FF: Ek Paal...Epilogue pg45 Oct 8 09 - Page 29

thanx for the pms jaz.... i've been so busy offlate... but then i jus cudn't stop myself from readin the last two updates today....

as alws spectacular work..... the way prem proposes to her is beautiful...... keep up your fabulous work..... i'm at loss of words actually....

Originally posted by: Indian Pari

Hehehe...I actually came back to leave comments this time! 😛 woo hoo...payu...im so proud...👏👏👏...and of course...thanks 🤗

First of all, I'm soooo glad you Finally updated this one! im glad that i am back before one month for this one...but im cutting it really close 😳😳😳

Secondly, yes, I guess now that everything is hunky-dory in your Premeer world, perhaps a twist would be nice...but Prem not want Heer anymore? I don't see that happening - I mean, you're not serious, right? Now that he's got her he may not want her anymore? Thats just silly....and anyway, Prem himself said that now that he's got her back in his life, he's never going to let her go - so sorry, your idea's been overruled. Think of some misunderstandings or bring in your very own 3C if you have to....😆 I know things can't be peachy keen all the time, I actually enjoy the obstacles - thats what make the story. So, gimme whatchya got....I can take it! 😆 *sigh*...i really tried to fool you all...but it didnt work...😭😭😭...tum saab bohot chalak ho......my trick didnt work...😆😆😆...my readers are just too smart...kuch kaarna padega 😛😛😛...and yes...if everything was peachy all the time...that story would be BORING 🤢🤢🤢

I see you've got some time off....I must admit I'm a bit jealous...but, I hope you enjoy it to the fullest....does this mean we will see at least one more update for this and "Heer's Secret"? 😃 I hope so - just the thought is making me grin from ear to ear. haila...sorry that you bubble was burst...senior year of university is really kicking my butt 😭😭😭...and besides...i think is ff is on the way out...😉😉😉...but dont worry...i have one already in the works...so fikar not...😉😉😉

Thanks for the jokes...I needed the laugh. welcome...i loved them...the UPS and all 😆😆

Lambi Judaai fit Heer very well today...as always, it was perfect. its a depressing song but one of my favs!

I'm still sad for Heer at the lousy day she had since Prem left her standing after their big victory...even if it did culminate in a dream come true....😆😳 yeah...who could stand prem leaving them...we are all in tears because of ekta and what she has done 😡😡😡

I absolutely LOVE how you delved into Heer's thoughts today. Love your backtrack, and narration of Heer's 4 years without her Mr. Pier. thank you payu! 😳😳

She thought he must be living his life, happily....and he had thought the same. The two went through the same battle each day, of trying to shun the other out of their hearts and minds, for four years. And now, as Prem says, they've got a second chance. yup...im a strong believer in second chances...at least when people realize that they have done, their mistakes and their losses...but for people who learn nothing...i say...off with them!! 😛😛😛

And For The Record, May I Just Say That I Was Right...Prem WAS Planning Something For Her...I Knew It! Otherwise, He Would NEVER Leave Her Alone Like at a Time Like That.... tik hai meri maa...tu sahi thi...aab award chahiyeh kya...😉😉...if you want just let me know...ill take care of it 😛😛

Loved how you used "Everything" by Lifehouse for them on the pier today...Its absolutely one of my most favorite songs ever, and suits their current situation so very well. Hats off to you simply for the placement of this song. payu...if you remember...at the end of part one...that is the song that premeer were surrounded by before they said goodbye 😛😛😛...this was just tying in part one with everything else...and omg...i LOVE that song too 👏👏👏

Hehehe...LOVED how when Prem proposed, Heer said "Why" and he actually proceeded to tell her why....hahahaha...I could actually see and hear him say those lines in my head....Very Sweet Indeed... wah wah...day dreaming prem i see 😍...dont worry..im right there with you 😉

