👏

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#65

Di u never cease to surprise me! Pleasantly of course! WOW!!! I loved how that turned out! I was waiting EAGERLY for ur PM. Omg I think I should just stop commenting. Warna u'll get bored from hearing the same comments over and over! You rock! And I'm sure Harper Collins will want it. They'll be begging for it!

komzie

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xXxXxX

@moonlightgurl

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#66

alright, i m so ready to kill muckmeet, accusing heer like tht, on teh other hand very happy tht he said it all in front of prem! go prem! 😛
pummel him to death! 😆
great job as usual!

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#67

Jaz di!! 😭 😭 😭 My computer hates me! I wrote an ESSAY for you......... 😭 😭

Absoloutly great part! Loved the wat how Heer kept trying to save herself....and Prem's anger/frusterations reminded me of the baarish scene when he had a bottle!! 😊 Loves thier conversations!!!!! aww nancy deresves a hug! and MM deserves a tight slap!!! 😡 😡 do continue!!

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rana

@azmatrana

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#68

👏 my my my that was hell of a gud part i really loved it cont soon now i really cant wait for the next part 👏

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Dhriti

@Sweetxsuga

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#69

i juz have one word 2 say abt diz FF..... wow... simply mindblowin... Hey M Dhriti n I am New 2 diz forum... I juz started readin ur FF b4 a hour n i couldnt stop readin it until da last part... I must say u r such a fantastic writer n creative... plz update da next part soon az i cant wait 2 read it more... n ya thanx 4 da wonderful FF...

Edited by Sweetxsuga - 17 years ago

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#70

first of all jaz wanna say say sorry ''*holding ears*'' for not commenting on your previous update.now bhoj uttar gaya........absabse pehle awesome update do i need to repeat myself.yaar finally you have a friend who trully understands heer's takleef 👏 👏 ..so hats off to nancy(you know somhow she reminds me of my best friend.)love the lines you give to the characters.aur realistic lagta hai yeh ff.hats for for making prem learn of the truth about the abuse that heer gets subjected to from manmeet.ab toh manmeet ki kher nahi.what they say in hindi.......apne per mein khud kulati marna 😆 😆 .awesome just awesome.next update ka intezaar rahega
p.s ..i still think you will do wonders as a writer

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