FF: Ek Paal...Epilogue pg45 Oct 8 09

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#311

👏What a beautiful end!!!Great Job Jaz ki Bhoot😉👍🏼Jo Kam Jaz Nehi kar pai vo kam tum ne kar dia👏well done,im xtremely sorry tht i dont stay with ur FF with the whole journey but still i loved this FF though i didnt read part 1-14 but i ll read that later whn ll get free time,as i can sence tht there must b some bitter moments when PH where not to gather,looking forword to the epilogue 😳Takecare & i ll b sticking with Heer's Secret from the first to till the end😃

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silpa

@SILPA8

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#312

👏 really mind blowing part...it is FANTABULOUS...and Jaz booth plz go to ekta and tell her how to narrate characters and hoe to module a love story...i feel in her whole life time...she never come up with such a beautiful EK PAL...really gr8 jobbb....waiting for ur Epilogue...

ALL THE BEST for ur next running FF...

~silpi

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#313

👏awesome update jaz.or should i say jaz ki bhoot.cant believe this is the last part.but as they all good thingd must come to an end but i know fikar not ab now you promised with another ff so no problem.
comimg to the ff loved the update as usual.can imagine the chaos that happened in planning the wedding with nancy and meher around.aww prem couldnt handle not seeing heer and that too for three days,but when you have bodyguards like nancy it is next to see impossible to even see heer even for someone like prem

loved the darwazza roka scene,it is so much fun and saath saath paise bhi mil jaate hain,but lucky them 2000 each.

and for the suhaagraat even the description made me☺️.but i am glad ki finally this two finally became one and after what they have been through especially heer they deserve this happiness.bas yehi karne ka man karta hain ab inki shaadi hogayee hain

looking forward to the (iwas going to write next update) but epilogue.know you got something grand planned for the epilogue.take care

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zaara006

@zaara006

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#314

WOW!!! OMG!!! I don't know what to say, my heart is literally in my throat!!!!!!! 👏 👏☺️

I just say Jaz (di??? i think ... i read in one of your posts, you are in your last year of uni, are you??? I'm in my second, so this way you are my di) you are a wonderful, amazing, excellent, magnificent, awesome ...i am so overwhelmed that i can't think of any more words writer!!!! 🤓 🤗🤗🤗

I seriously got no words that will truely express my feelings!!!!! When i was reading the last part in the middle i thought it would be really nice if you finished the ff after their marriage/ consumation and was happy at the fact that you did!!!! I must say you created a magical moment towards the end that we premeer fans would have wanted to see agilmpse of in the serail... but oh well at least we got to see it here!!!!! 😉 😃

First when i saw your ff i thought of checking it out as, as you know i thoroughly enjoy your CRs, after reading the first part i was hooked... it took me a week to finish reading all of it, fitting it around uni work and being around the house. All i have to say is that it was completely worth it!!!!!as i didn't have to wait aaaagggggeeeeesssss for you to update all the parts, 😆as they were all here when i read them and boy am i glad that it was like this, the suspence would have killed me... literally!!!!!! 😆 I am a sucker for waiting for something!!!!!

I seriously think you should consider becoming a professionalwrighter or beat ekta at her own game!!!!! I would buy your books for a start and enjoy watching your serials!!!!!!😉 😆

I still can't get over it, i won't even be able to go to sleep tonight!!!!! 😍 😳 😆 Absolutely mindblowing!!!!!👏 Well done, and i know you don't like it when isay this even in the CRs but, thank you for writing this up and giving all of us the wonderful oppertunity to read this magical piece of work!!!!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

I think i have said enough now, speaking of which i can't wait for you to update your other ff!!!! Its killing me already, but i think i will pluck u the courage to wait as i still am mesmorised wih this!!!!!!😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

You are amazing!!!!! I have a new grown respect for you!!!!!!😊

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#315

Hey Jazz, i had heard abt ur ff soooo much..so i decided to check it out..

Its fantabulous!!! have no words for it👏its one of the best ffs i've read..loved it totally...they way u expressed the eternal love of premeer was so beautiful,so pure..loved each n every line of the whole ff..

please write the epilogue soon

Ash

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Reine

@Reine

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#316

hey jaz,

it is really a gr8 ff.

i just read the whole fic in one go.

gosh, i seem to b making a habit of that.

just loved the way u ve described their emotions throughout with the songs. seems like they were made spl. just for ur fic.

r u planning to write the epilogue?

if u ever do write one, pls. pm me.

must say, had a gr8 time reading this ff.

cheers,

sakshi

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#317

hey dear i was a silent reader of your story my name is lekha ishwar and i am glad i commented on your story i have a few points that i would like to mention these are those which i found really cute( OBSERVATIONS)

1. The nick name for Heer( Heera)❤️
2. The way every one got to know that Prem was THE MR PIER Heer spoke about

3. Prem telling Heer that her Mascara was running in the first part😉

4. And THANX for making me (a gr8 premeer fan ) happy

5 . Continue Soon:)
😲

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#318

hey i just read ur ff it waz mind blowing so real OMG finally everything worked out fine im looking forward to reading heers secret too

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Lilsasha (Shab)

@lilsasha

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#319

Hi Dear,

Just read the 1st Chapter and all I wanna do is................👏

I was reading it and living it.........

While reading, i played all those songs you have mentioned especially "Everything" and felt as if it took a plunge right into my heart and soul....

Read so many FFs but this one touched me.........

It took me to another world where there is no worries, no responsibilities nothing but ONLY Love & Trust.........

I always dreamt of having such memorable night with a stranger who I can connect with soul to soul....

Hopefully some day..........😳

Oh Yes Men's Curve is my fav cologne too... infact I keep a sample bottle in my purse all the time cos I love to smell it all the time...😛

Now lemme get back to other chapters cos I cant wait any longer to read them....😛

Once again.................👏......

Thanks A Lot Dear for refreshing my dream....

I will never forget this chapter or to be precise, this beautiful imaginary night...😳

👍🏼 🤗

Edited by lilsasha - 16 years ago