Oh, and yes...Meher almost gave it all away with calling him "Jij" 😆 i like this meher...more lively than the one on the show...woh meher is mostly dry! 😕

Aaaw, I loved it Jaz....I was expecting a proposal from Prem, so I'm surprised at all, but what made it beautiful was the way you wrote it. (As Always). Nothing extravagant, just a simple, meaningful proposal at their pier....loved the simplicity and purity of it. for premeer the pier is everything...the good the bad and the ugly...its what ties them together...its part of their relationship...😳...totally filmy...i know...but i couldnt help it 😳😳...and yes...simple and from the heart is always better then extravagant and showy 🤢🤢

Loved the proposal itself...really, the song said it all...

And, I LOVE how Prem chose to use the endearment "baby" to refer to Heer....*Swoon* lol...havent seen anyone *swoon* in a while...😆😆 good to see that i still have that effect on you 😛😛

Have I told you recently how much I love Your Premeer? No na? Well, I do. I LOVE 'EM! 😲😲😲...r u serious...no way! i would have never guessed that you love premeer 😛😛😛

I read it 3 times...I'm so content now that they're happy.... omg...for real? 😲

And of course, Vada Raha at the end...Love it....I myself have used it in an analysis before... good song naa 😳

I don't want to say too much - words might ruin the beauty of it...I'm still reeling in the thought...the scene is playing before my eyes...😍 ekta needs to do things like this for us...but woh hai ke...uff...prem aur heer ko juda karne pe tule hai 😡😡😡

As for your "wanting him" when it comes to Prem, I agree completely.

Love Heer's sari and the ring...breathtaking. love it myself...😉😉

Take A Bow Dear, You've Outdone Yourself Again! omg...you are making me blush ☺️...you are too much 😳😳

Thank You! you too yaar...love your comments! 🤗
Love,
~P

Originally posted by: salma_786786

hahahaha two replies by me... this is for the update!!! i know...meri toh naseeb hi khul gayi 😆😆
ahem i refuse to mention how many times i have watch that ande scene 😛 chalo...koi baath nahin...i know...it had to be up there 😉😉😉
those two jokes were hilarious... 'Dad i think the UPS guys wants to buy mum' 🤣 that had me laughing soo hard...and 'funeral director' 🤣 good she said that... btw is the actually a book like that for men?????? i dont think so...if there is...lanat ho uspar jisne usse likha hai 🤬

*happy dance happy dance happy dance* three emotions for the past, present and future!!! what a line... bravo... loved it... 👏 balle balle!!!

things to celebrate... stupid MM (lets not write his full name, will give nightmares to children lol) is no longer here... plz don't bring him back... Premeer have united... MM is gone for good...who phirse nahin aayega...never ever again...premeer are safe 😃😃😃

Nancy was jokes again... Meher nudged her...😆 nudges from friends really hurt 😡😆 are you speaking from experience sammu...did u almost spill something you werent supposed to and got nudged 😉😉😉

Now i know what you meant by me being dead on... flowers, candles, the air, sand, the music from when they first met and danced to and top it all Prem... haila...tu tik toh hai naa...hope you didnt really die on me 😭

This update is by far my favourite... the second half lol... Prem couldn't leave his Heera behind ever.... I am feeling light as air right now because the essence of love here has truly touched by heart... the saree and engagement ring are absolutely beautiful and Heer must of looked stunning... An angel floating on sand 😆... Don't know what else to say... its all romance and thats very hard for me to explain... just know that i loved it and you've done a marvelous job of portraying our Prem from the show... all the 'i love you' 'i love you' lines where just 😍 😍 brought happy tear to my eyes... haila sammu...dont cry 🤗main hoon naa...im glad that you really enjoyed the update...i tried and i must say...not to sound egotistical or anything...but i am rather happy with how this update turned out myself...😳😳😳...kash...mere liyeh bhi koi aaisa karta 😍😍

Where's the KID!!! 😆😆 trying to fool me... soo when is the wedding of dashing Prem and glorious Heer... Great update... i simply loved it!!! 🤗yaar...aage aage dekho...hota hai kay...😛😛😛

Originally posted by: sweetprincezz

very very good! it was awesome update....👏

Originally posted by: ranrags

aww..that was so romantic!!really..it was beautful..I could imagine all the scenes..great work👏👏

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

that was awesome fantastic
so cute romantic
cont soon...

Originally posted by: shabo24

Jaz di!!!🤗shabbu!!! 🤗...miss u yaar 😭

I am hating school rite now cuz its restraining how much time I can spend on IF, am in the middle of an essay, but I had to stop and read, and then since it was soooooo AMZING....had to comment! 😆😆😆...school is never anyones favorite thing...let me tell you...hang in there...ill be honest...it doesnt get better...but it does end eventually...just keep your head high 😃😃😃...vaise how did the essay go?

*does a lil dance* I TOLD YOU!!!! Prem was NOT leaving Heer, NOT leaving Heer, NOT leaving Heer! I wish I could c omment a lil more in detial, but you understand don't you? Loved how he proposed....kaash. are there really guyz like Prem out there? Honestly, the KDMHMD creative team is giving us girls unrelistic expectations in men!! LOLZ! its funny how i got people dancing 😆😆😆,...good good...im there shaking a leg too 😆😆😆...i totally understand yaar...no worries on the comment...thanks for doing this much even...guys like prem are hard to come by...if u get one...hold on! meri tarha stupid maat banna...and let him go

Update whenever! thanks for the leeway yaar...really appreciate it 😃😃

Shabzi (haha green vegetable....Prem "mentioned" me) 😆😆 guess he did 😛

Originally posted by: angel82

Jaz,

that was one beautiful part........ha, I'm at loss of words....what do I say,

simply loved it...I'm still not out of the Prem-Heera world......... hope you are out by now 😉😉...and also since ekta gave us no other option when she killed prem...😡😡😡...but that is another issue altogether 😭

Your unique style of writing is what got me to read your FF..And I must say from the very first part the way you have written the whole story , it seems so real while reading, I could imagine the whole scene...Absolutely love the Prem in your story, he is every girl's dream guy...A true gentleman and a true lover..The way he loves and cares his heer so gently as if she is a doll made of glass...Simply superb...

Love the way you bring out Heer's emotions...it becomes so easy to relate to and we can actually feel what she goes through... i love detail when i read stories myself...most of the time i am left wanting...the authors usually dont go into great detail...so i thought id try it myself...glad that you liked it...😳...prem is a gem...one in a million...😉😉😉...and heer is prems heera after all 😛

Loved their scene at the pier in this part...beautifully written , wonderful song selection, simple yet romantic dialogues - all together it was a treat ....Loved the way Prem proposed... I'm so happy as Prem and Heer are together .specially for Heer....oh yeah Heer's saree and ring were beautiful too.... glad that you really enjoyed my writing...the next part will be up soon...hope to see your comment too 😳😳😳

luv,

Angie

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

beautifully written... it brought tears to my eyes when prem and heer reunited at the pier, it was amazing... they have come full circle with the kiss at the end *sigh* *sigh* so beautiful! awesome part cont soon 👏

Originally posted by: DMGanuthika

Part 14 was awesome.👏 I loved the proposal scene. It was simply amazing. I was waiting for part14 for a long time. Now I cant wait for part 15. Hope u will update it soon. And thanks for the PM.

Karthika😊

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

thank god u updated.the cliffhanger was killing me.but anyways amazing update ,personallhy i likes part 14 the best.amazing story, i was totally hooked to it!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

hey jaz...its being ages that i read ur ff....plz update soon or else...else i ll wait.😆..hehe lols...plz jaz u write soooo nicely, beatifully....i m speechless...rele very gud...awsum ...its very touching...I could imagine the whole scene of proposal...plz update soon....

wid love
PARTH😊